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Dear Peter,
I'm glad to give you some advice on how to improve your memory.
I hope my advice can help you. I am looking forward to your improvement.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Ming
Dear Peter,
I'm glad to give you some advice on how to improve your memory.
First of all, in order to train your brain, it's a good idea to do some new things and change your daily habits.
In this way, you can make your brain more active and creative.
Besides, leading a healthy life also makes sense, which requires a balanced diet and enough time for your brain to rest after a busy day.
What's more, I suggest you not being too nervous and staying relaxed, or you can't focus on your study the next day.
Finally, if you have any trouble, please talk to your friends and teachers anytime you need.
I hope my advice can help you. I am looking forward to your improvement.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Ming
答案
习作演练
One possible version:
Dear Peter,
I'm glad to give you some advice on how to improve your memory.
First of all, in order to train your brain, it's a good idea to do some new things and change your daily habits. In this way, you can make your brain more active and creative. Besides, leading a healthy life also makes sense, which requires a balanced diet and enough time for your brain to rest after a busy day. What's more, I suggest you not being too nervous and staying relaxed, or you can't focus on your study the next day. Finally, if you have any trouble, please talk to your friends and teachers anytime you need.
I hope my advice can help you. I am looking forward to your improvement.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Ming
One possible version:
Dear Peter,
I'm glad to give you some advice on how to improve your memory.
First of all, in order to train your brain, it's a good idea to do some new things and change your daily habits. In this way, you can make your brain more active and creative. Besides, leading a healthy life also makes sense, which requires a balanced diet and enough time for your brain to rest after a busy day. What's more, I suggest you not being too nervous and staying relaxed, or you can't focus on your study the next day. Finally, if you have any trouble, please talk to your friends and teachers anytime you need.
I hope my advice can help you. I am looking forward to your improvement.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Ming
解析
【分析】
本题为英语建议信写作题，要求给Peter提供提升记忆力的建议，开头与结尾已给出，需补充中间的建议内容。解题思路：1. 明确建议信的结构，用First of all、Besides等过渡词串联建议；2. 围绕提升记忆力的核心，提出具体可行的建议，如训练大脑、健康生活、调整心态、求助他人等；3. 确保语言准确连贯，符合书信表达习惯。
【解析】
根据建议信写作要求，补充中间合理的建议内容，形成完整书信：
First of all, in order to train your brain, it's a good idea to do some new things and change your daily habits. In this way, you can make your brain more active and creative. Besides, leading a healthy life also makes sense, which requires a balanced diet and enough time for your brain to rest after a busy day. What's more, I suggest you not being too nervous and staying relaxed, or you can't focus on your study the next day. Finally, if you have any trouble, please talk to your friends and teachers anytime you need.
【答案】
One possible version:
Dear Peter,
I'm glad to give you some advice on how to improve your memory.
First of all, in order to train your brain, it's a good idea to do some new things and change your daily habits. In this way, you can make your brain more active and creative. Besides, leading a healthy life also makes sense, which requires a balanced diet and enough time for your brain to rest after a busy day. What's more, I suggest you not being too nervous and staying relaxed, or you can't focus on your study the next day. Finally, if you have any trouble, please talk to your friends and teachers anytime you need.
I hope my advice can help you. I am looking forward to your improvement.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Ming
【知识点】
英语应用文写作（建议信）
【点评】
本题考查学生英语建议信的写作能力，要求围绕主题提出合理具体的建议，使用恰当过渡词串联内容，符合书信格式，有助于提升学生的英语语言组织与应用能力。
【难度系数】
0.6
本题为英语建议信写作题，要求给Peter提供提升记忆力的建议，开头与结尾已给出，需补充中间的建议内容。解题思路：1. 明确建议信的结构，用First of all、Besides等过渡词串联建议；2. 围绕提升记忆力的核心，提出具体可行的建议，如训练大脑、健康生活、调整心态、求助他人等；3. 确保语言准确连贯，符合书信表达习惯。
【解析】
根据建议信写作要求，补充中间合理的建议内容，形成完整书信：
First of all, in order to train your brain, it's a good idea to do some new things and change your daily habits. In this way, you can make your brain more active and creative. Besides, leading a healthy life also makes sense, which requires a balanced diet and enough time for your brain to rest after a busy day. What's more, I suggest you not being too nervous and staying relaxed, or you can't focus on your study the next day. Finally, if you have any trouble, please talk to your friends and teachers anytime you need.
【答案】
One possible version:
Dear Peter,
I'm glad to give you some advice on how to improve your memory.
First of all, in order to train your brain, it's a good idea to do some new things and change your daily habits. In this way, you can make your brain more active and creative. Besides, leading a healthy life also makes sense, which requires a balanced diet and enough time for your brain to rest after a busy day. What's more, I suggest you not being too nervous and staying relaxed, or you can't focus on your study the next day. Finally, if you have any trouble, please talk to your friends and teachers anytime you need.
I hope my advice can help you. I am looking forward to your improvement.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Ming
【知识点】
英语应用文写作（建议信）
【点评】
本题考查学生英语建议信的写作能力，要求围绕主题提出合理具体的建议，使用恰当过渡词串联内容，符合书信格式，有助于提升学生的英语语言组织与应用能力。
【难度系数】
0.6
Memory and Life
◆ Step 1 Fill the form.
◆ Step 2 Interview your classmates or family members to learn about their memories and perspectives. Answer the following questions in English.
1. What’s the most unforgettable thing you’ve memorized? Why is it unforgettable?
2. Do you have any effective memory tips for learning(maths formulas,historical events…)? What are they?
3. Can a good memory help you better understand and inherit family stories or local culture?
4. Have you ever used memory methods to remember Guangdong’s local knowledge(Yue Opera lyrics, local customs…)?
5. What do you think is the importance of improving memory ability for teenagers?
◆ Step 1 Fill the form.
◆ Step 2 Interview your classmates or family members to learn about their memories and perspectives. Answer the following questions in English.
1. What’s the most unforgettable thing you’ve memorized? Why is it unforgettable?
略。
2. Do you have any effective memory tips for learning(maths formulas,historical events…)? What are they?
略。
3. Can a good memory help you better understand and inherit family stories or local culture?
略。
4. Have you ever used memory methods to remember Guangdong’s local knowledge(Yue Opera lyrics, local customs…)?
略。
5. What do you think is the importance of improving memory ability for teenagers?
略。
答案
Step 1 Fill the form
| Memory Situations | Memory Methods (making notes, repeating aloud...) | Feelings During Memory (difficult, relaxed, proud...) |
|--------------------------------------------|---|-|
| 1. Reciting English textbook texts | Mark key plot lines, split the long text into small logical chunks, and repeat each chunk aloud 3 times before combining them. | Relaxed and efficient |
| 2. Memorizing math formulas like $S=\frac{1}{2}ah$ for triangle area | Link the formula to the scene of cutting a parallelogram into two identical triangles, and write the formula down 2 times while recalling the derivation process. | Clear and logical, no longer confusing similar formulas |
| 3. Memorizing historical event timelines of the Opium War | Make a hand-drawn timeline, stick small stickers corresponding to each event on the line, and retell the full event sequence to my deskmate. | Fun and memorable, I felt a strong sense of achievement after reciting the whole timeline. |
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Step 2 Answers to the questions
1. The most unforgettable thing I've memorized is the full lyrics of the Cantonese folk song *Moon Over the Canton River*. It is unforgettable because I learned it with my grandma in my childhood, every soft line carries the warm memory of sitting on her balcony enjoying the cool breeze, and whenever I sing it, the gentle time with her comes back to my mind vividly.
2. Yes, I have many practical memory tips. For math formulas, I will not recite them directly by rote, but deduce the formula from the known basic principles by myself, for example, I can get the volume formula of a cone $V=\frac{1}{3}Sh$ by doing the water pouring experiment with a cylinder of same base and height, so I will never mix up the coefficient 1/3. For historical events, I sort out the causal link between different events and make a mind map to connect scattered time points and details, which makes the content much easier to remember. For English words, I use association and word root affix method to group related words to memorize them together.
3. Absolutely yes. A good memory helps me accurately record the old stories my grandfather told me about how our family moved to Guangdong and made a living decades ago, and I can pass these complete, vivid stories to the younger kids in my family without missing important details. When I visit local cultural sites, a good memory also helps me keep the interesting legends and traditional craft rules in mind, so I can introduce these precious local cultures to more people instead of forgetting them soon after I leave the site.
4. Yes, I have. Last semester our school held a Cantonese Opera experience activity, I used the melody association method: I matched the lines of the classic excerpt *The Peacock Pavilion* to the familiar local folk tune I heard when I was little, and repeated the lines while doing the basic opera gestures the teacher taught us. In this way I memorized the whole 8 lines of the excerpt in only 20 minutes. I also used the classified memory method to sort out the customs of Guangdong's Spring Festival, such as making New Year rice cakes, visiting flower fairs, and giving lucky money in red envelopes, and grouped these customs by the order they happen before and during the Spring Festival, so I can clearly tell the whole set of local Spring Festival traditions to my friends from other provinces.
5. For teenagers, improving memory ability is of great importance. First, it can help us absorb and master the knowledge we learn at school more efficiently, greatly reduce the unnecessary time we spend on rote learning, and leave us more time to explore different fields we are interested in. Second, a good memory helps us keep those precious warm moments with family and friends, the valuable traditional culture and the spirit of excellent role models firmly in mind, which can guide us to grow better. Besides, excellent memory ability can also exercise our logical thinking, help us sort out information more orderly, and build a more solid knowledge system for our future study and life.
| Memory Situations | Memory Methods (making notes, repeating aloud...) | Feelings During Memory (difficult, relaxed, proud...) |
|--------------------------------------------|---|-|
| 1. Reciting English textbook texts | Mark key plot lines, split the long text into small logical chunks, and repeat each chunk aloud 3 times before combining them. | Relaxed and efficient |
| 2. Memorizing math formulas like $S=\frac{1}{2}ah$ for triangle area | Link the formula to the scene of cutting a parallelogram into two identical triangles, and write the formula down 2 times while recalling the derivation process. | Clear and logical, no longer confusing similar formulas |
| 3. Memorizing historical event timelines of the Opium War | Make a hand-drawn timeline, stick small stickers corresponding to each event on the line, and retell the full event sequence to my deskmate. | Fun and memorable, I felt a strong sense of achievement after reciting the whole timeline. |
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Step 2 Answers to the questions
1. The most unforgettable thing I've memorized is the full lyrics of the Cantonese folk song *Moon Over the Canton River*. It is unforgettable because I learned it with my grandma in my childhood, every soft line carries the warm memory of sitting on her balcony enjoying the cool breeze, and whenever I sing it, the gentle time with her comes back to my mind vividly.
2. Yes, I have many practical memory tips. For math formulas, I will not recite them directly by rote, but deduce the formula from the known basic principles by myself, for example, I can get the volume formula of a cone $V=\frac{1}{3}Sh$ by doing the water pouring experiment with a cylinder of same base and height, so I will never mix up the coefficient 1/3. For historical events, I sort out the causal link between different events and make a mind map to connect scattered time points and details, which makes the content much easier to remember. For English words, I use association and word root affix method to group related words to memorize them together.
3. Absolutely yes. A good memory helps me accurately record the old stories my grandfather told me about how our family moved to Guangdong and made a living decades ago, and I can pass these complete, vivid stories to the younger kids in my family without missing important details. When I visit local cultural sites, a good memory also helps me keep the interesting legends and traditional craft rules in mind, so I can introduce these precious local cultures to more people instead of forgetting them soon after I leave the site.
4. Yes, I have. Last semester our school held a Cantonese Opera experience activity, I used the melody association method: I matched the lines of the classic excerpt *The Peacock Pavilion* to the familiar local folk tune I heard when I was little, and repeated the lines while doing the basic opera gestures the teacher taught us. In this way I memorized the whole 8 lines of the excerpt in only 20 minutes. I also used the classified memory method to sort out the customs of Guangdong's Spring Festival, such as making New Year rice cakes, visiting flower fairs, and giving lucky money in red envelopes, and grouped these customs by the order they happen before and during the Spring Festival, so I can clearly tell the whole set of local Spring Festival traditions to my friends from other provinces.
5. For teenagers, improving memory ability is of great importance. First, it can help us absorb and master the knowledge we learn at school more efficiently, greatly reduce the unnecessary time we spend on rote learning, and leave us more time to explore different fields we are interested in. Second, a good memory helps us keep those precious warm moments with family and friends, the valuable traditional culture and the spirit of excellent role models firmly in mind, which can guide us to grow better. Besides, excellent memory ability can also exercise our logical thinking, help us sort out information more orderly, and build a more solid knowledge system for our future study and life.
