实战演练
假设你们年级正在举办一场时装秀。请根据下面的几个要点问题,并结合本单元所学的知识,写一篇70词左右的英语短文,介绍一下这场时装秀的情况。
【要点问题】1. When does it begin?
2. Who can we see in the fashion show?
3. What clothes can we see in the show?
4. What do you think of the show?
假设你们年级正在举办一场时装秀。请根据下面的几个要点问题,并结合本单元所学的知识,写一篇70词左右的英语短文,介绍一下这场时装秀的情况。
【要点问题】1. When does it begin?
2. Who can we see in the fashion show?
3. What clothes can we see in the show?
4. What do you think of the show?
A fashion show
It is 6 p. m. now. The students and teachers in Grade 7
are having a fashion show in the school hall. Many students
are wearing clothes designed by themselves.
Sandy, from Class 2, is showing a coat. It is made of
wool. Millie, from Class 3, is wearing a long silk dress. It's
fit for summer. Amy, from Class 4, looks pretty in a pair of
leather boots. I think those students are great and the show
is wonderful.
It is 6 p. m. now. The students and teachers in Grade 7
are having a fashion show in the school hall. Many students
are wearing clothes designed by themselves.
Sandy, from Class 2, is showing a coat. It is made of
wool. Millie, from Class 3, is wearing a long silk dress. It's
fit for summer. Amy, from Class 4, looks pretty in a pair of
leather boots. I think those students are great and the show
is wonderful.
答案
One possible version:
A fashion show
It is 6 p. m. now. The students and teachers in Grade 7
are having a fashion show in the school hall. Many students
are wearing clothes designed by themselves.
Sandy, from Class 2, is showing a coat. It is made of
wool. Millie, from Class 3, is wearing a long silk dress. It's
fit for summer. Amy, from Class 4, looks pretty in a pair of
leather boots. I think those students are great and the show
is wonderful.
A fashion show
It is 6 p. m. now. The students and teachers in Grade 7
are having a fashion show in the school hall. Many students
are wearing clothes designed by themselves.
Sandy, from Class 2, is showing a coat. It is made of
wool. Millie, from Class 3, is wearing a long silk dress. It's
fit for summer. Amy, from Class 4, looks pretty in a pair of
leather boots. I think those students are great and the show
is wonderful.
解析
【分析】这是一道英语话题写作题,需围绕“时装秀”主题,紧扣四个要点(时间、参与人员、展示服装、个人评价)完成70词左右的短文。解题思路:1. 开篇点明时装秀的时间、地点及参与主体;2. 分别介绍不同人物展示的服装(可提及材质、款式),对应要点2、3;3. 结尾给出对时装秀的评价,对应要点4;写作时运用单元所学服装相关词汇,语句通顺,控制词数。
【解析】写作步骤:① 开篇点明时装秀基本信息:时间(如6 p.m.)、参与人员(七年级师生)、地点(学校礼堂);② 介绍展示的服装:列举不同班级学生的服装,提及材质(羊毛、丝绸、皮革等),覆盖要点2、3;③ 结尾表达对时装秀的正面评价,覆盖要点4;注意词数控制在70左右,语言符合初中英语表达习惯。
【答案】One possible version:
A fashion show
It is 6 p. m. now. The students and teachers in Grade 7
are having a fashion show in the school hall. Many students
are wearing clothes designed by themselves.
Sandy, from Class 2, is showing a coat. It is made of
wool. Millie, from Class 3, is wearing a long silk dress. It's
fit for summer. Amy, from Class 4, looks pretty in a pair of
leather boots. I think those students are great and the show
is wonderful.
【知识点】英语话题写作、服装类词汇运用
【点评】本题结合单元知识考查英语应用文写作,要求紧扣要点,语言简洁,能有效考查学生的综合语言运用能力,符合初中英语学习要求。
【难度系数】0.5
【解析】写作步骤:① 开篇点明时装秀基本信息:时间(如6 p.m.)、参与人员(七年级师生)、地点(学校礼堂);② 介绍展示的服装:列举不同班级学生的服装,提及材质(羊毛、丝绸、皮革等),覆盖要点2、3;③ 结尾表达对时装秀的正面评价,覆盖要点4;注意词数控制在70左右,语言符合初中英语表达习惯。
【答案】One possible version:
A fashion show
It is 6 p. m. now. The students and teachers in Grade 7
are having a fashion show in the school hall. Many students
are wearing clothes designed by themselves.
Sandy, from Class 2, is showing a coat. It is made of
wool. Millie, from Class 3, is wearing a long silk dress. It's
fit for summer. Amy, from Class 4, looks pretty in a pair of
leather boots. I think those students are great and the show
is wonderful.
【知识点】英语话题写作、服装类词汇运用
【点评】本题结合单元知识考查英语应用文写作,要求紧扣要点,语言简洁,能有效考查学生的综合语言运用能力,符合初中英语学习要求。
【难度系数】0.5
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