经典例题
(2025·江苏泰州·调研)假如你是Lily,目前在英国的一所中学读八年级。请你写一封电子邮件给你的中国好友王丽,向她介绍一下你的新朋友Helen以及你丰富多彩的学校生活。

【要求】1.文章必须包含所提供的所有信息,并作适当发挥。
2.文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。
3.90词左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
Dear Wang Li,


Best wishes!
Yours,
Lily

I have a new friend called Helen. She is a very pretty girl with a round face and big bright eyes. She has a good sense of humour and always tells funny stories to make me happy. She is also very helpful, she often gives me a hand when I meet with difficulties in my new school life.
My school life is really colourful. Our classes begin at 8 a.m. and end at 4 p.m. We have many interesting lessons, and there are all kinds of after-school activities. I joined the art club last month, and I enjoy my school life a lot.

【分析】
首先明确写作任务：以Lily的身份给好友王丽写邮件，需介绍新朋友Helen和自己的学校生活。第一步，先引出新朋友Helen，依次描述她的外貌（圆脸、好看）、幽默感（讲有趣的故事）、乐于助人（帮助解决困难）；第二步，介绍学校生活，涵盖作息时间、有趣的科目、课后活动，适当补充细节使内容饱满，确保覆盖所有要点，语言通顺且符合字数要求。
【解析】
1. 承接开头，引出新朋友Helen，描述其外貌：She is a very pretty girl with a round face...；2. 介绍性格特点：有幽默感，常讲有趣的故事；乐于助人，会帮助解决新学校的困难；3. 过渡到学校生活：说明学校生活丰富多彩，写作息时间（8点上课，4点放学）、有趣的科目、课后活动（加入艺术俱乐部），适当补充细节，使内容连贯，符合90词左右的要求。
【答案】
I have a new friend called Helen. She is a very pretty girl with a round face and big bright eyes. She has a good sense of humour and always tells funny stories to make me happy. She is also very helpful, she often gives me a hand when I meet with difficulties in my new school life.
My school life is really colourful. Our classes begin at 8 a.m. and end at 4 p.m. We have many interesting lessons, and there are all kinds of after-school activities. I joined the art club last month, and I enjoy my school life a lot.
【知识点】
英语书信写作；人物介绍；学校生活话题
【点评】
本文覆盖了题目要求的所有要点，对Helen的外貌、性格和学校生活的描述具体生动，适当补充了细节（如加入艺术俱乐部），语言流畅，符合邮件的写作格式和字数要求。
【难度系数】
0.5