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任务情境:某英文网站正在举办以“A Special ... (Day, Holiday, Trip ...)”为题的征文活动,要求图文并茂(可以是文字配照片,也可以是文字配图画)。请写一篇英语短文描写自己的一次难忘的经历,并配上当时拍摄的照片或者为文字配上手绘图画(不超过4张照片或图画)。写作时请运用本单元所学知识,并参考下面的思维导图提示。
任务情境:某英文网站正在举办以“A Special ... (Day, Holiday, Trip ...)”为题的征文活动,要求图文并茂(可以是文字配照片,也可以是文字配图画)。请写一篇英语短文描写自己的一次难忘的经历,并配上当时拍摄的照片或者为文字配上手绘图画(不超过4张照片或图画)。写作时请运用本单元所学知识,并参考下面的思维导图提示。
答案
【项目活动·实践】
One possible version:
A Special Weekend
Last weekend, I went to visit my
grandparents in the countryside with my
parents. My father drove us there.
When we got there, my grandparents
were picking apples on the farm. So we got
straight to work. At first, I was happy. But
after half an hour, I felt very tired. The
weather was hot. I was hungry and thirsty.
Most apples were high and it was difficult to
get them. I didn't want to pick apples any
more. Mum and Dad encouraged me to keep
working. They said, "Although your
grandparents are both old, they work on the
farm every day." Their words made me
think of the saying, "Every grain comes
from hard work." I went on working and
soon we finished the work.
I was tired but I enjoyed working with
my hands. I ate one apple, and it tasted
fresh and delicious! Farming isn't easy, so
we should never waste food! It was really a
memorable weekend for me.
解析
【分析】
本题是英语话题写作题，要求以“A Special ...”为题，结合思维导图的三个核心问题（Where did you go?/What did you do there?/How did you feel and what did you learn from it?），搭配摘苹果的图画，描写难忘经历。解题思路：1. 确定主题，如A Special Weekend；2. 围绕思维导图的三个要点展开：明确地点（乡下爷爷奶奶家）、具体活动（摘苹果）、感受与收获（体会劳动不易、不浪费食物）；3. 运用一般过去时态，加入细节描写（如摘苹果的困难、父母的鼓励）和谚语，让内容充实有情感。
【解析】
1. 确定主题：A Special Weekend，搭配指定的摘苹果图画（）；
2. 开头：点明时间（last weekend）、同行人物（parents）、目的地（grandparents' countryside home）；
3. 中间：描述到达后的活动——看到爷爷奶奶摘苹果，自己参与后遇到的困难（累、热、苹果高难摘），父母的鼓励（结合爷爷奶奶日常劳作的事例）；
4. 结尾：抒发感受（累但开心），升华主题（体会“粒粒皆辛苦”，不浪费食物），总结是难忘的周末。
【答案】
【项目活动·实践】
One possible version:
A Special Weekend
Last weekend, I went to visit my grandparents in the countryside with my parents. My father drove us there.
When we got there, my grandparents were picking apples on the farm. So we got straight to work. At first, I was happy. But after half an hour, I felt very tired. The weather was hot. I was hungry and thirsty. Most apples were high and it was difficult to get them. I didn't want to pick apples any more. Mum and Dad encouraged me to keep working. They said, "Although your grandparents are both old, they work on the farm every day." Their words made me think of the saying, "Every grain comes from hard work." I went on working and soon we finished the work.
I was tired but I enjoyed working with my hands. I ate one apple, and it tasted fresh and delicious! Farming isn't easy, so we should never waste food! It was really a memorable weekend for me.
【知识点】
英语记叙文写作、一般过去时运用
【点评】
作文紧扣主题，结合思维导图的三个提示点，图文搭配合理；内容有细节、有情感升华，加入谚语增强说服力，语言流畅，时态正确，符合征文要求，是一篇优秀的话题写作范文。
【难度系数】
0.4
本题是英语话题写作题，要求以“A Special ...”为题，结合思维导图的三个核心问题（Where did you go?/What did you do there?/How did you feel and what did you learn from it?），搭配摘苹果的图画，描写难忘经历。解题思路：1. 确定主题，如A Special Weekend；2. 围绕思维导图的三个要点展开：明确地点（乡下爷爷奶奶家）、具体活动（摘苹果）、感受与收获（体会劳动不易、不浪费食物）；3. 运用一般过去时态，加入细节描写（如摘苹果的困难、父母的鼓励）和谚语，让内容充实有情感。
【解析】
1. 确定主题：A Special Weekend，搭配指定的摘苹果图画（
）；2. 开头：点明时间（last weekend）、同行人物（parents）、目的地（grandparents' countryside home）；
3. 中间：描述到达后的活动——看到爷爷奶奶摘苹果，自己参与后遇到的困难（累、热、苹果高难摘），父母的鼓励（结合爷爷奶奶日常劳作的事例）；
4. 结尾：抒发感受（累但开心），升华主题（体会“粒粒皆辛苦”，不浪费食物），总结是难忘的周末。
【答案】
【项目活动·实践】
One possible version:
A Special Weekend
Last weekend, I went to visit my grandparents in the countryside with my parents. My father drove us there.
When we got there, my grandparents were picking apples on the farm. So we got straight to work. At first, I was happy. But after half an hour, I felt very tired. The weather was hot. I was hungry and thirsty. Most apples were high and it was difficult to get them. I didn't want to pick apples any more. Mum and Dad encouraged me to keep working. They said, "Although your grandparents are both old, they work on the farm every day." Their words made me think of the saying, "Every grain comes from hard work." I went on working and soon we finished the work.
I was tired but I enjoyed working with my hands. I ate one apple, and it tasted fresh and delicious! Farming isn't easy, so we should never waste food! It was really a memorable weekend for me.
【知识点】
英语记叙文写作、一般过去时运用
【点评】
作文紧扣主题，结合思维导图的三个提示点，图文搭配合理；内容有细节、有情感升华，加入谚语增强说服力，语言流畅，时态正确，符合征文要求，是一篇优秀的话题写作范文。
【难度系数】
0.4
