典例赏析
假设你是李华，现就读于一所国际学校。最近你得知学校的动物保护社团（animal protection club）要招募成员，你想加入其中。请你根据以下要点用英语给该社团负责人Mrs Smith写一封60~70词的电子邮件，申请入团。
要点：1. 自我介绍；2. 加入原因；3. 今后的打算。


审题指导：
1. 体裁：应用文 2. 时态：以一般现在时为主 3. 人称：以第一人称为主
写作框架：

优秀范文：

Dear Mrs Smith,
My name is Li Hua. I'm writing to join the animal protection club. I am deeply interested in animals, and I have experience in taking care of small animals. I hope to learn more about animals and help the animals in danger. If I can join the club, I will try my best to call on more people to protect animals.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua

【分析】本题要求写一封申请加入动物保护社团的英文电子邮件，属于应用文写作。解题思路：1. 明确体裁为英文书信，遵循书信的标准格式；2. 确定时态以一般现在时为主，人称使用第一人称；3. 紧扣题目给出的三个要点：自我介绍（说明身份）、加入原因（阐述兴趣、相关经验及学习帮助动物的意愿）、今后打算（说明加入后的行动）；4. 控制词数在60-70之间，确保语言简洁通顺，符合英语表达习惯。
【解析】按照英文书信格式写作：开头写称呼Dear Mrs Smith；正文先自我介绍并表明申请意愿（My name is Li Hua. I'm writing to join the animal protection club）；接着说明加入原因（I am deeply interested in animals, and I have experience in taking care of small animals. I hope to learn more about animals and help the animals in danger）；再阐述今后打算（If I can join the club, I will try my best to call on more people to protect animals）；结尾写期待回复的语句Looking forward to your reply；最后署名Yours, Li Hua，调整语句使流畅自然，符合词数要求。
【答案】Dear Mrs Smith,
My name is Li Hua. I'm writing to join the animal protection club. I am deeply interested in animals, and I have experience in taking care of small animals. I hope to learn more about animals and help the animals in danger. If I can join the club, I will try my best to call on more people to protect animals.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】英文书信写作、应用文写作、要点式英语表达
【点评】该范文严格遵循题目要求，涵盖所有要点，格式规范，时态人称准确，语言简洁流畅，词数符合要求，清晰表达了申请入团的意愿，是一篇符合要求的优秀习作。
【难度系数】0.4