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根据下面表格中的内容,写一篇80词左右的短文谈谈中西方文化的差异。
参考词汇:salary薪水,accept a gift接受礼物,unwrap a gift打开礼物
请做: 单元检测(八) 勤演练,汇真知
根据下面表格中的内容,写一篇80词左右的短文谈谈中西方文化的差异。
参考词汇:salary薪水,accept a gift接受礼物,unwrap a gift打开礼物
请做: 单元检测(八) 勤演练,汇真知
答案
【写作实战】
One possible version:
There are some differences between
Chinese customs and Western customs. Firstly,
the topics that people talk about when they meet
are different. Chinese people talk about
everything, even including people's ages and
salaries. In Western countries, people often talk
about weather and sports. Secondly, in China,
the family name comes before the first name,
but in Western countries, the family name is
after the first name. Thirdly, Chinese people
usually eat with chopsticks, but the Western
people often use knives and forks. Lastly, the
ways that people accept gifts are different. In
China, you aren't supposed to unwrap the gift at
once. You can do it after the guests leave. In
Western countries, you are supposed to unwrap
the gift immediately after you receive it and say
thanks.
One possible version:
There are some differences between
Chinese customs and Western customs. Firstly,
the topics that people talk about when they meet
are different. Chinese people talk about
everything, even including people's ages and
salaries. In Western countries, people often talk
about weather and sports. Secondly, in China,
the family name comes before the first name,
but in Western countries, the family name is
after the first name. Thirdly, Chinese people
usually eat with chopsticks, but the Western
people often use knives and forks. Lastly, the
ways that people accept gifts are different. In
China, you aren't supposed to unwrap the gift at
once. You can do it after the guests leave. In
Western countries, you are supposed to unwrap
the gift immediately after you receive it and say
thanks.
解析
【分析】
首先明确写作主题是对比中西方文化差异，需从表格给出的四个核心方面（见面话题、名字顺序、餐具、接受礼物的方式）展开。先总述中西方存在文化差异，再用连接词（firstly、secondly、thirdly、lastly）分点对比，运用参考词汇，语言简洁通顺，控制在80词左右，确保逻辑清晰，符合英语表达习惯。
【解析】
1. 开头总起：点明中西方文化存在差异；
2. 分点对比：
见面话题：中国可谈年龄、薪水等，西方常谈天气、体育；
名字顺序：中国姓在前名在后，西方名在前姓在后；
餐具：中国用筷子，西方用刀叉；
接受礼物：中国不立即打开，客人离开后打开，西方当场打开并感谢；
3. 用合适连接词串联，保证语句通顺，符合字数要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
There are some differences between Chinese customs and Western customs. Firstly, the topics that people talk about when they meet are different. Chinese people talk about everything, even including people's ages and salaries. In Western countries, people often talk about weather and sports. Secondly, in China, the family name comes before the first name, but in Western countries, the family name is after the first name. Thirdly, Chinese people usually eat with chopsticks, but the Western people often use knives and forks. Lastly, the ways that people accept gifts are different. In China, you aren't supposed to unwrap the gift at once. You can do it after the guests leave. In Western countries, you are supposed to unwrap the gift immediately after you receive it and say thanks.
【知识点】
英语写作、中西方文化差异
【点评】
该短文围绕中西方文化差异，从四个核心方面展开对比，结构清晰，逻辑连贯，准确运用参考词汇，符合写作要求，清晰传达了中西方在社交礼仪、日常习惯上的文化特点。
【难度系数】
0.5
首先明确写作主题是对比中西方文化差异，需从表格给出的四个核心方面（见面话题、名字顺序、餐具、接受礼物的方式）展开。先总述中西方存在文化差异，再用连接词（firstly、secondly、thirdly、lastly）分点对比，运用参考词汇，语言简洁通顺，控制在80词左右，确保逻辑清晰，符合英语表达习惯。
【解析】
1. 开头总起：点明中西方文化存在差异；
2. 分点对比：
见面话题：中国可谈年龄、薪水等，西方常谈天气、体育；
名字顺序：中国姓在前名在后，西方名在前姓在后；
餐具：中国用筷子，西方用刀叉；
接受礼物：中国不立即打开，客人离开后打开，西方当场打开并感谢；
3. 用合适连接词串联，保证语句通顺，符合字数要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
There are some differences between Chinese customs and Western customs. Firstly, the topics that people talk about when they meet are different. Chinese people talk about everything, even including people's ages and salaries. In Western countries, people often talk about weather and sports. Secondly, in China, the family name comes before the first name, but in Western countries, the family name is after the first name. Thirdly, Chinese people usually eat with chopsticks, but the Western people often use knives and forks. Lastly, the ways that people accept gifts are different. In China, you aren't supposed to unwrap the gift at once. You can do it after the guests leave. In Western countries, you are supposed to unwrap the gift immediately after you receive it and say thanks.
【知识点】
英语写作、中西方文化差异
【点评】
该短文围绕中西方文化差异，从四个核心方面展开对比，结构清晰，逻辑连贯，准确运用参考词汇，符合写作要求，清晰传达了中西方在社交礼仪、日常习惯上的文化特点。
【难度系数】
0.5
