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六、书面表达共1题，计20分
一项学生体质健康调查结果显示，学生的近视率仍维持在较高的水平且近视越来越低龄化。请根据以下表格提示的内容，用英语写一篇短文，发表自己的看法。
注意：
1. 内容涵盖所有要点，可适当发挥，语句通顺，内容连贯。
2. 不少于100词开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
A survey shows that many students have become short-sighted at a very young age.
一项学生体质健康调查结果显示，学生的近视率仍维持在较高的水平且近视越来越低龄化。请根据以下表格提示的内容，用英语写一篇短文，发表自己的看法。
注意：
1. 内容涵盖所有要点，可适当发挥，语句通顺，内容连贯。
2. 不少于100词开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
A survey shows that many students have become short-sighted at a very young age.
At present, students' eyesight is getting worse and worse. It's reported that about 70% of students are short sighted. There are several main reasons for this.
First, students nowadays get less and less sleep. Second, they spend long hours reading, doing homework, or using computers, which makes their eyes much more tired.
So we should do eye exercises more and take part in more sport activities. Also, we need to develop proper eye-using habits. For example, we should keep a good distance when reading, and use phones and computers less. What's more, we should eat more food that is good for our eyes, like carrots and fish.
In my opinion, protecting our eyes is very important. We should pay more attention to our eye health so that we can have a bright future.
First, students nowadays get less and less sleep. Second, they spend long hours reading, doing homework, or using computers, which makes their eyes much more tired.
So we should do eye exercises more and take part in more sport activities. Also, we need to develop proper eye-using habits. For example, we should keep a good distance when reading, and use phones and computers less. What's more, we should eat more food that is good for our eyes, like carrots and fish.
In my opinion, protecting our eyes is very important. We should pay more attention to our eye health so that we can have a bright future.
答案
One possible version:
A survey shows that many
students have become short-sighted at
a very young age.
At present, students' eyesight is
getting worse and worse. It's reported
that about 70% of students are short
sighted. There are several main
reasons for this.
First, students nowadays get less
and less sleep. Second, they spend
long hours reading, doing homework,
or using computers, which makes their
eyes much more tired.
So we should do eye exercises
more and take part in more sport
activities. Also, we need to develop
proper eye-using habits. For example,
we should keep a good distance when
reading, and use phones and computers
less. What's more, we should eat more
food that is good for our eyes, like
carrots and fish.
In my opinion, protecting our eyes
is very important. We should pay more
attention to our eye health so that we
can have a bright future.
A survey shows that many
students have become short-sighted at
a very young age.
At present, students' eyesight is
getting worse and worse. It's reported
that about 70% of students are short
sighted. There are several main
reasons for this.
First, students nowadays get less
and less sleep. Second, they spend
long hours reading, doing homework,
or using computers, which makes their
eyes much more tired.
So we should do eye exercises
more and take part in more sport
activities. Also, we need to develop
proper eye-using habits. For example,
we should keep a good distance when
reading, and use phones and computers
less. What's more, we should eat more
food that is good for our eyes, like
carrots and fish.
In my opinion, protecting our eyes
is very important. We should pay more
attention to our eye health so that we
can have a bright future.
解析
【分析】
这是一篇英语书面表达题，写作时需紧扣题目要求和表格要点：首先承接已给开头，说明学生近视的现状；接着分析近视的两大主要原因（睡眠不足、长时间看书/写作业/使用电子产品）；然后列举预防近视的方法（做眼保健操、多运动、科学用眼习惯等，可适当拓展）；最后表达个人观点。需确保所有要点齐全，语句通顺连贯，词数达标。
【解析】
写作步骤如下：1. 承接开头，说明现状：约70%的学生存在近视问题；2. 分析原因：一是睡眠越来越不足，二是长时间看书、写作业、使用电子产品导致眼睛疲劳；3. 给出预防方法：多做眼保健操、多参加体育活动，养成科学用眼习惯（如保持阅读距离），还可补充合理饮食（如吃胡萝卜、鱼类等护眼食物）；4. 表达观点：强调保护眼睛的重要性，呼吁关注眼部健康。写作时使用连接词（如first, second, also等）使语句连贯，确保词数不少于100。
【答案】
One possible version:
A survey shows that many students have become short-sighted at a very young age.
At present, students' eyesight is getting worse and worse. It's reported that about 70% of students are short-sighted. There are several main reasons for this.
First, students nowadays get less and less sleep. Second, they spend long hours reading, doing homework, or using computers, which makes their eyes much more tired.
So we should do eye exercises more and take part in more sport activities. Also, we need to develop proper eye-using habits. For example, we should keep a good distance when reading, and use phones and computers less. What's more, we should eat more food that is good for our eyes, like carrots and fish.
In my opinion, protecting our eyes is very important. We should pay more attention to our eye health so that we can have a bright future.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、要点整合、语句连贯
【点评】
该作文完整覆盖所有题目要点，逻辑清晰，适当拓展了预防近视的方法，语句通顺自然，符合英语写作规范，是一篇符合要求的优秀书面表达。
【难度系数】
0.5
这是一篇英语书面表达题，写作时需紧扣题目要求和表格要点：首先承接已给开头，说明学生近视的现状；接着分析近视的两大主要原因（睡眠不足、长时间看书/写作业/使用电子产品）；然后列举预防近视的方法（做眼保健操、多运动、科学用眼习惯等，可适当拓展）；最后表达个人观点。需确保所有要点齐全，语句通顺连贯，词数达标。
【解析】
写作步骤如下：1. 承接开头，说明现状：约70%的学生存在近视问题；2. 分析原因：一是睡眠越来越不足，二是长时间看书、写作业、使用电子产品导致眼睛疲劳；3. 给出预防方法：多做眼保健操、多参加体育活动，养成科学用眼习惯（如保持阅读距离），还可补充合理饮食（如吃胡萝卜、鱼类等护眼食物）；4. 表达观点：强调保护眼睛的重要性，呼吁关注眼部健康。写作时使用连接词（如first, second, also等）使语句连贯，确保词数不少于100。
【答案】
One possible version:
A survey shows that many students have become short-sighted at a very young age.
At present, students' eyesight is getting worse and worse. It's reported that about 70% of students are short-sighted. There are several main reasons for this.
First, students nowadays get less and less sleep. Second, they spend long hours reading, doing homework, or using computers, which makes their eyes much more tired.
So we should do eye exercises more and take part in more sport activities. Also, we need to develop proper eye-using habits. For example, we should keep a good distance when reading, and use phones and computers less. What's more, we should eat more food that is good for our eyes, like carrots and fish.
In my opinion, protecting our eyes is very important. We should pay more attention to our eye health so that we can have a bright future.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、要点整合、语句连贯
【点评】
该作文完整覆盖所有题目要点，逻辑清晰，适当拓展了预防近视的方法，语句通顺自然，符合英语写作规范，是一篇符合要求的优秀书面表达。
【难度系数】
0.5
