——介绍某个节日
佳作赏析
春节就要到了,你会在春节期间做哪些事呢?请以“At the Spring Festival”为题写一篇短文,不少于60词。
At the Spring Festival
The Spring Festival is the most
important festival in China. We also call it
Chinese New Year. It's in January or
February. Before Chinese New Year's Day,
we often clean the house and put fu on our
doors. On Chinese New Year's Eve, we get
together and have a big dinner. We eat
jiaozi. On Chinese New Year's Day, We
watch a lion dance. We also visit our friends
and get red packets. I love this festival.
小试身手
佳作赏析
春节就要到了,你会在春节期间做哪些事呢?请以“At the Spring Festival”为题写一篇短文,不少于60词。
At the Spring Festival
The Spring Festival is the most
important festival in China. We also call it
Chinese New Year. It's in January or
February. Before Chinese New Year's Day,
we often clean the house and put fu on our
doors. On Chinese New Year's Eve, we get
together and have a big dinner. We eat
jiaozi. On Chinese New Year's Day, We
watch a lion dance. We also visit our friends
and get red packets. I love this festival.
小试身手
答案
At the Spring Festival
The Spring Festival is my favourite festival in China. It comes in January or February every year. Before the festival, my parents and I always clean our house and go shopping to buy lots of nice food and new clothes. On New Year's Eve, we have a big warm family dinner together. On New Year's Day, I visit my relatives with my family, and I can get lovely red packets from my grandparents. I always have a good time at the Spring Festival.
The Spring Festival is my favourite festival in China. It comes in January or February every year. Before the festival, my parents and I always clean our house and go shopping to buy lots of nice food and new clothes. On New Year's Eve, we have a big warm family dinner together. On New Year's Day, I visit my relatives with my family, and I can get lovely red packets from my grandparents. I always have a good time at the Spring Festival.
解析
【分析】本题为英语节日主题短文写作题,要求以“At the Spring Festival”为题写不少于60词的短文。解题思路:1. 采用“总-分-总”结构,开头点明春节的地位与时间;2. 中间分述节前准备、除夕、正月初一的具体活动,补充细节使内容充实;3. 结尾表达对节日的感受,确保语句通顺、语法正确、符合词数要求。
【解析】写作步骤:①开头:明确春节是中国重要/喜爱的节日,说明其在1月或2月;②中间:分写节前(打扫房屋、购物买食物和新衣)、除夕(家庭大餐)、正月初一(走亲访友、收红包)的活动;③结尾:表达对春节的喜爱,完成不少于60词的要求,语言准确自然。
【答案】At the Spring Festival
The Spring Festival is my favourite festival in China. It comes in January or February every year. Before the festival, my parents and I always clean our house and go shopping to buy lots of nice food and new clothes. On New Year's Eve, we have a big warm family dinner together. On New Year's Day, I visit my relatives with my family, and I can get lovely red packets from my grandparents. I always have a good time at the Spring Festival.
【知识点】英语应用文写作、节日话题词汇、一般现在时
【点评】本题围绕中国传统节日春节命题,考查学生的英语综合运用能力,要求内容贴合主题、表达清晰,是常见的英语写作题型,能有效检验学生对节日相关英语表达的掌握情况。
【难度系数】0.6
【解析】写作步骤:①开头:明确春节是中国重要/喜爱的节日,说明其在1月或2月;②中间:分写节前(打扫房屋、购物买食物和新衣)、除夕(家庭大餐)、正月初一(走亲访友、收红包)的活动;③结尾:表达对春节的喜爱,完成不少于60词的要求,语言准确自然。
【答案】At the Spring Festival
The Spring Festival is my favourite festival in China. It comes in January or February every year. Before the festival, my parents and I always clean our house and go shopping to buy lots of nice food and new clothes. On New Year's Eve, we have a big warm family dinner together. On New Year's Day, I visit my relatives with my family, and I can get lovely red packets from my grandparents. I always have a good time at the Spring Festival.
【知识点】英语应用文写作、节日话题词汇、一般现在时
【点评】本题围绕中国传统节日春节命题,考查学生的英语综合运用能力,要求内容贴合主题、表达清晰,是常见的英语写作题型,能有效检验学生对节日相关英语表达的掌握情况。
【难度系数】0.6
请仿照上面的范文,介绍一下中秋节吧。
要求:1. 主题明确,可适当发挥;
2. 语句通顺,书写规范,不少于6句话。
The Mid-Autumn Festival
要求:1. 主题明确,可适当发挥;
2. 语句通顺,书写规范,不少于6句话。
The Mid-Autumn Festival
The Mid-Autumn Festival is a big festival in China.
It's in September or October.
We always get together and have a big dinner.
At this festival, we eat mooncakes.
We also look at the bright moon at night.
Grandma always tells us the story of this festival.
I love this festival.
We all have a good time at this festival.
答案
(三)写作专项训练
One possible version:
The Mid-Autumn Festival
The Mid-Autumn Festival is a big festival in China. It's in September or October. We always get together and have a big dinner. At this festival, we eat mooncakes. We also look at the bright moon at night. Grandma always tells us the story of this festival. I love this festival. We all have a good time at this festival.
One possible version:
The Mid-Autumn Festival
The Mid-Autumn Festival is a big festival in China. It's in September or October. We always get together and have a big dinner. At this festival, we eat mooncakes. We also look at the bright moon at night. Grandma always tells us the story of this festival. I love this festival. We all have a good time at this festival.
解析
【分析】本题为英语写作题,要求仿照给定范文介绍中秋节,需主题明确、语句通顺且不少于6句话。解题思路:先梳理中秋节的核心要素(节日地位、时间、习俗活动、情感表达),再按逻辑顺序组织语句,确保符合写作要求,同时运用恰当的节日相关词汇。
【解析】首先点明中秋节是中国重要节日,说明其时间范围;接着描述节日里的家庭活动(团聚吃大餐)、传统习俗(吃月饼、赏月);再加入节日相关的故事细节,最后表达对节日的喜爱,形成连贯的内容。
【答案】The Mid-Autumn Festival
The Mid-Autumn Festival is a big festival in China. It's in September or October. We always get together and have a big dinner. At this festival, we eat mooncakes. We also look at the bright moon at night. Grandma always tells us the story of this festival. I love this festival. We all have a good time at this festival.
【知识点】英语写作、节日话题表达
【点评】本题考查学生对节日类话题的英语写作能力,要求结合生活实际组织语句,注重内容的连贯性和完整性,难度适中,适合基础阶段学生练习。
【难度系数】0.6
【解析】首先点明中秋节是中国重要节日,说明其时间范围;接着描述节日里的家庭活动(团聚吃大餐)、传统习俗(吃月饼、赏月);再加入节日相关的故事细节,最后表达对节日的喜爱,形成连贯的内容。
【答案】The Mid-Autumn Festival
The Mid-Autumn Festival is a big festival in China. It's in September or October. We always get together and have a big dinner. At this festival, we eat mooncakes. We also look at the bright moon at night. Grandma always tells us the story of this festival. I love this festival. We all have a good time at this festival.
【知识点】英语写作、节日话题表达
【点评】本题考查学生对节日类话题的英语写作能力,要求结合生活实际组织语句,注重内容的连贯性和完整性,难度适中,适合基础阶段学生练习。
【难度系数】0.6
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