经典例题
假如你是林华,你的一位英国笔友 Tom 发来邮件询问你学校的情况。请你根据下面表格中的内容,向他介绍你所在学校的情况。

【要求】1.文中不得出现真实的姓名和地名。
2.短文须包括所有内容要点,注意语言通顺、意思连贯、条理清楚、书写规范。
3.词数 80 左右,文章开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Tom,
Thank you for your email. I'm very glad to tell you something about my school.
Yours,
Lin Hua
写作指导
1.本文是一封邮件。 2.时态为一般现在时。
3.根据表格中的内容介绍自己的学校生活,可适当发挥。
写作模板

I study at Moonlight Middle School now. Our school is big and beautiful. There is a large playground in front of the classroom buildings, we often play different sports there after class. We also have a bright library with many kinds of books, I love reading there in my free time. We have six lessons every school day, and we have many colourful after-school activities too. We always have a good time at school. I enjoy my school life very much and I think my school is a great place to study.

【分析】
本题要求以林华的身份给英国笔友Tom写邮件介绍学校，需遵循邮件格式，时态用一般现在时，必须包含学校名称、环境、主要设施（操场、图书馆）、日常课程、课外活动等要点，语言要通顺连贯，符合词数要求，不能出现真实信息，适当补充细节让内容更生动。
【解析】
1. 确定时态：全文采用一般现在时，描述学校的客观情况和日常活动；
2. 梳理要点：依次介绍学校名称、外观（大且美丽）、操场的用途（课后运动）、图书馆的情况（藏书多，空闲时阅读）、课程数量、课外活动，最后表达对学校的喜爱；
3. 语言调整：用简单易懂的句式，符合笔友交流的亲切语气，控制词数在80左右，确保所有要点都涵盖，无真实信息。
【答案】
I study at Moonlight Middle School now. Our school is big and beautiful. There is a large playground in front of the classroom buildings, we often play different sports there after class. We also have a bright library with many kinds of books, I love reading there in my free time. We have six lessons every school day, and we have many colourful after-school activities too. We always have a good time at school. I enjoy my school life very much and I think my school is a great place to study.
【知识点】
英语邮件写作、一般现在时运用、要点整合表达
【点评】
该范文严格遵循题目要求完成写作，涵盖所有内容要点，时态运用准确，语言通顺自然，有适当的细节补充，符合邮件的交流语气，结构清晰，很好地完成了介绍学校的任务，是一篇优秀的范文。
【难度系数】
0.6