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假如你是腾飞中学的一名学生，请根据下面的提示，谈谈你校同学的偶像观，并适当发表自己的观点。
1. 过去的偶像——歌星、影视明星等：① 明星很时尚；② 他们会表演有趣的节目让人放松，让我们的生活丰富多彩；
2. 如今的偶像——科学家、医护人员等：① 科学家发明高科技产品来保卫国家，提高人们的生活水平；② 医生和护士拯救人们的生命，帮助人们摆脱痛苦、恢复健康；
3. 你的观点：在危难中帮助我们的人更值得我们崇拜，作为学生的我们……
1. 过去的偶像——歌星、影视明星等：① 明星很时尚；② 他们会表演有趣的节目让人放松，让我们的生活丰富多彩；
2. 如今的偶像——科学家、医护人员等：① 科学家发明高科技产品来保卫国家，提高人们的生活水平；② 医生和护士拯救人们的生命，帮助人们摆脱痛苦、恢复健康；
3. 你的观点：在危难中帮助我们的人更值得我们崇拜，作为学生的我们……
答案
[高分范文]
① Last week, our school did a survey of “Who is your idol?”. Here are our findings.
② In the past, we thought singers and movie stars were our idols. They are very fashionable. Also, they can put on funny shows to make us relaxed and make our lives colourful. But now we think scientists and medical workers are our idols. Scientists invent high-tech products to protect our country and improve people’s living standards. Doctors and nurses save people’s lives and help them get rid of the pain and recover.
③ In my opinion, those who help us when we are in need deserve our admiration. As students, we should learn from them and study hard to be useful people.
[名师点评]
这篇文章介绍学生们过去与现在对于“偶像”的理解差异。
① 开篇点题，用“Here are ...”引出正文；
② In the past和But now的运用清晰明了地介绍了学生们偶像观的变化；⊋
③ 用In my opinion引出作者自己的观点。
① Last week, our school did a survey of “Who is your idol?”. Here are our findings.
② In the past, we thought singers and movie stars were our idols. They are very fashionable. Also, they can put on funny shows to make us relaxed and make our lives colourful. But now we think scientists and medical workers are our idols. Scientists invent high-tech products to protect our country and improve people’s living standards. Doctors and nurses save people’s lives and help them get rid of the pain and recover.
③ In my opinion, those who help us when we are in need deserve our admiration. As students, we should learn from them and study hard to be useful people.
[名师点评]
这篇文章介绍学生们过去与现在对于“偶像”的理解差异。
① 开篇点题，用“Here are ...”引出正文；
② In the past和But now的运用清晰明了地介绍了学生们偶像观的变化；⊋
③ 用In my opinion引出作者自己的观点。
请根据下列提示，以“The person I admire most”为题，用英语写一篇短文。
Many excellent persons devote themselves to the whole world in many different ways. You are always moved by their spirits and their contribution. Please write about a great person you admire most. Try to tell us who he/she is, what he/she did for us, and why you admire him/her so much.
注意：1. 文中不得出现真实的姓名和学校名称；2. 表达清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯，书写规范；3. 词数不少于100。
[思路点拨]
1. 时态：以一般现在时为主；2. 人称：以第三人称为主；3. 写作时根据文字提示进行叙述，并且在末段进行总结。
[写作提纲]
[妙笔生花]
The person I admire most
（更多精彩作文素材见“背记手册”）
Many excellent persons devote themselves to the whole world in many different ways. You are always moved by their spirits and their contribution. Please write about a great person you admire most. Try to tell us who he/she is, what he/she did for us, and why you admire him/her so much.
注意：1. 文中不得出现真实的姓名和学校名称；2. 表达清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯，书写规范；3. 词数不少于100。
[思路点拨]
1. 时态：以一般现在时为主；2. 人称：以第三人称为主；3. 写作时根据文字提示进行叙述，并且在末段进行总结。
[写作提纲]
[妙笔生花]
The person I admire most
As is known to us, there are lots of great people in China. For me, Yuan Longping is the person I admire most.
Yuan Longping, the father of hybrid rice, is one of the greatest Chinese scientists. He made great achievements during his lifetime, improving the yield of hybrid rice and feeding millions of people all over the world. Besides, he was strong-minded.
He continued setting higher goals instead of stopping trying, which leaves me a deep impression.
Although he passed away in 2021, his spirit still inspires me all the time. I will study hard and never give up my dream.
In the future, I would like to be a useful person to make a great contribution to society.
（更多精彩作文素材见“背记手册”）
答案
写作突破
One possible version：
The person I admire most
As is known to us, there are lots of great people in China. For me, Yuan Longping is the person I admire most.
Yuan Longping, the father of hybrid rice, is one of the greatest Chinese scientists. He made great achievements during his lifetime, improving the yield of hybrid rice and feeding millions of people all over the world. Besides, he was strong-minded.
He continued setting higher goals instead of stopping trying, which leaves me a deep impression.
Although he passed away in 2021, his spirit still inspires me all the time. I will study hard and never give up my dream. In the future, I would like to be a useful person to make a great contribution to society.
One possible version：
The person I admire most
As is known to us, there are lots of great people in China. For me, Yuan Longping is the person I admire most.
Yuan Longping, the father of hybrid rice, is one of the greatest Chinese scientists. He made great achievements during his lifetime, improving the yield of hybrid rice and feeding millions of people all over the world. Besides, he was strong-minded.
He continued setting higher goals instead of stopping trying, which leaves me a deep impression.
Although he passed away in 2021, his spirit still inspires me all the time. I will study hard and never give up my dream. In the future, I would like to be a useful person to make a great contribution to society.
