第三部分 书面表达
假如你是李华,你的美国笔友John计划一月来中国旅游。请你给他写一封电子邮件,邀请他来你的家乡哈尔滨游玩。内容包括:

要求:1.须包含以上所有信息,可适当发挥;
2.不得出现真实的姓名和学校名称;
3.80词左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
参考词汇:ice sculptures 冰雕;European-style 欧式的
Dear John,
I'm glad to hear that
Yours,
Li Hua
假如你是李华,你的美国笔友John计划一月来中国旅游。请你给他写一封电子邮件,邀请他来你的家乡哈尔滨游玩。内容包括:
要求:1.须包含以上所有信息,可适当发挥;
2.不得出现真实的姓名和学校名称;
3.80词左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
参考词汇:ice sculptures 冰雕;European-style 欧式的
Dear John,
I'm glad to hear that
you will come to China in January. Welcome to my hometown Harbin.
Harbin is in the northeast of China. It is cold and snowy in January here.
You can visit two great places. One is Central Street. There are many beautiful European-style buildings. You can take a walk and enjoy delicious food. The other is Ice and Snow World. There are many wonderful ice sculptures. You can take photos and have fun playing here. Please wear warm clothes, a hat and gloves.
I'm sure you will enjoy your trip. I'm looking forward to seeing you.
Harbin is in the northeast of China. It is cold and snowy in January here.
You can visit two great places. One is Central Street. There are many beautiful European-style buildings. You can take a walk and enjoy delicious food. The other is Ice and Snow World. There are many wonderful ice sculptures. You can take photos and have fun playing here. Please wear warm clothes, a hat and gloves.
I'm sure you will enjoy your trip. I'm looking forward to seeing you.
Yours,
Li Hua
答案
Dear John,
I'm glad to hear that you will come to China in January. It's my great pleasure to warmly welcome you to my hometown Harbin!
Harbin lies in the northeast of China. The weather here is very cold and heavily snowy in January, which paints the whole city a lovely white world.
I'd love to recommend two top spots for you to visit. The first one is Central Street, where a great number of beautiful European-style buildings stand along the road. You can take a slow casual walk there and taste various tasty local snacks. The other must-see place is Ice and Snow World, filled with quantities of amazing wonderful ice sculptures. You can take plenty of pretty photos and have super fun playing all kinds of interesting ice games there. To keep away from the cold, you'd better wear thick warm clothes, and prepare a soft hat and a pair of gloves. Don't forget to try those special local delicious dishes, they are totally worth a shot!
I'm fully sure you will have an unforgettable fantastic trip here. I'm looking forward to seeing you soon!
Yours,
Li Hua
I'm glad to hear that you will come to China in January. It's my great pleasure to warmly welcome you to my hometown Harbin!
Harbin lies in the northeast of China. The weather here is very cold and heavily snowy in January, which paints the whole city a lovely white world.
I'd love to recommend two top spots for you to visit. The first one is Central Street, where a great number of beautiful European-style buildings stand along the road. You can take a slow casual walk there and taste various tasty local snacks. The other must-see place is Ice and Snow World, filled with quantities of amazing wonderful ice sculptures. You can take plenty of pretty photos and have super fun playing all kinds of interesting ice games there. To keep away from the cold, you'd better wear thick warm clothes, and prepare a soft hat and a pair of gloves. Don't forget to try those special local delicious dishes, they are totally worth a shot!
I'm fully sure you will have an unforgettable fantastic trip here. I'm looking forward to seeing you soon!
Yours,
Li Hua
解析
【解析】
这是一封邀请类电子邮件,写作时首先明确身份为李华,收信人为美国笔友John:
1. 开篇直接呼应题目背景,欢迎John来到自己的家乡哈尔滨;
2. 按照题目要求的信息点依次展开:先介绍哈尔滨的地理位置与一月寒冷多雪的天气特点;再分别介绍两个推荐景点——中央大街的欧式建筑、散步享美食的体验,以及冰雪大世界的冰雕、拍照游玩的乐趣;最后给出穿戴厚衣物、帽子手套的游玩提示;
3. 全文控制在80词左右,覆盖所有给定信息点,语句通顺自然,符合邮件的交际语境。
【答案】
One possible version:
Dear John,
I'm glad to hear that you will come to China in January. Welcome to my hometown Harbin.
Harbin is in the northeast of China. It is cold and snowy in January here.
You can visit two great places. One is Central Street. There are many beautiful European-style buildings. You can take a walk and enjoy delicious food. The other is Ice and Snow World. There are many wonderful ice sculptures. You can take photos and have fun playing here. Please wear warm clothes, a hat and gloves.
I'm sure you will enjoy your trip.
I'm looking forward to seeing you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】
英文电子邮件写作
信息点整合表达
常用旅游场景词汇
【点评】
本题属于初中英语邀请类应用文写作,难度适中,只要覆盖全部给定信息点、语句通顺、符合词数要求即可拿到不错的分数,重点考察学生对提示信息的整合能力和基础英文表达的运用能力。
【难度系数】
0.7
这是一封邀请类电子邮件,写作时首先明确身份为李华,收信人为美国笔友John:
1. 开篇直接呼应题目背景,欢迎John来到自己的家乡哈尔滨;
2. 按照题目要求的信息点依次展开:先介绍哈尔滨的地理位置与一月寒冷多雪的天气特点;再分别介绍两个推荐景点——中央大街的欧式建筑、散步享美食的体验,以及冰雪大世界的冰雕、拍照游玩的乐趣;最后给出穿戴厚衣物、帽子手套的游玩提示;
3. 全文控制在80词左右,覆盖所有给定信息点,语句通顺自然,符合邮件的交际语境。
【答案】
One possible version:
Dear John,
I'm glad to hear that you will come to China in January. Welcome to my hometown Harbin.
Harbin is in the northeast of China. It is cold and snowy in January here.
You can visit two great places. One is Central Street. There are many beautiful European-style buildings. You can take a walk and enjoy delicious food. The other is Ice and Snow World. There are many wonderful ice sculptures. You can take photos and have fun playing here. Please wear warm clothes, a hat and gloves.
I'm sure you will enjoy your trip.
I'm looking forward to seeing you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】
英文电子邮件写作
信息点整合表达
常用旅游场景词汇
【点评】
本题属于初中英语邀请类应用文写作,难度适中,只要覆盖全部给定信息点、语句通顺、符合词数要求即可拿到不错的分数,重点考察学生对提示信息的整合能力和基础英文表达的运用能力。
【难度系数】
0.7
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