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学校英语俱乐部正在选举新一届主席。假设你是李华,请根据以下提示,用英语写一封推荐信给学校英语俱乐部负责人吴先生,推荐你的同学Simon成为新一届的俱乐部主席,90词左右,已给出部分不计入总词数。

学校英语俱乐部正在选举新一届主席。假设你是李华,请根据以下提示,用英语写一封推荐信给学校英语俱乐部负责人吴先生,推荐你的同学Simon成为新一届的俱乐部主席,90词左右,已给出部分不计入总词数。
答案
Dear Mr. Wu,
I'm writing to recommend Simon to be the new chairperson of the English Club.
Simon is a Grade 9 student from Class 2. He loves reading all kinds of English books in his free time. He is good at English and once won first prize in the school English speech competition. He is very organized, and he always arranges every activity well. He is also helpful, he always spends extra time helping classmates with their English problems.
I am sure Simon is the most suitable person for this position. I hope you can consider my recommendation.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
I'm writing to recommend Simon to be the new chairperson of the English Club.
Simon is a Grade 9 student from Class 2. He loves reading all kinds of English books in his free time. He is good at English and once won first prize in the school English speech competition. He is very organized, and he always arranges every activity well. He is also helpful, he always spends extra time helping classmates with their English problems.
I am sure Simon is the most suitable person for this position. I hope you can consider my recommendation.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
解析
【分析】首先明确写作任务:以李华的身份给学校英语俱乐部的吴先生写推荐信,推荐Simon担任新一届俱乐部主席。需结合思维导图中Simon的相关信息(基本信息、兴趣、能力、品质等)组织内容,步骤为:1. 开头点明写信目的;2. 介绍Simon的基本情况(班级、姓名);3. 阐述他的兴趣、能力;4. 说明他的优秀品质;5. 结尾表达推荐的信心并请求考虑。
【解析】写作时需遵循英文推荐信格式,紧扣思维导图所有要点,语言通顺符合初中英语表达,控制词数在90词左右,准确使用相关短语,如recommend sb to be...、be good at、be organized等,确保内容完整、逻辑清晰。
【答案】Dear Mr. Wu,
I'm writing to recommend Simon to be the new chairperson of the English Club.
Simon is a Grade 9 student from Class 2. He loves reading all kinds of English books in his free time. He is good at English and once won first prize in the school English speech competition. He is very organized, and he always arranges every activity well. He is also helpful, he always spends extra time helping classmates with their English problems.
I am sure Simon is the most suitable person for this position. I hope you can consider my recommendation.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【知识点】英语推荐信写作、人物介绍表达、英文书信格式
【点评】这篇推荐信紧扣题目要求,结合思维导图所有要点,内容完整、逻辑清晰,语言通顺规范,准确传达了推荐理由,是符合要求的优秀范文。
【难度系数】0.5
【解析】写作时需遵循英文推荐信格式,紧扣思维导图所有要点,语言通顺符合初中英语表达,控制词数在90词左右,准确使用相关短语,如recommend sb to be...、be good at、be organized等,确保内容完整、逻辑清晰。
【答案】Dear Mr. Wu,
I'm writing to recommend Simon to be the new chairperson of the English Club.
Simon is a Grade 9 student from Class 2. He loves reading all kinds of English books in his free time. He is good at English and once won first prize in the school English speech competition. He is very organized, and he always arranges every activity well. He is also helpful, he always spends extra time helping classmates with their English problems.
I am sure Simon is the most suitable person for this position. I hope you can consider my recommendation.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【知识点】英语推荐信写作、人物介绍表达、英文书信格式
【点评】这篇推荐信紧扣题目要求,结合思维导图所有要点,内容完整、逻辑清晰,语言通顺规范,准确传达了推荐理由,是符合要求的优秀范文。
【难度系数】0.5
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