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3 Read the passage and improve it with different sentence types.
阅读短文，并运用不同的句子类型进行优化改写。
In the future, I want to become a psychologist. I’ve noticed some people around me. They have mental health issues. They suffer a lot. They don’t know how to deal with the problems. I will study psychology hard. I will talk with people patiently to help them find solutions.
I hope I can make people feel at ease.
I hope I can help them enjoy their lives.
In the future, I want to become a psychologist.
阅读短文，并运用不同的句子类型进行优化改写。
In the future, I want to become a psychologist. I’ve noticed some people around me. They have mental health issues. They suffer a lot. They don’t know how to deal with the problems. I will study psychology hard. I will talk with people patiently to help them find solutions.
I hope I can make people feel at ease.
I hope I can help them enjoy their lives.
In the future, I want to become a psychologist.
答案
(Answers may vary.)
I’ve noticed some people around me who have mental health issues. They suffer a lot because they don’t know how to deal with the problems. I will study psychology hard, and when I become a psychologist, I will talk with people patiently to help them find solutions. I hope I can make people feel at ease and help them enjoy their lives.
I’ve noticed some people around me who have mental health issues. They suffer a lot because they don’t know how to deal with the problems. I will study psychology hard, and when I become a psychologist, I will talk with people patiently to help them find solutions. I hope I can make people feel at ease and help them enjoy their lives.
解析
【分析】
本题要求运用不同句子类型改写简单句，解题思路是通过定语从句、原因状语从句、并列句等将零散的简单句连接，使表达更连贯、结构更丰富。具体步骤：1. 用定语从句合并描述人物特征的简单句；2. 用原因状语从句连接因果关系的简单句；3. 用并列连词和时间状语从句整合后续动作句；4. 用并列连词合并两个表达愿望的简单句，优化整体表达。
【解析】
1. 将“I’ve noticed some people around me.”和“They have mental health issues.”合并，用定语从句“who have mental health issues”修饰people，得到“I’ve noticed some people around me who have mental health issues.”；
2. 将“They suffer a lot.”和“They don’t know how to deal with the problems.”用原因状语从句“because they don’t know how to deal with the problems”连接，得到“They suffer a lot because they don’t know how to deal with the problems.”；
3. 将“I will study psychology hard.”和“I will talk with people patiently to help them find solutions.”用并列连词and和时间状语从句“when I become a psychologist”连接，得到“I will study psychology hard, and when I become a psychologist, I will talk with people patiently to help them find solutions.”；
4. 将两个“I hope...”的简单句用并列连词and合并，得到“I hope I can make people feel at ease and help them enjoy their lives.”。
整合后即为优化后的完整段落。
【答案】
I’ve noticed some people around me who have mental health issues. They suffer a lot because they don’t know how to deal with the problems. I will study psychology hard, and when I become a psychologist, I will talk with people patiently to help them find solutions. I hope I can make people feel at ease and help them enjoy their lives.
【知识点】
英语句子类型、定语从句、句子改写
【点评】
本题考查学生对不同英语句子结构的运用能力，要求将零散简单句优化为结构多样、表达连贯的句子，是基础的语言运用题，能帮助学生提升句子表达的丰富性。
【难度系数】
0.6
本题要求运用不同句子类型改写简单句，解题思路是通过定语从句、原因状语从句、并列句等将零散的简单句连接，使表达更连贯、结构更丰富。具体步骤：1. 用定语从句合并描述人物特征的简单句；2. 用原因状语从句连接因果关系的简单句；3. 用并列连词和时间状语从句整合后续动作句；4. 用并列连词合并两个表达愿望的简单句，优化整体表达。
【解析】
1. 将“I’ve noticed some people around me.”和“They have mental health issues.”合并，用定语从句“who have mental health issues”修饰people，得到“I’ve noticed some people around me who have mental health issues.”；
2. 将“They suffer a lot.”和“They don’t know how to deal with the problems.”用原因状语从句“because they don’t know how to deal with the problems”连接，得到“They suffer a lot because they don’t know how to deal with the problems.”；
3. 将“I will study psychology hard.”和“I will talk with people patiently to help them find solutions.”用并列连词and和时间状语从句“when I become a psychologist”连接，得到“I will study psychology hard, and when I become a psychologist, I will talk with people patiently to help them find solutions.”；
4. 将两个“I hope...”的简单句用并列连词and合并，得到“I hope I can make people feel at ease and help them enjoy their lives.”。
整合后即为优化后的完整段落。
【答案】
I’ve noticed some people around me who have mental health issues. They suffer a lot because they don’t know how to deal with the problems. I will study psychology hard, and when I become a psychologist, I will talk with people patiently to help them find solutions. I hope I can make people feel at ease and help them enjoy their lives.
【知识点】
英语句子类型、定语从句、句子改写
【点评】
本题考查学生对不同英语句子结构的运用能力，要求将零散简单句优化为结构多样、表达连贯的句子，是基础的语言运用题，能帮助学生提升句子表达的丰富性。
【难度系数】
0.6
