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学校准备在暑假开展一些社会实践活动,如参观博物馆、义务劳动、爱心义卖等。John和Lisa谈论了各自的选择,也请你谈谈你的选择及理由,根据提示要点写一篇英语短文发表在班级日志中。
要求:1.文章必须包括表中全部内容,可适当发挥;
2.文中不得出现真实人名和校名等相关信息;
3.文章首句已给出,不计人总词数;
4.词数:80—100。
During this coming summer vacation, my classmates want to take part in different social practical activities.
学校准备在暑假开展一些社会实践活动,如参观博物馆、义务劳动、爱心义卖等。John和Lisa谈论了各自的选择,也请你谈谈你的选择及理由,根据提示要点写一篇英语短文发表在班级日志中。
要求:1.文章必须包括表中全部内容,可适当发挥;
2.文中不得出现真实人名和校名等相关信息;
3.文章首句已给出,不计人总词数;
4.词数:80—100。
During this coming summer vacation, my classmates want to take part in different social practical activities.
John is going to visit Hangzhou Museum. It is
a good place to learn more about the history of
Hangzhou. But Lisa has a different idea. She is going to
volunteer to sell old things with her friends. In this way,
they can raise money for sick children in the hospital and
cheer them up.
As for me, I will volunteer to clean up the city park.
I'll pick up rubbish in and around the park. I think it is
important to keep our city clean and tidy. I'm sure we
will get a lot of social experience through these activities
and have a meaningful summer vacation.
a good place to learn more about the history of
Hangzhou. But Lisa has a different idea. She is going to
volunteer to sell old things with her friends. In this way,
they can raise money for sick children in the hospital and
cheer them up.
As for me, I will volunteer to clean up the city park.
I'll pick up rubbish in and around the park. I think it is
important to keep our city clean and tidy. I'm sure we
will get a lot of social experience through these activities
and have a meaningful summer vacation.
答案
One possible version:
During this coming summer vacation, my
classmates want to take part in different social practical
activities. John is going to visit Hangzhou Museum. It is
a good place to learn more about the history of
Hangzhou. But Lisa has a different idea. She is going to
volunteer to sell old things with her friends. In this way,
they can raise money for sick children in the hospital and
cheer them up.
As for me, I will volunteer to clean up the city park.
I'll pick up rubbish in and around the park. I think it is
important to keep our city clean and tidy. I'm sure we
will get a lot of social experience through these activities
and have a meaningful summer vacation.
During this coming summer vacation, my
classmates want to take part in different social practical
activities. John is going to visit Hangzhou Museum. It is
a good place to learn more about the history of
Hangzhou. But Lisa has a different idea. She is going to
volunteer to sell old things with her friends. In this way,
they can raise money for sick children in the hospital and
cheer them up.
As for me, I will volunteer to clean up the city park.
I'll pick up rubbish in and around the park. I think it is
important to keep our city clean and tidy. I'm sure we
will get a lot of social experience through these activities
and have a meaningful summer vacation.
解析
【分析】
首先拿到这道书面表达题，第一步先明确写作要求：需要覆盖表格里John、Lisa的全部活动和对应理由，还要补充自己的社会实践选择及理由，时态以一般将来时为主，词数控制在80-100，不能出现真实个人信息。接下来梳理写作逻辑：第一部分承接题目给出的开头句，先介绍John的安排：说明他计划参观杭州博物馆，把“learn more about”的内容具体化，比如了解杭州的历史文化；第二部分介绍Lisa的计划：她要参与义卖旧物的志愿活动，把“raise money for”的内容补充为为患病儿童筹款；第三部分介绍自己的选择，比如选择志愿清理城市公园，说明理由是维护城市整洁，最后收尾点出这类活动能收获社会经验，度过有意义的暑假，全程注意语句衔接自然，控制总词数符合要求。
【解析】
1. 承接给定开篇，先介绍John的活动：使用一般将来时说明John打算参观杭州博物馆，对应理由补充为可以了解更多杭州的历史，符合表格提示。
2. 接下来过渡介绍Lisa的选择：说明Lisa打算参与志愿义卖旧物的活动，对应理由补充为为住院的患病儿童筹款，还可以适当加细节说明能给孩子们带去鼓励。
3. 过渡到自己的安排：说明自己选择志愿清理城市公园，具体可以做捡拾公园周边垃圾的工作，理由是维护城市的干净整洁。
4. 最后收尾升华，点明大家都能从这些社会实践中收获社会经验，度过一个有意义的暑假，通读全文调整语句，检查语法错误，确认词数在要求区间内，没有出现真实人名校名等违规信息。
【答案】
One possible version:
During this coming summer vacation, my classmates want to take part in different social practical activities. John is going to visit Hangzhou Museum. It is a good place to learn more about the history of Hangzhou. But Lisa has a different idea. She is going to volunteer to sell old things with her friends. In this way, they can raise money for sick children in the hospital and cheer them up.
As for me, I will volunteer to clean up the city park. I'll pick up rubbish in and around the park. I think it is important to keep our city clean and tidy. I'm sure we will get a lot of social experience through these activities and have a meaningful summer vacation.
【知识点】
一般将来时应用；提纲类英语写作；社会实践话题表达
【点评】
本篇短文完整覆盖了题干表格给出的全部要点，补充的内容贴合主题逻辑合理，时态使用准确，语句衔接流畅自然，词数符合要求，既清晰介绍了两位同学的活动选择和初衷，也说明了自身选择的理由，最后点明社会实践的意义，完全符合班级日志的发布场景，是一篇符合要求的优秀范文。
【难度系数】
0.7
首先拿到这道书面表达题，第一步先明确写作要求：需要覆盖表格里John、Lisa的全部活动和对应理由，还要补充自己的社会实践选择及理由，时态以一般将来时为主，词数控制在80-100，不能出现真实个人信息。接下来梳理写作逻辑：第一部分承接题目给出的开头句，先介绍John的安排：说明他计划参观杭州博物馆，把“learn more about”的内容具体化，比如了解杭州的历史文化；第二部分介绍Lisa的计划：她要参与义卖旧物的志愿活动，把“raise money for”的内容补充为为患病儿童筹款；第三部分介绍自己的选择，比如选择志愿清理城市公园，说明理由是维护城市整洁，最后收尾点出这类活动能收获社会经验，度过有意义的暑假，全程注意语句衔接自然，控制总词数符合要求。
【解析】
1. 承接给定开篇，先介绍John的活动：使用一般将来时说明John打算参观杭州博物馆，对应理由补充为可以了解更多杭州的历史，符合表格提示。
2. 接下来过渡介绍Lisa的选择：说明Lisa打算参与志愿义卖旧物的活动，对应理由补充为为住院的患病儿童筹款，还可以适当加细节说明能给孩子们带去鼓励。
3. 过渡到自己的安排：说明自己选择志愿清理城市公园，具体可以做捡拾公园周边垃圾的工作，理由是维护城市的干净整洁。
4. 最后收尾升华，点明大家都能从这些社会实践中收获社会经验，度过一个有意义的暑假，通读全文调整语句，检查语法错误，确认词数在要求区间内，没有出现真实人名校名等违规信息。
【答案】
One possible version:
During this coming summer vacation, my classmates want to take part in different social practical activities. John is going to visit Hangzhou Museum. It is a good place to learn more about the history of Hangzhou. But Lisa has a different idea. She is going to volunteer to sell old things with her friends. In this way, they can raise money for sick children in the hospital and cheer them up.
As for me, I will volunteer to clean up the city park. I'll pick up rubbish in and around the park. I think it is important to keep our city clean and tidy. I'm sure we will get a lot of social experience through these activities and have a meaningful summer vacation.
【知识点】
一般将来时应用；提纲类英语写作；社会实践话题表达
【点评】
本篇短文完整覆盖了题干表格给出的全部要点，补充的内容贴合主题逻辑合理，时态使用准确，语句衔接流畅自然，词数符合要求，既清晰介绍了两位同学的活动选择和初衷，也说明了自身选择的理由，最后点明社会实践的意义，完全符合班级日志的发布场景，是一篇符合要求的优秀范文。
【难度系数】
0.7
