经典例题
请根据下面的故事梗概,发挥想象力,以“Two little pigs”为题写一则80词左右的小故事。
时间:从前
地点:森林里
人物:幸福的猪妈妈和两只小猪
情节:两只小猪长大了,猪妈妈决定让他们走出森林,到城市去……
Two little pigs

Once upon a time, there were two little pigs. One was black and the other was white. They lived a happy life with their mother in the forest. When they grew up, their mother decided to let them go out of the forest and look around the city. So they set off from home, taking some food with them. Once they got to the city, they noticed people in the city were not really happy. So they returned to the forest and enjoyed their life.

【分析】
拿到这道写作题首先要先梳理题干给出的全部既定要素：时间是从前、地点在森林、人物是猪妈妈和两只小猪、核心触发情节是小猪长大后猪妈妈让他们离开森林去城市。首先第一步开篇先把给定的背景信息全部交代清楚，选用故事常用的一般过去时作为统一时态，接着顺着情节推进，补充少量合理的细节让故事更饱满，最后给故事加一个逻辑自洽的收尾，全程控制总词数在80词左右，不要遗漏题干给出的任何关键信息点。
【解析】
1. 开篇用经典故事开头语Once upon a time点明时间背景，依次介绍两只小猪的存在，交代他们和猪妈妈在森林里过着幸福生活的初始设定，完整覆盖题干给出的基础人物、地点要素。
2. 顺着题干给出的情节推进：说明两只小猪长大后，猪妈妈做出让他们走出森林去城市看一看的决定，补充“带上食物出发”的小细节让情节更真实自然。
3. 补充合理的后续情节形成完整故事闭环：两只小猪抵达城市后发现城市里的人并不开心，于是返回森林享受原本的幸福生活，整体篇幅符合80词左右的要求，时态统一、语句通顺。
【答案】
Once upon a time, there were two little pigs. One was black and the other was white. They lived a happy life with their mother in the forest. When they grew up, their mother decided to let them go out of the forest and look around the city. So they set off from home, taking some food with them. Once they got to the city, they noticed people in the city were not really happy. So they returned to the forest and enjoyed their life.
【知识点】
英语故事写作，一般过去时，叙事逻辑搭建
【点评】
该范文完整覆盖了题干给出的全部设定要点，补充的情节合理有正向寓意，叙事流畅自然，时态使用准确，篇幅完全符合题目要求，是非常规范的短篇小故事参考范例。同学们完成这类写作时要注意先把题干给出的所有既定要素全部落实到文中，再补充少量合理细节，就能轻松写出合格的短文。
【难度系数】
0.7