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主题写作专项 ＞＞练写作 答案D12
主题词网
介绍学校
整体 外貌
建筑 设施
个人 感受
优选词汇
· big · modern · beautiful · nice · clean · tidy
· gym · building · sports field · dining hall · lab · gate
· board · classroom · library · green space · playground · music room
· special · love · perfect place · relax · have fun · wonderful
写作实例
你的英国朋友John即将作为交换生来你现在就读的学校学习,请你用英语写一篇短文,向John介绍一下你学校的情况。内容包括：
要求:1.内容必须包括上面所给全部要点,可适当发挥；
2.80词左右；
3.条理清楚,行文连贯,语句通顺。
主题词网
介绍学校
整体 外貌
建筑 设施
个人 感受
优选词汇
· big · modern · beautiful · nice · clean · tidy
· gym · building · sports field · dining hall · lab · gate
· board · classroom · library · green space · playground · music room
· special · love · perfect place · relax · have fun · wonderful
写作实例
你的英国朋友John即将作为交换生来你现在就读的学校学习,请你用英语写一篇短文,向John介绍一下你学校的情况。内容包括：
要求:1.内容必须包括上面所给全部要点,可适当发挥；
2.80词左右；
3.条理清楚,行文连贯,语句通顺。
答案
Dear John,
I'm glad you will come to our school as an exchange student. Our school is big, modern and very clean. There are three classroom buildings, a new playground, a large library, a bright dining hall and plenty of green spaces in it.
My favourite place is the library. It has many different kinds of books, and I can read there to relax after class. It is a perfect place for us. I'm sure you will love our wonderful school soon.
I'm glad you will come to our school as an exchange student. Our school is big, modern and very clean. There are three classroom buildings, a new playground, a large library, a bright dining hall and plenty of green spaces in it.
My favourite place is the library. It has many different kinds of books, and I can read there to relax after class. It is a perfect place for us. I'm sure you will love our wonderful school soon.
解析
【分析】
本题为英语介绍类写作题，需围绕“介绍学校”的主题，明确人称使用第一、第三人称，时态为一般现在时。写作时要先整体描述学校的外貌特点，再列举学校的设施，接着说明自己最喜欢的学校场所及原因，同时需运用给定的优选词汇，确保内容完整、语句连贯，字数控制在80词左右。
【解析】
1. 开头问候，点明欢迎John作为交换生来校；
2. 整体介绍学校的特点（big, modern, clean）及设施（classroom buildings, playground, library等）；
3. 说明最喜欢的场所是图书馆，阐述原因（有很多书，课后可放松）；
4. 结尾表达对John的期待。写作时需注意使用一般现在时，运用给定词汇，确保条理清晰，符合字数要求。
【答案】
Dear John,
I'm glad you will come to our school as an exchange student. Our school is big, modern and very clean. There are three classroom buildings, a new playground, a large library, a bright dining hall and plenty of green spaces in it.
My favourite place is the library. It has many different kinds of books, and I can read there to relax after class. It is a perfect place for us. I'm sure you will love our wonderful school soon.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、一般现在时运用、学校相关词汇运用
【点评】
本文符合写作要求，涵盖所有要点，用词恰当准确，语句通顺连贯，时态正确，字数符合要求，清晰地向John介绍了学校情况及个人感受，是一篇优秀的介绍类短文。
【难度系数】
0.6
本题为英语介绍类写作题，需围绕“介绍学校”的主题，明确人称使用第一、第三人称，时态为一般现在时。写作时要先整体描述学校的外貌特点，再列举学校的设施，接着说明自己最喜欢的学校场所及原因，同时需运用给定的优选词汇，确保内容完整、语句连贯，字数控制在80词左右。
【解析】
1. 开头问候，点明欢迎John作为交换生来校；
2. 整体介绍学校的特点（big, modern, clean）及设施（classroom buildings, playground, library等）；
3. 说明最喜欢的场所是图书馆，阐述原因（有很多书，课后可放松）；
4. 结尾表达对John的期待。写作时需注意使用一般现在时，运用给定词汇，确保条理清晰，符合字数要求。
【答案】
Dear John,
I'm glad you will come to our school as an exchange student. Our school is big, modern and very clean. There are three classroom buildings, a new playground, a large library, a bright dining hall and plenty of green spaces in it.
My favourite place is the library. It has many different kinds of books, and I can read there to relax after class. It is a perfect place for us. I'm sure you will love our wonderful school soon.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、一般现在时运用、学校相关词汇运用
【点评】
本文符合写作要求，涵盖所有要点，用词恰当准确，语句通顺连贯，时态正确，字数符合要求，清晰地向John介绍了学校情况及个人感受，是一篇优秀的介绍类短文。
【难度系数】
0.6
写作支架
开头 — 介绍整体外貌 — Hi, John. Welcome to our school. My school is but .
（高分句式1）It looks .
中间 — 介绍建筑设施以及自己最喜爱的地点 — We have . Students play and lots of .
（高分句式2）More
ver, we also have . We always .
My favourite place at school is . There are . It’s for us .
结尾 — 表达自己的感受 — I’m sure . I can’t .
教材原文
school is not big
reat.
of exciting sports
ake place on it.
ents play all kinds
there.
favourite place at
the hall.
优秀范文
Hi, John. Welcome to our school.¹ My school is not big but it’s great.² It looks very beautiful.
We have a sports field in the middle of ³ the school. Students play all kinds of sports there and lots of exciting sports matches take place on it.² Moreover, we also have an art room and a music room. We always have great fun³ there. My favourite place at school is the modern library. There are thousands of ³ books on different subjects in it. It’s the perfect place for us to study.
I’m sure you will like my school.² I can’t wait to³ see you.
①开头问起注意。
②使用并句，使文
③多处使丰富，表
开头 — 介绍整体外貌 — Hi, John. Welcome to our school. My school is but .
（高分句式1）It looks .
中间 — 介绍建筑设施以及自己最喜爱的地点 — We have . Students play and lots of .
（高分句式2）More
ver, we also have . We always .My favourite place at school is . There are . It’s for us .
结尾 — 表达自己的感受 — I’m sure . I can’t .
教材原文
school is not big
reat.
of exciting sports
ake place on it.
ents play all kinds
there.
favourite place at
the hall.
优秀范文
Hi, John. Welcome to our school.¹ My school is not big but it’s great.² It looks very beautiful.
We have a sports field in the middle of ³ the school. Students play all kinds of sports there and lots of exciting sports matches take place on it.² Moreover, we also have an art room and a music room. We always have great fun³ there. My favourite place at school is the modern library. There are thousands of ³ books on different subjects in it. It’s the perfect place for us to study.
I’m sure you will like my school.² I can’t wait to³ see you.
①开头问起注意。
②使用并句，使文
③多处使丰富，表
答案
1. not big
2. it's great
3. very beautiful
4. a sports field in the middle of the school
5. all kinds of sports there
6. exciting sports matches take place on it
7. an art room and a music room
8. have great fun there
9. the modern library
10. thousands of books on different subjects in it
11. the perfect place
12. to study
13. you will like my school
14. wait to see you
2. it's great
3. very beautiful
4. a sports field in the middle of the school
5. all kinds of sports there
6. exciting sports matches take place on it
7. an art room and a music room
8. have great fun there
9. the modern library
10. thousands of books on different subjects in it
11. the perfect place
12. to study
13. you will like my school
14. wait to see you
解析
【分析】
本题是英语写作支架填空题，需结合介绍学校的写作结构（开头介绍整体外貌、中间介绍建筑设施与喜爱地点、结尾表达感受），匹配给定优秀范文的对应内容完成填空。解题思路为：先明确每个空所在句子的功能，再从范文中提取符合语境的表达，确保语句通顺、符合写作要求。
【解析】
根据写作结构和优秀范文，依次填入对应内容：
1. 开头介绍整体外貌：not big；it's great
2. 高分句式1：very beautiful
3. 中间介绍设施：a sports field in the middle of the school；all kinds of sports there；exciting sports matches take place on it
4. 高分句式2：an art room and a music room；have great fun there
5. 介绍喜爱地点：the modern library；thousands of books on different subjects in it；the perfect place；to study
6. 结尾表达感受：you will like my school；wait to see you
【答案】
1. not big
2. it's great
3. very beautiful
4. a sports field in the middle of the school
5. all kinds of sports there
6. exciting sports matches take place on it
7. an art room and a music room
8. have great fun there
9. the modern library
10. thousands of books on different subjects in it
11. the perfect place
12. to study
13. you will like my school
14. wait to see you
【知识点】
英语写作、常用句型、形容词运用
【点评】
本题以写作支架结合优秀范文的形式，清晰呈现介绍学校类作文的结构与规范表达，帮助学生快速掌握写作逻辑和常用语句，降低了写作难度，适合学生模仿学习。
【难度系数】
0.3
本题是英语写作支架填空题，需结合介绍学校的写作结构（开头介绍整体外貌、中间介绍建筑设施与喜爱地点、结尾表达感受），匹配给定优秀范文的对应内容完成填空。解题思路为：先明确每个空所在句子的功能，再从范文中提取符合语境的表达，确保语句通顺、符合写作要求。
【解析】
根据写作结构和优秀范文，依次填入对应内容：
1. 开头介绍整体外貌：not big；it's great
2. 高分句式1：very beautiful
3. 中间介绍设施：a sports field in the middle of the school；all kinds of sports there；exciting sports matches take place on it
4. 高分句式2：an art room and a music room；have great fun there
5. 介绍喜爱地点：the modern library；thousands of books on different subjects in it；the perfect place；to study
6. 结尾表达感受：you will like my school；wait to see you
【答案】
1. not big
2. it's great
3. very beautiful
4. a sports field in the middle of the school
5. all kinds of sports there
6. exciting sports matches take place on it
7. an art room and a music room
8. have great fun there
9. the modern library
10. thousands of books on different subjects in it
11. the perfect place
12. to study
13. you will like my school
14. wait to see you
【知识点】
英语写作、常用句型、形容词运用
【点评】
本题以写作支架结合优秀范文的形式，清晰呈现介绍学校类作文的结构与规范表达，帮助学生快速掌握写作逻辑和常用语句，降低了写作难度，适合学生模仿学习。
【难度系数】
0.3
