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所有生物都是地球的主人，人与动物共享同一家园。学校英语校刊Teens将要举行以“One Earth, One Home”为题的英语作文竞赛活动，请根据所给提示，用英语写一篇作文，内容包括：
(1)What problems are wild animals facing? (2)Why do we need to protect wild animals?
(3)What can we do to protect them as students?
要求：词数80—100。
审题指导：
1.体裁:说明文 2.时态:以一般现在时为主 3.人称:第一人称和第三人称
写作框架：
优秀范文：
所有生物都是地球的主人，人与动物共享同一家园。学校英语校刊Teens将要举行以“One Earth, One Home”为题的英语作文竞赛活动，请根据所给提示，用英语写一篇作文，内容包括：
(1)What problems are wild animals facing? (2)Why do we need to protect wild animals?
(3)What can we do to protect them as students?
要求：词数80—100。
审题指导：
1.体裁:说明文 2.时态:以一般现在时为主 3.人称:第一人称和第三人称
写作框架：
优秀范文：
答案
One Earth, One Home
The earth is home to both humans and animals. But some wild animals are in danger now. Many wild animals are facing serious problems. Some are losing their homes because forests are being cut down. Others are killed by people for food or money.
We need to protect them because they are important to our environment. They help keep nature balanced. Also, all living things have the right to live.
As students, first, we can learn more about animals and tell others to protect them. Second, we should not buy things made from wild animals. Let's work together to make the earth a better home for all.
The earth is home to both humans and animals. But some wild animals are in danger now. Many wild animals are facing serious problems. Some are losing their homes because forests are being cut down. Others are killed by people for food or money.
We need to protect them because they are important to our environment. They help keep nature balanced. Also, all living things have the right to live.
As students, first, we can learn more about animals and tell others to protect them. Second, we should not buy things made from wild animals. Let's work together to make the earth a better home for all.
解析
【分析】本题为英语说明文写作题，主题为“One Earth, One Home”，需围绕三个核心要点展开：一是野生动物面临的问题，二是保护野生动物的原因，三是学生可采取的保护措施。写作时需注意体裁为说明文，时态以一般现在时为主，人称结合第一人称（学生视角）与第三人称（描述动物、环境），词数控制在80-100，要完整覆盖所有提示要点，语言通顺简洁。
【解析】写作遵循“引入主题-阐述原因-提出措施”的结构：第一段点明地球是人类与动物共同家园，说明野生动物面临的具体问题（栖息地因森林砍伐丧失、被猎杀）；第二段从维持生态平衡、生物生存权角度说明保护的必要性；第三段从学生身份出发，提出学习宣传、拒绝购买野生动物制品的具体做法，最后发出呼吁，符合所有要求。
【答案】One Earth, One Home
The earth is home to both humans and animals. But some wild animals are in danger now. Many wild animals are facing serious problems. Some are losing their homes because forests are being cut down. Others are killed by people for food or money.
We need to protect them because they are important to our environment. They help keep nature balanced. Also, all living things have the right to live.
As students, first, we can learn more about animals and tell others to protect them. Second, we should not buy things made from wild animals. Let's work together to make the earth a better home for all.
【知识点】英语说明文写作、环境保护主题英语表达
【点评】范文紧扣主题，结构清晰，完整覆盖所有写作要点，时态、人称使用准确，语言简洁流畅，符合词数要求，是一篇符合竞赛要求的优秀作文。
【难度系数】0.6
【解析】写作遵循“引入主题-阐述原因-提出措施”的结构：第一段点明地球是人类与动物共同家园，说明野生动物面临的具体问题（栖息地因森林砍伐丧失、被猎杀）；第二段从维持生态平衡、生物生存权角度说明保护的必要性；第三段从学生身份出发，提出学习宣传、拒绝购买野生动物制品的具体做法，最后发出呼吁，符合所有要求。
【答案】One Earth, One Home
The earth is home to both humans and animals. But some wild animals are in danger now. Many wild animals are facing serious problems. Some are losing their homes because forests are being cut down. Others are killed by people for food or money.
We need to protect them because they are important to our environment. They help keep nature balanced. Also, all living things have the right to live.
As students, first, we can learn more about animals and tell others to protect them. Second, we should not buy things made from wild animals. Let's work together to make the earth a better home for all.
【知识点】英语说明文写作、环境保护主题英语表达
【点评】范文紧扣主题，结构清晰，完整覆盖所有写作要点，时态、人称使用准确，语言简洁流畅，符合词数要求，是一篇符合竞赛要求的优秀作文。
【难度系数】0.6
