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五、书面表达
只有勇于尝试，才能不断突破自我，取得进步。请以 “Try Something New” 为题，用英语写一篇短文，叙述一次你曾经勇于尝试的经历并谈谈你的感受。
要求：1. 根据提示，写一篇短文，词数不少于 80。
2. 语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁。
3. 文中不得使用真实姓名、校名。
只有勇于尝试，才能不断突破自我，取得进步。请以 “Try Something New” 为题，用英语写一篇短文，叙述一次你曾经勇于尝试的经历并谈谈你的感受。
要求：1. 根据提示，写一篇短文，词数不少于 80。
2. 语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁。
3. 文中不得使用真实姓名、校名。
答案
Try Something New
Last term, our school held an English speech contest. I used to be shy and afraid of speaking in public, so I hesitated a lot. But my English teacher encouraged me to have a try. Finally, I decided to take the challenge.
I practiced every day after class, reading my speech aloud to my family and correcting my pronunciation again and again. When the contest came, I was so nervous that my hands shook. But when I saw my teacher’s warm smile, I took a deep breath and started. I finished my speech successfully and won the third prize.
This experience taught me that trying something new is not as scary as I thought. It helps me break out of my comfort zone and become more confident. No matter what happens, I will keep trying new things in the future.
Last term, our school held an English speech contest. I used to be shy and afraid of speaking in public, so I hesitated a lot. But my English teacher encouraged me to have a try. Finally, I decided to take the challenge.
I practiced every day after class, reading my speech aloud to my family and correcting my pronunciation again and again. When the contest came, I was so nervous that my hands shook. But when I saw my teacher’s warm smile, I took a deep breath and started. I finished my speech successfully and won the third prize.
This experience taught me that trying something new is not as scary as I thought. It helps me break out of my comfort zone and become more confident. No matter what happens, I will keep trying new things in the future.
解析
【分析】
本题为英语书面表达题，要求以“Try Something New”为题，叙述一次勇于尝试的经历并谈感受。解题思路：1. 紧扣主题，选取真实可感的尝试经历（如参加英语演讲比赛）；2. 采用“引入经历—叙述过程—抒发感悟”的结构，确保逻辑清晰；3. 注意规避真实姓名、校名，控制词数不少于80，语言流畅规范。
【解析】
写作时遵循以下步骤：1. 开篇点明尝试的契机：以学校英语演讲比赛为切入点，说明自己此前害羞不敢当众发言，经老师鼓励后决定尝试；2. 中间详细叙述尝试的过程：写日常练习的努力（反复朗读、纠正发音），比赛时的紧张与克服（看到老师微笑后深呼吸完成演讲），最终获奖的结果；3. 结尾升华主题：点明尝试新事物的意义（突破舒适区、增强自信），表达未来会继续尝试的决心。
【答案】
Try Something New
Last term, our school held an English speech contest. I used to be shy and afraid of speaking in public, so I hesitated a lot. But my English teacher encouraged me to have a try. Finally, I decided to take the challenge.
I practiced every day after class, reading my speech aloud to my family and correcting my pronunciation again and again. When the contest came, I was so nervous that my hands shook. But when I saw my teacher’s warm smile, I took a deep breath and started. I finished my speech successfully and won the third prize.
This experience taught me that trying something new is not as scary as I thought. It helps me break out of my comfort zone and become more confident. No matter what happens, I will keep trying new things in the future.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、记叙文写作、主题感悟表达
【点评】
范文紧扣题目要求，结构完整，事例具体，感悟真挚，语言流畅自然，符合英语写作的规范，是一篇符合要求的优秀习作。
【难度系数】
0.5
本题为英语书面表达题，要求以“Try Something New”为题，叙述一次勇于尝试的经历并谈感受。解题思路：1. 紧扣主题，选取真实可感的尝试经历（如参加英语演讲比赛）；2. 采用“引入经历—叙述过程—抒发感悟”的结构，确保逻辑清晰；3. 注意规避真实姓名、校名，控制词数不少于80，语言流畅规范。
【解析】
写作时遵循以下步骤：1. 开篇点明尝试的契机：以学校英语演讲比赛为切入点，说明自己此前害羞不敢当众发言，经老师鼓励后决定尝试；2. 中间详细叙述尝试的过程：写日常练习的努力（反复朗读、纠正发音），比赛时的紧张与克服（看到老师微笑后深呼吸完成演讲），最终获奖的结果；3. 结尾升华主题：点明尝试新事物的意义（突破舒适区、增强自信），表达未来会继续尝试的决心。
【答案】
Try Something New
Last term, our school held an English speech contest. I used to be shy and afraid of speaking in public, so I hesitated a lot. But my English teacher encouraged me to have a try. Finally, I decided to take the challenge.
I practiced every day after class, reading my speech aloud to my family and correcting my pronunciation again and again. When the contest came, I was so nervous that my hands shook. But when I saw my teacher’s warm smile, I took a deep breath and started. I finished my speech successfully and won the third prize.
This experience taught me that trying something new is not as scary as I thought. It helps me break out of my comfort zone and become more confident. No matter what happens, I will keep trying new things in the future.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、记叙文写作、主题感悟表达
【点评】
范文紧扣题目要求，结构完整，事例具体，感悟真挚，语言流畅自然，符合英语写作的规范，是一篇符合要求的优秀习作。
【难度系数】
0.5
