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六、书面表达。(满分20分)
某英文网站正在开展以"勇于尝试"为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华,请你用英文投稿。
提示:
1. 描述一次你勇于尝试的经历(包括时间、具体事件等);
2. 说明你在尝试过程中遇到的困难及你是如何应对的;
3. 谈谈这次尝试带给你的收获或感悟。
要求:
1. 词数80~120;
2. 文中不得出现真实的人名和校名;
3. 开头已给出,不计入总词数。
There are many chances for us to try new things in our life.
某英文网站正在开展以"勇于尝试"为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华,请你用英文投稿。
提示:
1. 描述一次你勇于尝试的经历(包括时间、具体事件等);
2. 说明你在尝试过程中遇到的困难及你是如何应对的;
3. 谈谈这次尝试带给你的收获或感悟。
要求:
1. 词数80~120;
2. 文中不得出现真实的人名和校名;
3. 开头已给出,不计入总词数。
There are many chances for us to try new things in our life.
Last term, I tried to join the English speech contest, though I was really nervous to speak in public.
At first, I forgot my lines when practising and wanted to give up. But my teacher told me to face the challenge bravely and never give up. I practised every evening, recording myself and correcting mistakes. I made great progress with the teacher's help.
Finally, I didn't win the first prize, but I became more confident. This experience taught me that courage to try helps us grow—even failure brings valuable lessons.
At first, I forgot my lines when practising and wanted to give up. But my teacher told me to face the challenge bravely and never give up. I practised every evening, recording myself and correcting mistakes. I made great progress with the teacher's help.
Finally, I didn't win the first prize, but I became more confident. This experience taught me that courage to try helps us grow—even failure brings valuable lessons.
答案
六、One possible version:
There are many chances for us to
try new things in our life. Last term, I
tried to join the English speech contest,
though I was really nervous to speak in
public.
At first, I forgot my lines when
practising and wanted to give up. But my
teacher told me to face the challenge
bravely and never give up. I practised
every evening, recording myself and
correcting mistakes. I made great
progress with the teacher's help.
Finally, I didn't win the first prize,
but I became more confident. This
experience taught me that courage to try
helps us grow—even failure brings
valuable lessons.
There are many chances for us to
try new things in our life. Last term, I
tried to join the English speech contest,
though I was really nervous to speak in
public.
At first, I forgot my lines when
practising and wanted to give up. But my
teacher told me to face the challenge
bravely and never give up. I practised
every evening, recording myself and
correcting mistakes. I made great
progress with the teacher's help.
Finally, I didn't win the first prize,
but I became more confident. This
experience taught me that courage to try
helps us grow—even failure brings
valuable lessons.
解析
【分析】
本次写作主题为“勇于尝试”，要求以李华的身份投稿，开头已给出，需续写内容。解题思路：1. 紧扣三个提示要点：①描述一次勇于尝试的具体经历（明确时间、事件，如参加英语演讲比赛）；②说明尝试中的困难及应对方法（如紧张忘词，经老师鼓励后坚持练习）；③谈谈尝试的收获或感悟（如变得自信，明白尝试的意义）；2. 注意词数80~120，不得出现真实人名、校名，语言简洁通顺。
【解析】
根据提示要点，依次组织内容：首先点明尝试的经历（上学期参加英语演讲比赛）；接着描述困难（练习时忘词想放弃）及应对（老师鼓励，每天练习、录音频纠正错误）；最后说明收获（未获奖但更自信，懂得尝试的勇气助力成长），符合词数及要求。
【答案】
There are many chances for us to try new things in our life. Last term, I tried to join the English speech contest, though I was really nervous to speak in public.
At first, I forgot my lines when practising and wanted to give up. But my teacher told me to face the challenge bravely and never give up. I practised every evening, recording myself and correcting mistakes. I made great progress with the teacher's help.
Finally, I didn't win the first prize, but I became more confident. This experience taught me that courage to try helps us grow—even failure brings valuable lessons.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、主题式书面表达、要点整合写作
【点评】
范文紧扣“勇于尝试”主题，完整覆盖所有提示要点，结构清晰（经历-困难应对-收获），语言简洁流畅，符合词数要求，是一篇符合征文要求的优秀稿件。
【难度系数】
0.6
本次写作主题为“勇于尝试”，要求以李华的身份投稿，开头已给出，需续写内容。解题思路：1. 紧扣三个提示要点：①描述一次勇于尝试的具体经历（明确时间、事件，如参加英语演讲比赛）；②说明尝试中的困难及应对方法（如紧张忘词，经老师鼓励后坚持练习）；③谈谈尝试的收获或感悟（如变得自信，明白尝试的意义）；2. 注意词数80~120，不得出现真实人名、校名，语言简洁通顺。
【解析】
根据提示要点，依次组织内容：首先点明尝试的经历（上学期参加英语演讲比赛）；接着描述困难（练习时忘词想放弃）及应对（老师鼓励，每天练习、录音频纠正错误）；最后说明收获（未获奖但更自信，懂得尝试的勇气助力成长），符合词数及要求。
【答案】
There are many chances for us to try new things in our life. Last term, I tried to join the English speech contest, though I was really nervous to speak in public.
At first, I forgot my lines when practising and wanted to give up. But my teacher told me to face the challenge bravely and never give up. I practised every evening, recording myself and correcting mistakes. I made great progress with the teacher's help.
Finally, I didn't win the first prize, but I became more confident. This experience taught me that courage to try helps us grow—even failure brings valuable lessons.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、主题式书面表达、要点整合写作
【点评】
范文紧扣“勇于尝试”主题，完整覆盖所有提示要点，结构清晰（经历-困难应对-收获），语言简洁流畅，符合词数要求，是一篇符合征文要求的优秀稿件。
【难度系数】
0.6
