XI. Writing. (快乐习作。)
请以“The happy life with my friend”为题写一篇短文,内容包含:
1.介绍你的一位好朋友(性格、会做的事情等);
2.介绍你们最喜欢的上学日(有什么课程);
3.介绍你们的周末活动(注意劳逸结合)。
要求:1.不少于5句话;2.书写工整;3.语句通顺,意思连贯。
请以“The happy life with my friend”为题写一篇短文,内容包含:
1.介绍你的一位好朋友(性格、会做的事情等);
2.介绍你们最喜欢的上学日(有什么课程);
3.介绍你们的周末活动(注意劳逸结合)。
要求:1.不少于5句话;2.书写工整;3.语句通顺,意思连贯。
答案
【参考范文】
The happy life with my friend
My best friend is Amy. She is hard-working and clever. She likes music. She can dance and play the piano. We work and play together. My favourite day at school is Tuesday. I have Chinese, art and English. Amy likes Wednesdays. She has pipa lessons. We usually do homework on Saturday mornings. We play ping-pong on Sunday afternoons. We can balance our work and play well. We are busy but happy.
The happy life with my friend
My best friend is Amy. She is hard-working and clever. She likes music. She can dance and play the piano. We work and play together. My favourite day at school is Tuesday. I have Chinese, art and English. Amy likes Wednesdays. She has pipa lessons. We usually do homework on Saturday mornings. We play ping-pong on Sunday afternoons. We can balance our work and play well. We are busy but happy.
解析
【分析】
本次写作主题为“和朋友的快乐生活”,需覆盖三个核心要求:①介绍朋友的性格、特长;②说明各自喜欢的上学日及对应课程;③设计周末劳逸结合的活动。写作时先确定朋友的具体信息,再依次安排上学日、周末的内容,确保语句连贯,满足不少于5句的要求。
【解析】
按照题目要点依次构思:①介绍朋友:给朋友取名Amy,描述其性格(勤奋、聪明)和特长(会跳舞、弹钢琴);②说明上学日:“我”喜欢周二,课程有语文、美术、英语,Amy喜欢周三,有琵琶课;③周末活动:周六上午做作业,周日下午打乒乓球,体现劳逸结合,最后点题“忙碌但快乐”。
【答案】
The happy life with my friend
My best friend is Amy. She is hard-working and clever. She likes music. She can dance and play the piano. We work and play together. My favourite day at school is Tuesday. I have Chinese, art and English. Amy likes Wednesdays. She has pipa lessons. We usually do homework on Saturday mornings. We play ping-pong on Sunday afternoons. We can balance our work and play well. We are busy but happy.
【知识点】
英语记叙文写作;日常话题表达
【点评】
本文紧扣题目所有要求,完整覆盖介绍朋友、上学日、周末活动三个要点,语句通顺、意思连贯,符合不少于5句话的要求,是一篇合格的习作。
【难度系数】
0.7
本次写作主题为“和朋友的快乐生活”,需覆盖三个核心要求:①介绍朋友的性格、特长;②说明各自喜欢的上学日及对应课程;③设计周末劳逸结合的活动。写作时先确定朋友的具体信息,再依次安排上学日、周末的内容,确保语句连贯,满足不少于5句的要求。
【解析】
按照题目要点依次构思:①介绍朋友:给朋友取名Amy,描述其性格(勤奋、聪明)和特长(会跳舞、弹钢琴);②说明上学日:“我”喜欢周二,课程有语文、美术、英语,Amy喜欢周三,有琵琶课;③周末活动:周六上午做作业,周日下午打乒乓球,体现劳逸结合,最后点题“忙碌但快乐”。
【答案】
The happy life with my friend
My best friend is Amy. She is hard-working and clever. She likes music. She can dance and play the piano. We work and play together. My favourite day at school is Tuesday. I have Chinese, art and English. Amy likes Wednesdays. She has pipa lessons. We usually do homework on Saturday mornings. We play ping-pong on Sunday afternoons. We can balance our work and play well. We are busy but happy.
【知识点】
英语记叙文写作;日常话题表达
【点评】
本文紧扣题目所有要求,完整覆盖介绍朋友、上学日、周末活动三个要点,语句通顺、意思连贯,符合不少于5句话的要求,是一篇合格的习作。
【难度系数】
0.7
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