Ⅸ.书面表达。
你有过开心的旅行经历吗?请以 My happy trip 为题写一篇小短文。
要求:1. 写出旅行的地点、做的事情和感受;2. 语句通顺,不少于5句话;3. 用一般过去时表达。

My happy trip
Where did you go?
I went to / visited / travelled to...
I took a trip to...
...
What did you do?
I watched / saw...
I climbed...
I walked around...
I ate...
I took nice photos of the...
How did you feel?
I was happy.
I had a lot of fun.
I had a good time.
I enjoyed myself.
...
你有过开心的旅行经历吗?请以 My happy trip 为题写一篇小短文。
要求:1. 写出旅行的地点、做的事情和感受;2. 语句通顺,不少于5句话;3. 用一般过去时表达。
My happy trip
Where did you go?
I went to / visited / travelled to...
I took a trip to...
...
What did you do?
I watched / saw...
I climbed...
I walked around...
I ate...
I took nice photos of the...
How did you feel?
I was happy.
I had a lot of fun.
I had a good time.
I enjoyed myself.
...
答案
范文:
My happy trip
I had a happy trip to Nanjing with my family last year. We visited the beautiful Xuanwu Lake and walked around it. We also ate delicious local food there and took many nice photos. The views were beautiful everywhere. I felt so happy during the trip.
My happy trip
I had a happy trip to Nanjing with my family last year. We visited the beautiful Xuanwu Lake and walked around it. We also ate delicious local food there and took many nice photos. The views were beautiful everywhere. I felt so happy during the trip.
解析
【分析】首先明确题目要求:以My happy trip为题,用一般过去时,写出旅行的地点、做的事、感受,不少于5句。解题思路是:1. 确定旅行地点,用一般过去时的句型;2. 选取旅行中的具体活动,用一般过去时的动词短语;3. 表达旅行的感受,用给定的相关表达;4. 将内容串联成通顺连贯的短文,确保时态统一为一般过去时,满足句数要求。
【解析】写作步骤:① 开头点明旅行的时间、地点和同行者,用一般过去时;② 描述旅行中的具体活动,选取2-3个事件,用一般过去时的动词短语;③ 表达旅行的感受,用给定的相关表达;④ 检查语句通顺度、时态一致性和句数是否符合要求。
【答案】My happy trip
I had a happy trip to Nanjing with my family last year. We visited the beautiful Xuanwu Lake and walked around it. We also ate delicious local food there and took many nice photos. The views were beautiful everywhere. I felt so happy during the trip.
【知识点】一般过去时、英语书面表达、旅行话题
【点评】范文紧扣题目要求,围绕旅行的地点、活动、感受展开,时态正确,语句通顺,符合不少于5句话的要求,是一篇符合标准的书面表达。
【难度系数】0.6
【解析】写作步骤:① 开头点明旅行的时间、地点和同行者,用一般过去时;② 描述旅行中的具体活动,选取2-3个事件,用一般过去时的动词短语;③ 表达旅行的感受,用给定的相关表达;④ 检查语句通顺度、时态一致性和句数是否符合要求。
【答案】My happy trip
I had a happy trip to Nanjing with my family last year. We visited the beautiful Xuanwu Lake and walked around it. We also ate delicious local food there and took many nice photos. The views were beautiful everywhere. I felt so happy during the trip.
【知识点】一般过去时、英语书面表达、旅行话题
【点评】范文紧扣题目要求,围绕旅行的地点、活动、感受展开,时态正确,语句通顺,符合不少于5句话的要求,是一篇符合标准的书面表达。
【难度系数】0.6
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