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五、书面表达。
假如你是Andy,你所在的慈善基金会Sunshine for All要举办一个慈善演出,你要在电子邮
件里向你的朋友Jacky介绍这次演出,并向他和他的家人发出邀请。请根据所给提示完成介绍。
Organizer: Sunshine for All Date: May 13th Time: 7 p.m. — 9 p.m.
Place: the Art Centre Purpose: raise money for...
Programmes: songs, dances,... Ticket price: children ￥10 adults: ￥20
要求:1. 覆盖所有提示中的要点;2. 90词左右。
Dear Jacky,
Sunshine for All is planning to hold a charity show. Would you and your parents like to
come to support us?
Please reply soon. I am looking forward to seeing you at the show.
With love,
Andy
假如你是Andy,你所在的慈善基金会Sunshine for All要举办一个慈善演出,你要在电子邮
件里向你的朋友Jacky介绍这次演出,并向他和他的家人发出邀请。请根据所给提示完成介绍。
Organizer: Sunshine for All Date: May 13th Time: 7 p.m. — 9 p.m.
Place: the Art Centre Purpose: raise money for...
Programmes: songs, dances,... Ticket price: children ￥10 adults: ￥20
要求:1. 覆盖所有提示中的要点;2. 90词左右。
Dear Jacky,
Sunshine for All is planning to hold a charity show. Would you and your parents like to
come to support us?
The show will be held in the Art Centre in the town on the 13th of May. It will be from 7 p. m. to 9 p. m. And some pop stars will come to the show. We hope we can raise some money for the poor children in our town. So there are no free tickets. The ticket price is ￥10 for children and ￥20 for adults. There will be wonderful songs and dances at the show. I am sure you will enjoy them if you can come. Many hands make light work.
Please reply soon. I am looking forward to seeing you at the show.
With love,
Andy
答案
One possible version:
Dear Jacky,
Sunshine for All is planning to hold a charity show. Would you and your
parents like to come to support us?
The show will be held in the Art Centre in the town on the 13th of May. It
will be from 7 p. m. to 9 p. m. And some pop stars will come to the show. We
hope we can raise some money for the poor children in our town. So there are no
free tickets. The ticket price is ￥10 for children and ￥20 for adults. There will be
wonderful songs and dances at the show. I am sure you will enjoy them if you can
come. Many hands make light work.
Please reply soon. I am looking forward to seeing you at the show.
With love,
Andy
Dear Jacky,
Sunshine for All is planning to hold a charity show. Would you and your
parents like to come to support us?
The show will be held in the Art Centre in the town on the 13th of May. It
will be from 7 p. m. to 9 p. m. And some pop stars will come to the show. We
hope we can raise some money for the poor children in our town. So there are no
free tickets. The ticket price is ￥10 for children and ￥20 for adults. There will be
wonderful songs and dances at the show. I am sure you will enjoy them if you can
come. Many hands make light work.
Please reply soon. I am looking forward to seeing you at the show.
With love,
Andy
解析
【分析】
这是一篇提示类邀请邮件书面表达，解题时首先要梳理题干给出的所有必填要点，避免遗漏。首先承接开头已给出的邀请语句，按照读者接收信息的合理逻辑排序内容：先介绍演出的举办地点、日期、具体时长，再说明演出的筹款目的，之后介绍演出的节目内容，最后说明不同人群的票价信息，中间可以适当补充少量符合语境的合理细节让行文更流畅自然，控制总词数在90词左右，语气贴合给朋友写邮件的轻松亲切风格，最后呼应邀请主题即可。
【解析】
写作可按4步完成：
1. 承接已给的开篇内容，首先交代演出基础信息：明确演出在艺术中心举办，日期为5月13日，演出时段是晚7点到9点，清晰传递核心安排。
2. 接下来说明演出的举办目的：点明本次演出是为当地贫困儿童筹集善款，补充少量合理细节避免内容生硬。
3. 随后介绍演出的节目设置：说明本次演出准备了歌曲、舞蹈等精彩节目，让受邀人对演出内容产生兴趣。
4. 最后明确告知票价规则：儿童票价10元，成人票价20元，补充友好的邀约表述，确认所有题干给出的要点全部覆盖，符合词数要求即可。
【答案】
The show will be held in the Art Centre in the town on the 13th of May. It will be from 7 p. m. to 9 p. m. And some pop stars will come to the show. We hope we can raise some money for the poor children in our town. So there are no free tickets. The ticket price is ￥10 for children and ￥20 for adults. There will be wonderful songs and dances at the show. I am sure you will enjoy them if you can come. Many hands make light work.
【知识点】
邀请类应用文写作
书面表达要点整合
邮件格式规范
【点评】
本篇参考范文完全覆盖题干给出的所有提示要点，逻辑顺序清晰，从演出基础信息到举办目的、节目内容、票价规则层层递进，补充的明星到场、为贫困儿童筹款的细节符合慈善演出的语境，加入的谚语也让行文更生动，词数符合90词左右的要求，语气亲切自然，完全匹配朋友间发邮件的交流场景，没有语法错误。学生完成这类提示类作文时，可以先把所有要求的要点列成清单，写完逐一核对避免漏点，很容易拿到合格的分数。
【难度系数】
0.7
这是一篇提示类邀请邮件书面表达，解题时首先要梳理题干给出的所有必填要点，避免遗漏。首先承接开头已给出的邀请语句，按照读者接收信息的合理逻辑排序内容：先介绍演出的举办地点、日期、具体时长，再说明演出的筹款目的，之后介绍演出的节目内容，最后说明不同人群的票价信息，中间可以适当补充少量符合语境的合理细节让行文更流畅自然，控制总词数在90词左右，语气贴合给朋友写邮件的轻松亲切风格，最后呼应邀请主题即可。
【解析】
写作可按4步完成：
1. 承接已给的开篇内容，首先交代演出基础信息：明确演出在艺术中心举办，日期为5月13日，演出时段是晚7点到9点，清晰传递核心安排。
2. 接下来说明演出的举办目的：点明本次演出是为当地贫困儿童筹集善款，补充少量合理细节避免内容生硬。
3. 随后介绍演出的节目设置：说明本次演出准备了歌曲、舞蹈等精彩节目，让受邀人对演出内容产生兴趣。
4. 最后明确告知票价规则：儿童票价10元，成人票价20元，补充友好的邀约表述，确认所有题干给出的要点全部覆盖，符合词数要求即可。
【答案】
The show will be held in the Art Centre in the town on the 13th of May. It will be from 7 p. m. to 9 p. m. And some pop stars will come to the show. We hope we can raise some money for the poor children in our town. So there are no free tickets. The ticket price is ￥10 for children and ￥20 for adults. There will be wonderful songs and dances at the show. I am sure you will enjoy them if you can come. Many hands make light work.
【知识点】
邀请类应用文写作
书面表达要点整合
邮件格式规范
【点评】
本篇参考范文完全覆盖题干给出的所有提示要点，逻辑顺序清晰，从演出基础信息到举办目的、节目内容、票价规则层层递进，补充的明星到场、为贫困儿童筹款的细节符合慈善演出的语境，加入的谚语也让行文更生动，词数符合90词左右的要求，语气亲切自然，完全匹配朋友间发邮件的交流场景，没有语法错误。学生完成这类提示类作文时，可以先把所有要求的要点列成清单，写完逐一核对避免漏点，很容易拿到合格的分数。
【难度系数】
0.7
