任务情境
假如你叫李华,根据下列提示给你的朋友John写一封电子邮件,60词左右。
提示:
1. 时间:晴朗的sunny星期日早晨。
2. 地点:人民广场People's Square。
3. 场景:有的人在跳舞,有的人在跑步,一些年轻人在打篮球,一些孩子在骑自行车……,所有人都玩得很开心。
思路点拨
1. 人称:第三人称
2. 时态:现在进行时和一般现在时
3. 结构:

素材积累
1. 主题词块
①骑自行车
②打排球
③清洗餐具
④看电影
⑤做作业
⑥过节
⑦玩得高兴
⑧盼望
⑨开车把某人送到某处
⑩参加
2. 句型仿写
①—What are you doing at the moment?
—I'm doing my homework.教材p.34 1d
句型:—What is / are sb doing at the moment?
—Sb am / is / are doing sth.
仿写:——那位女士此时此刻在做什么?
——她在跳舞。
②It's great to hear your voice!教材p.35 2a
句型:It's+形容词+to do sth.
仿写:在早晨锻炼很棒。
③I am looking forward to seeing you soon!教材p.37 3c
句型:look forward to doing sth
仿写:我期待着收到你的邮件。
连句成篇

【主题写作·迁移】
【素材积累】
1. 主题词块
①ride a bike / ride bikes
②play volleyball ③wash dishes
④watch a film ⑤do homework
⑥have a holiday
⑦have fun / have a great time
⑧look forward to ⑨drop off
⑩take part in
2. 句型仿写
①—What is the woman doing at the
moment?
—She is dancing.
②It's great to exercise in the morning.
③I'm looking forward to getting your email.
【连句成篇】
Dear John,
Today is Sunday and it is sunny in the
morning. There are many people in People's
Square. Let me tell you what they are doing.
Look! What is the woman doing at the
moment? She is dancing. Some people are
running. Some young men are playing
basketball. Some children are riding bikes.
It's great to exercise in the morning. All of
them are having fun.
What do you usually do on Sunday
mornings? Do you like to exercise? I'm
looking forward to getting your email.
Yours,
Li Hua

【分析】首先明确写作任务是给朋友John写一封符合要求的电子邮件，需依据思维导图的三个结构展开：开篇点题（说明时间、地点及写作目的）、主体介绍（用现在进行时描述不同人群的活动）、结尾询问对方情况并期待回信。要注意人称用第三人称，时态以现在进行时为主，结合积累的词块和句型，确保内容完整、结构清晰。
【解析】第一步：开篇点题，点明时间（晴朗的周日早晨）、地点（人民广场），说明写作目的是介绍人们的活动；第二步：主体部分，用现在进行时描述不同人群的活动，如女士在跳舞、一些人跑步、年轻人打篮球、孩子骑自行车等，体现场景；第三步：结尾询问对方周日早晨的活动，运用积累的句型表达期待回信，同时加入“have fun”体现大家的状态，控制字数在要求范围内。
【答案】Dear John,
Today is Sunday and it is sunny in the morning. There are many people in People's Square. Let me tell you what they are doing.
Look! What is the woman doing at the moment? She is dancing. Some people are running. Some young men are playing basketball. Some children are riding bikes. It's great to exercise in the morning. All of them are having fun.
What do you usually do on Sunday mornings? Do you like to exercise? I'm looking forward to getting your email.
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】英语书信写作、现在进行时、主题词块运用
【点评】这篇作文结构清晰，严格遵循思维导图要求，时态运用准确，内容完整，语言流畅，符合写作任务的各项要求，是一篇优秀的范文。
【难度系数】0.5