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话题综述 本单元的主题是“健康的生活方式”，要求学生能够运用所学词汇、语法及句式描述个人的生活习惯，并分析其是否健康。与此相关的写作维度有：①日常饮食情况；②运动与休息习惯；③生活方式中的优点与不足；④改进计划与健康建议。
与此主题相关的命题形式多样，例如：写一篇关于个人生活习惯的短文、给朋友提出保持健康的建议书信等，这类文章通常以记叙文或说明文的形式出现。
典型例题 假如你是阳光中学的一名学生John，请根据下列提示写一篇英语短文，介绍自己的日常生活和饮食习惯。
| 早上 | 中午 | 晚上 |
| ---- | ---- | ---- |
| 早饭(面包、牛奶、……)，步行去上学。 | 午饭(米饭、蔬菜、·
)，朋友们却喜欢吃快餐食品。 | 晚饭(鱼、面条……)，饭后散步。朋友们却喜欢长时间待在家里玩手机。 |
要求：1. 80词左右，不要逐词逐句翻译，可适当发挥；
2. 开头已给出，不计入总词数。
I am John. I am from Sunshine Middle School.
与此主题相关的命题形式多样，例如：写一篇关于个人生活习惯的短文、给朋友提出保持健康的建议书信等，这类文章通常以记叙文或说明文的形式出现。
典型例题 假如你是阳光中学的一名学生John，请根据下列提示写一篇英语短文，介绍自己的日常生活和饮食习惯。
| 早上 | 中午 | 晚上 |
| ---- | ---- | ---- |
| 早饭(面包、牛奶、……)，步行去上学。 | 午饭(米饭、蔬菜、·
)，朋友们却喜欢吃快餐食品。 | 晚饭(鱼、面条……)，饭后散步。朋友们却喜欢长时间待在家里玩手机。 |要求：1. 80词左右，不要逐词逐句翻译，可适当发挥；
2. 开头已给出，不计入总词数。
I am John. I am from Sunshine Middle School.
答案
I am John. I am from Sunshine Middle School. I have a very healthy lifestyle. For breakfast, I often eat bread and drink a cup of milk, then I walk to school every day. For lunch, I eat rice and fresh vegetables at school, but my friends all love to have fast food. For dinner, I usually have fish and noodles, and I take a short walk after dinner. My friends like to stay at home and play mobile phones for long hours. I think my good habits help me keep fit.
解析
【分析】本题是英语话题写作题，主题为“健康的生活方式”，要求以John的身份，结合给定的表格信息介绍自己的日常生活与饮食习惯。解题思路：首先承接已给出的开头，点明自身生活方式的特点；接着分早、中、晚三个时段，结合表格内容描述饮食和活动，同时对比朋友的不健康习惯；最后适当补充好习惯的益处，控制词数，确保语句通顺、符合要求，避免逐词翻译。
【解析】I am John. I am from Sunshine Middle School. I have a very healthy lifestyle. For breakfast, I often eat bread and drink a cup of milk, then I walk to school every day. For lunch, I eat rice and fresh vegetables at school, but my friends all love to have fast food. For dinner, I usually have fish and noodles, and I take a short walk after dinner. My friends like to stay at home and play mobile phones for long hours. I think my good habits help me keep fit.
【答案】I am John. I am from Sunshine Middle School. I have a very healthy lifestyle. For breakfast, I often eat bread and drink a cup of milk, then I walk to school every day. For lunch, I eat rice and fresh vegetables at school, but my friends all love to have fast food. For dinner, I usually have fish and noodles, and I take a short walk after dinner. My friends like to stay at home and play mobile phones for long hours. I think my good habits help me keep fit.
【知识点】英语写作、日常习惯表达、健康生活话题
【点评】本题围绕单元主题“健康的生活方式”命题，考查学生运用英语描述个人生活习惯、对比健康与不健康生活方式的能力，要求学生合理组织语言，适当发挥，符合初中英语写作的考查方向，能有效检验学生的语言运用能力。
【难度系数】0.5
【解析】I am John. I am from Sunshine Middle School. I have a very healthy lifestyle. For breakfast, I often eat bread and drink a cup of milk, then I walk to school every day. For lunch, I eat rice and fresh vegetables at school, but my friends all love to have fast food. For dinner, I usually have fish and noodles, and I take a short walk after dinner. My friends like to stay at home and play mobile phones for long hours. I think my good habits help me keep fit.
【答案】I am John. I am from Sunshine Middle School. I have a very healthy lifestyle. For breakfast, I often eat bread and drink a cup of milk, then I walk to school every day. For lunch, I eat rice and fresh vegetables at school, but my friends all love to have fast food. For dinner, I usually have fish and noodles, and I take a short walk after dinner. My friends like to stay at home and play mobile phones for long hours. I think my good habits help me keep fit.
【知识点】英语写作、日常习惯表达、健康生活话题
【点评】本题围绕单元主题“健康的生活方式”命题，考查学生运用英语描述个人生活习惯、对比健康与不健康生活方式的能力，要求学生合理组织语言，适当发挥，符合初中英语写作的考查方向，能有效检验学生的语言运用能力。
【难度系数】0.5
