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五、书面表达。
很快就要到世界环境日了,你校组织以"Being a Volunteer of Going Green"为主题的英语演讲比赛。假如你是陈军,要参加此次演讲比赛,请根据以下要点提示写一篇英语演讲稿参赛。
【要点】1. What do you like?
2. What have you ever done for going green?
3. Tell us the reasons for going green and how to do it.
【要求】1. 要点完整,可适当发挥,使句子通顺、连贯。
2. 正确使用时态,语法正确,书写整洁。
3. 100词左右,已给出部分不计入总词数。
Being a Volunteer of Going Green
Hello, everyone. I'm Chen Jun. I want to be a volunteer of going green. I'm glad to make a speech here.
很快就要到世界环境日了,你校组织以"Being a Volunteer of Going Green"为主题的英语演讲比赛。假如你是陈军,要参加此次演讲比赛,请根据以下要点提示写一篇英语演讲稿参赛。
【要点】1. What do you like?
2. What have you ever done for going green?
3. Tell us the reasons for going green and how to do it.
【要求】1. 要点完整,可适当发挥,使句子通顺、连贯。
2. 正确使用时态,语法正确,书写整洁。
3. 100词左右,已给出部分不计入总词数。
Being a Volunteer of Going Green
Hello, everyone. I'm Chen Jun. I want to be a volunteer of going green. I'm glad to make a speech here.
I'm kind to others. I'm willing to help others any time. I know the importance of good manners. In my free time, I like travelling, reading and exercising. I have ever worked as a volunteer for protecting the environment. I have also organized a charity show to raise money for WWF.
The Earth is our only home. We shouldn't drop the litter carelessly. I think it's necessary for everyone to protect the environment. If we work together, we can make the world a better place.
If I can be a volunteer, I can do many things for our environment. I can save water by taking shorter showers and turning off the tap when I brush my teeth. I can separate waste into different groups so that it can be recycled. I must try my best to make a big difference to the Earth.
Thank you for listening!
答案
One possible version:
Being a Volunteer of Going Green
Hello, everyone. I'm Chen Jun. I want to be a volunteer of going green. I'm glad
to make a speech here.
I'm kind to others. I'm willing to help others any time. I know the importance of
good manners. In my free time, I like travelling, reading and exercising. I have ever
worked as a volunteer for protecting the environment. I have also organized a charity
show to raise money for WWF.
The Earth is our only home. We shouldn't drop the litter carelessly. I think it's
necessary for everyone to protect the environment. If we work together, we can make
the world a better place.
If I can be a volunteer, I can do many things for our environment. I can save water
by taking shorter showers and turning off the tap when I brush my teeth. I can separate
waste into different groups so that it can be recycled. I must try my best to make a big
difference to the Earth.
Thank you for listening!
Being a Volunteer of Going Green
Hello, everyone. I'm Chen Jun. I want to be a volunteer of going green. I'm glad
to make a speech here.
I'm kind to others. I'm willing to help others any time. I know the importance of
good manners. In my free time, I like travelling, reading and exercising. I have ever
worked as a volunteer for protecting the environment. I have also organized a charity
show to raise money for WWF.
The Earth is our only home. We shouldn't drop the litter carelessly. I think it's
necessary for everyone to protect the environment. If we work together, we can make
the world a better place.
If I can be a volunteer, I can do many things for our environment. I can save water
by taking shorter showers and turning off the tap when I brush my teeth. I can separate
waste into different groups so that it can be recycled. I must try my best to make a big
difference to the Earth.
Thank you for listening!
解析
【分析】
首先拿到这道题，先明确核心任务是写一篇主题为“Being a Volunteer of Going Green”的英语演讲稿，要完全覆盖题干给出的三个要点：第一步，先承接题目已经给出的开篇内容，先回应第一个要点，介绍自己的相关爱好，尽量贴合环保主题，让内容更契合演讲主题；第二步，回应第二个要点，使用现在完成时介绍自己过往已经参与过的环保相关志愿行动，体现自己已经有相关经验；第三步，回应第三个要点，先说明我们要践行绿色环保的原因，再列举普通人日常可以落地的环保做法，最后加上演讲稿常规的致谢收尾，全程注意控制总词数在要求范围内，保证时态正确、语句通顺连贯。
【解析】
1. 文体定位：本题属于应用类演讲稿写作，语气要积极有感染力，符合校园演讲的场景要求，题干已经给出开头，结尾需要补充礼貌的致谢语。
2. 要点逐一落实：
① 对应要点1：介绍个人性格与爱好，比如乐于助人、日常喜欢旅行、阅读环保相关内容、户外运动等，贴合绿色主题。
② 对应要点2：使用现在完成时描述已经完成的环保相关行动，比如参与过环保志愿活动、组织公益演出为环保组织筹款等内容，符合时态要求。
③ 对应要点3：先点明地球是人类唯一的家园，保护环境是每个人的责任，说明践行绿色环保的必要性，再列举具体可操作的环保做法，比如缩短淋浴时间节水、做好垃圾分类回收等，最后发出共同建设美好家园的呼吁。
3. 通读调整语句逻辑，补充过渡衔接内容，检查语法错误，控制总词数符合100词左右的要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
Being a Volunteer of Going Green
Hello, everyone. I'm Chen Jun. I want to be a volunteer of going green. I'm glad to make a speech here.
I'm kind to others. I'm willing to help others any time. I know the importance of good manners. In my free time, I like travelling, reading and exercising. I have ever worked as a volunteer for protecting the environment. I have also organized a charity show to raise money for WWF.
The Earth is our only home. We shouldn't drop the litter carelessly. I think it's necessary for everyone to protect the environment. If we work together, we can make the world a better place.
If I can be a volunteer, I can do many things for our environment. I can save water by taking shorter showers and turning off the tap when I brush my teeth. I can separate waste into different groups so that it can be recycled. I must try my best to make a big difference to the Earth.
Thank you for listening!
【知识点】
英语演讲稿写作
现在完成时应用
环保话题表达
【点评】
本题结合世界环境日的真实校园活动场景命题，既考查学生的英语书面表达基础能力，也渗透了绿色环保的德育引导。写作时要注意紧扣“绿色环保志愿者”的核心主题，不要脱离要点随意发挥，同时注意演讲稿的语气要积极有号召力，避免使用过于生硬复杂的长句，保证表达流畅自然即可拿到不错的分数。
【难度系数】
0.6
首先拿到这道题，先明确核心任务是写一篇主题为“Being a Volunteer of Going Green”的英语演讲稿，要完全覆盖题干给出的三个要点：第一步，先承接题目已经给出的开篇内容，先回应第一个要点，介绍自己的相关爱好，尽量贴合环保主题，让内容更契合演讲主题；第二步，回应第二个要点，使用现在完成时介绍自己过往已经参与过的环保相关志愿行动，体现自己已经有相关经验；第三步，回应第三个要点，先说明我们要践行绿色环保的原因，再列举普通人日常可以落地的环保做法，最后加上演讲稿常规的致谢收尾，全程注意控制总词数在要求范围内，保证时态正确、语句通顺连贯。
【解析】
1. 文体定位：本题属于应用类演讲稿写作，语气要积极有感染力，符合校园演讲的场景要求，题干已经给出开头，结尾需要补充礼貌的致谢语。
2. 要点逐一落实：
① 对应要点1：介绍个人性格与爱好，比如乐于助人、日常喜欢旅行、阅读环保相关内容、户外运动等，贴合绿色主题。
② 对应要点2：使用现在完成时描述已经完成的环保相关行动，比如参与过环保志愿活动、组织公益演出为环保组织筹款等内容，符合时态要求。
③ 对应要点3：先点明地球是人类唯一的家园，保护环境是每个人的责任，说明践行绿色环保的必要性，再列举具体可操作的环保做法，比如缩短淋浴时间节水、做好垃圾分类回收等，最后发出共同建设美好家园的呼吁。
3. 通读调整语句逻辑，补充过渡衔接内容，检查语法错误，控制总词数符合100词左右的要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
Being a Volunteer of Going Green
Hello, everyone. I'm Chen Jun. I want to be a volunteer of going green. I'm glad to make a speech here.
I'm kind to others. I'm willing to help others any time. I know the importance of good manners. In my free time, I like travelling, reading and exercising. I have ever worked as a volunteer for protecting the environment. I have also organized a charity show to raise money for WWF.
The Earth is our only home. We shouldn't drop the litter carelessly. I think it's necessary for everyone to protect the environment. If we work together, we can make the world a better place.
If I can be a volunteer, I can do many things for our environment. I can save water by taking shorter showers and turning off the tap when I brush my teeth. I can separate waste into different groups so that it can be recycled. I must try my best to make a big difference to the Earth.
Thank you for listening!
【知识点】
英语演讲稿写作
现在完成时应用
环保话题表达
【点评】
本题结合世界环境日的真实校园活动场景命题，既考查学生的英语书面表达基础能力，也渗透了绿色环保的德育引导。写作时要注意紧扣“绿色环保志愿者”的核心主题，不要脱离要点随意发挥，同时注意演讲稿的语气要积极有号召力，避免使用过于生硬复杂的长句，保证表达流畅自然即可拿到不错的分数。
【难度系数】
0.6
