56. 请根据下面的表格信息,写一篇英语短文,介绍你过去两周的周末活动,并对比两个周末的不同感受。

要求:
(1)不少于60个词;
(2)需包含所有要点,切勿逐字逐句翻译,可在此基础上适当发挥;
(3)不得使用真实的姓名和校名;
(4)字迹工整,表达准确,条理清晰。
要求:
(1)不少于60个词;
(2)需包含所有要点,切勿逐字逐句翻译,可在此基础上适当发挥;
(3)不得使用真实的姓名和校名;
(4)字迹工整,表达准确,条理清晰。
答案
My Two Different Weekends
I had two very different but pleasant weekends in the past two weeks.
The weekend before last, I hung out with my friends. We had a tasty picnic in the park, rode bikes on the path and took many lovely photos. All of us had so much fun, I felt it was really a great and unforgettable weekend.
Last weekend, I spent most of the time at home. I cleaned my room carefully and washed all my clothes. Then I went to the shop nearby and bought a new film magazine. I felt very relaxed and fine, it was a quiet but nice weekend.
I had two very different but pleasant weekends in the past two weeks.
The weekend before last, I hung out with my friends. We had a tasty picnic in the park, rode bikes on the path and took many lovely photos. All of us had so much fun, I felt it was really a great and unforgettable weekend.
Last weekend, I spent most of the time at home. I cleaned my room carefully and washed all my clothes. Then I went to the shop nearby and bought a new film magazine. I felt very relaxed and fine, it was a quiet but nice weekend.
解析
这是一篇英语记叙文写作题,写作思路如下:
1. 时态选择:描述过去发生的周末活动,全文统一使用一般过去时,贴合六年级已掌握的知识点。
2. 内容安排:开篇总起引出要介绍过去两周的周末,先介绍the weekend before last的全部活动,补充细节说明愉悦的感受;再介绍last weekend的所有活动,说明闲适的体验,最后自然对比两个周末的不同体验,覆盖全部表格要点,适当补充内容满足字数要求,符合题目所有规则。
1. 时态选择:描述过去发生的周末活动,全文统一使用一般过去时,贴合六年级已掌握的知识点。
2. 内容安排:开篇总起引出要介绍过去两周的周末,先介绍the weekend before last的全部活动,补充细节说明愉悦的感受;再介绍last weekend的所有活动,说明闲适的体验,最后自然对比两个周末的不同体验,覆盖全部表格要点,适当补充内容满足字数要求,符合题目所有规则。
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