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四、书面表达。
互联网让人们的生活更精彩，但是它的缺点也显而易见。请结合自己的日常生活体验，根据写作提示，以 "The Advantages and Disadvantages of the Internet" 为题，介绍互联网的利弊。
写作提示:
1. How does the internet help you?
2. What problems do you have when you use the internet?
写作要求:
1. 文中须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥;
2. 不得使用真实的姓名和学校名称;
3. 词数70个左右开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
The Advantages and Disadvantages of the Internet
The internet plays an important role in our lives. It makes people's lives more wonderful, but its disadvantages are also easy to see.
In a word, the internet is useful, but we must use it wisely.
互联网让人们的生活更精彩，但是它的缺点也显而易见。请结合自己的日常生活体验，根据写作提示，以 "The Advantages and Disadvantages of the Internet" 为题，介绍互联网的利弊。
写作提示:
1. How does the internet help you?
2. What problems do you have when you use the internet?
写作要求:
1. 文中须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥;
2. 不得使用真实的姓名和学校名称;
3. 词数70个左右开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
The Advantages and Disadvantages of the Internet
The internet plays an important role in our lives. It makes people's lives more wonderful, but its disadvantages are also easy to see.
In a word, the internet is useful, but we must use it wisely.
答案
四、 The Advantages and Disadvantages
of the Internet
The internet plays an important role
in our lives. It makes people's lives more
wonderful, but its disadvantages are also
easy to see.
On the one hand, the internet is very
useful. It can help us learn. We can
search for information for our homework,
watch educational videos, and even take
online classes. In addition, we can shop
online, and book concert tickets and hotel
rooms.
On the other hand, the internet also
has disadvantages. We may have eye
problems if we spend too much time
online. And not all information online is
true. We are too young to tell whether it's
true or not.
In a word, the internet is useful, but
we must use it wisely.
of the Internet
The internet plays an important role
in our lives. It makes people's lives more
wonderful, but its disadvantages are also
easy to see.
On the one hand, the internet is very
useful. It can help us learn. We can
search for information for our homework,
watch educational videos, and even take
online classes. In addition, we can shop
online, and book concert tickets and hotel
rooms.
On the other hand, the internet also
has disadvantages. We may have eye
problems if we spend too much time
online. And not all information online is
true. We are too young to tell whether it's
true or not.
In a word, the internet is useful, but
we must use it wisely.
解析
【分析】
拿到这道书面表达题，首先明确核心要求：围绕互联网的利弊展开，覆盖两个给定的写作提示，词数符合要求，不能出现真实个人信息。我们可以把主体内容拆成两个模块：第一个模块对应“互联网如何帮助你”的提示，结合日常学习生活，列举真实的使用场景，比如学习上查资料、看网课，生活上线上购物订票，把互联网的优势讲清楚。第二个模块对应“使用互联网时遇到的问题”的提示，结合日常上网的实际体验，列举长时间用眼疲劳、网上信息难辨真伪这类常见问题。之后用合适的衔接词把两个模块连起来，对接题目给出的开头和结尾，就可以完成符合要求的作文。
【解析】
1. 审题定位：确定本文是话题议论文，时态统一用一般现在时，行文贴合中学生日常身份，所有内容要覆盖题干给出的两个写作提示，规避真实姓名、校名信息，符合词数要求。
2. 搭建主体内容：
① 优势部分：用衔接短语On the one hand引出，先点明互联网很实用，再具体列举它的帮助：可以搜索作业相关的资料、观看教学视频、上网课，还能在线购物、预订票务和酒店，完全回应第一个写作提示。
② 弊端部分：用衔接短语On the other hand引出，点明互联网也存在不足，列举实际使用时遇到的问题：上网时间过长容易损伤视力，同时网上的信息不全是真实的，年纪小很难辨别真伪，完全回应第二个写作提示。
3. 通读调整：检查行文逻辑是否通顺，确认没有遗漏要求、没有出现真实个人信息，衔接题目给出的开头和结尾，完成全文。
【答案】
The Advantages and Disadvantages of the Internet
The internet plays an important role in our lives. It makes people's lives more wonderful, but its disadvantages are also easy to see.
On the one hand, the internet is very useful. It can help us learn. We can search for information for our homework, watch educational videos, and even take online classes. In addition, we can shop online, and book concert tickets and hotel rooms.
On the other hand, the internet also has disadvantages. We may have eye problems if we spend too much time online. And not all information online is true. We are too young to tell whether it's true or not.
In a word, the internet is useful, but we must use it wisely.
【知识点】
英语议论文写作，话题词汇运用，语篇衔接方法
【点评】
这篇作文结构清晰分明，用on the one hand和on the other hand两个衔接词清晰划分利弊两个论述模块，完全覆盖题干所有写作提示，列举的场景都贴合中学生真实的日常体验，内容充实自然，没有出现违规的真实个人信息，词数符合要求，行文流畅，是一篇符合初中英语写作要求的优秀范文。
【难度系数】
0.7
拿到这道书面表达题，首先明确核心要求：围绕互联网的利弊展开，覆盖两个给定的写作提示，词数符合要求，不能出现真实个人信息。我们可以把主体内容拆成两个模块：第一个模块对应“互联网如何帮助你”的提示，结合日常学习生活，列举真实的使用场景，比如学习上查资料、看网课，生活上线上购物订票，把互联网的优势讲清楚。第二个模块对应“使用互联网时遇到的问题”的提示，结合日常上网的实际体验，列举长时间用眼疲劳、网上信息难辨真伪这类常见问题。之后用合适的衔接词把两个模块连起来，对接题目给出的开头和结尾，就可以完成符合要求的作文。
【解析】
1. 审题定位：确定本文是话题议论文，时态统一用一般现在时，行文贴合中学生日常身份，所有内容要覆盖题干给出的两个写作提示，规避真实姓名、校名信息，符合词数要求。
2. 搭建主体内容：
① 优势部分：用衔接短语On the one hand引出，先点明互联网很实用，再具体列举它的帮助：可以搜索作业相关的资料、观看教学视频、上网课，还能在线购物、预订票务和酒店，完全回应第一个写作提示。
② 弊端部分：用衔接短语On the other hand引出，点明互联网也存在不足，列举实际使用时遇到的问题：上网时间过长容易损伤视力，同时网上的信息不全是真实的，年纪小很难辨别真伪，完全回应第二个写作提示。
3. 通读调整：检查行文逻辑是否通顺，确认没有遗漏要求、没有出现真实个人信息，衔接题目给出的开头和结尾，完成全文。
【答案】
The Advantages and Disadvantages of the Internet
The internet plays an important role in our lives. It makes people's lives more wonderful, but its disadvantages are also easy to see.
On the one hand, the internet is very useful. It can help us learn. We can search for information for our homework, watch educational videos, and even take online classes. In addition, we can shop online, and book concert tickets and hotel rooms.
On the other hand, the internet also has disadvantages. We may have eye problems if we spend too much time online. And not all information online is true. We are too young to tell whether it's true or not.
In a word, the internet is useful, but we must use it wisely.
【知识点】
英语议论文写作，话题词汇运用，语篇衔接方法
【点评】
这篇作文结构清晰分明，用on the one hand和on the other hand两个衔接词清晰划分利弊两个论述模块，完全覆盖题干所有写作提示，列举的场景都贴合中学生真实的日常体验，内容充实自然，没有出现违规的真实个人信息，词数符合要求，行文流畅，是一篇符合初中英语写作要求的优秀范文。
【难度系数】
0.7
