十一、XI. 书面表达。
以“My Best Friend”为题,写一写你最好的朋友。请先完成思维导图,再根据思维导图里的信息写作。
要求:句子通顺;不少于5句话。

以“My Best Friend”为题,写一写你最好的朋友。请先完成思维导图,再根据思维导图里的信息写作。
要求:句子通顺;不少于5句话。
答案
思维导图略 参考范文:
My Best Friend
I have a best friend. Her name is Fangfang. She is from Sanya. Her
birthday is in June. She likes summer best, because she likes swimming. She
often goes swimming and plays basketball on the weekend.
My Best Friend
I have a best friend. Her name is Fangfang. She is from Sanya. Her
birthday is in June. She likes summer best, because she likes swimming. She
often goes swimming and plays basketball on the weekend.
解析
【分析】
这道题要求先补全介绍好朋友的思维导图,再依托思维导图信息完成不少于5句话的英语短文。解题时首先要梳理写作需要的5个核心要素:先给好友设定合理的姓名、来自的地点、生日时间、最喜欢的季节、对应的周末活动,要保证设定的信息逻辑通顺,比如喜欢夏季可以对应游泳的爱好,后续周末活动也可以匹配相关内容。之后把这些要素按照合理的顺序串联起来,先总述自己有一位好朋友,再依次介绍好友的基础信息、喜好、日常活动,补充少量衔接内容让语句连贯,最后检查句子数量是否达标、语法是否正确即可。
【解析】
步骤1:填充思维导图,按照要求填写对应信息,示例内容:
Name: Fangfang
From: Sanya
Birthday: in June
Favourite season: summer
Weekend activities: often goes swimming and plays basketball
步骤2:依托思维导图信息组织写作内容:
① 开篇点题,总述自己有一位好朋友:I have a best friend.
② 介绍好友姓名:Her name is Fangfang.
③ 介绍好友来自的地点:She is from Sanya.
④ 介绍好友的生日:Her birthday is in June.
⑤ 介绍好友最喜欢的季节,补充合理原因让内容更丰富:She likes summer best, because she likes swimming.
⑥ 介绍好友的周末活动:She often goes swimming and plays basketball on the weekend.
步骤3:通读全文,检查语句通顺度,确认句子数量超过5句,没有语法错误即可。
【答案】
思维导图可根据实际情况合理填写,参考范文:
My Best Friend
I have a best friend. Her name is Fangfang. She is from Sanya. Her birthday is in June. She likes summer best, because she likes swimming. She often goes swimming and plays basketball on the weekend.
【知识点】
人物介绍写作
一般现在时运用
情景词汇积累
【点评】
本题通过思维导图搭建写作框架,大幅降低了英语写作的门槛,引导学生学会先梳理写作核心要素再组织内容,重点考察学生对介绍人物相关的基础句型、常用词汇的掌握,学生填写思维导图时注意保证前后信息逻辑自洽,就可以很轻松写出符合要求的短文。
【难度系数】
0.7
这道题要求先补全介绍好朋友的思维导图,再依托思维导图信息完成不少于5句话的英语短文。解题时首先要梳理写作需要的5个核心要素:先给好友设定合理的姓名、来自的地点、生日时间、最喜欢的季节、对应的周末活动,要保证设定的信息逻辑通顺,比如喜欢夏季可以对应游泳的爱好,后续周末活动也可以匹配相关内容。之后把这些要素按照合理的顺序串联起来,先总述自己有一位好朋友,再依次介绍好友的基础信息、喜好、日常活动,补充少量衔接内容让语句连贯,最后检查句子数量是否达标、语法是否正确即可。
【解析】
步骤1:填充思维导图,按照要求填写对应信息,示例内容:
Name: Fangfang
From: Sanya
Birthday: in June
Favourite season: summer
Weekend activities: often goes swimming and plays basketball
步骤2:依托思维导图信息组织写作内容:
① 开篇点题,总述自己有一位好朋友:I have a best friend.
② 介绍好友姓名:Her name is Fangfang.
③ 介绍好友来自的地点:She is from Sanya.
④ 介绍好友的生日:Her birthday is in June.
⑤ 介绍好友最喜欢的季节,补充合理原因让内容更丰富:She likes summer best, because she likes swimming.
⑥ 介绍好友的周末活动:She often goes swimming and plays basketball on the weekend.
步骤3:通读全文,检查语句通顺度,确认句子数量超过5句,没有语法错误即可。
【答案】
思维导图可根据实际情况合理填写,参考范文:
My Best Friend
I have a best friend. Her name is Fangfang. She is from Sanya. Her birthday is in June. She likes summer best, because she likes swimming. She often goes swimming and plays basketball on the weekend.
【知识点】
人物介绍写作
一般现在时运用
情景词汇积累
【点评】
本题通过思维导图搭建写作框架,大幅降低了英语写作的门槛,引导学生学会先梳理写作核心要素再组织内容,重点考察学生对介绍人物相关的基础句型、常用词汇的掌握,学生填写思维导图时注意保证前后信息逻辑自洽,就可以很轻松写出符合要求的短文。
【难度系数】
0.7
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