写作提优
答案 D15
单元写作要求
本单元以“DIY”为话题，主要谈论手工DIY，包括制作目的、制作过程、制作感受等相关内容。其书面表达命题形式主要是要求学生写一篇文章，讲述手工DIY的经历。
写作方法策略
如何写与“DIY”相关的文章
写这类文章时，首先要确定四要素——体裁、时态、人称、结构。文章开篇要引出话题，简要叙

答案略

【分析】写DIY相关的记叙文，需先明确四要素：体裁为记叙文，时态以一般过去时为主（讲述经历），人称用第一人称，结构分为开篇引DIY话题、中间详述制作目的与过程、结尾表达制作感受。写作时要紧扣主题，内容具体，逻辑清晰。
【解析】1. 开篇：点明要分享一次DIY经历，引出话题；2. 主体：说明DIY的目的（如锻炼动手能力），按时间顺序叙述制作的具体步骤（如准备材料、操作过程）；3. 结尾：表达制作后的感受（如成就感、对DIY的喜爱），完成写作。
【答案】答案略
【知识点】英语记叙文写作、DIY话题写作
【点评】本题围绕单元话题“DIY”考查记叙文写作，需明确写作要素，结构完整，内容贴合主题，符合单元写作要求。
【难度系数】0.5

还此次 DIY 活动的时间、地点和目的等背景信息；主体部分要详细介绍 DIY 的过程；最后，抒情并总结感想。
思路导引
背景信息
制作过程
抒情总结
佳作展示
Last weekend, I decided to try paper-cutting after seeing beautiful designs online. ① Although I had no experience, I was excited to create something with my own hands.
② First, I carefully read the instructions and prepared red paper and a pair of scissors. Next, I folded the paper as directed, but ③ made a mistake in the folding direction, ④ leaving my workspace in a mess. Feeling disappointed, I almost gave up. But I restarted with patience and double-checked each step. Finally, I cut along the lines slowly, and when I unfolded the paper, a lively flower pattern appeared!
My heart was filled with joy when I saw the finished work. ⑤ This paper-cutting experience not only helped me develop hands-on skills but also taught me that every failure is a stepping stone to success.
高分词句
①运用 although 引导让步状语从句。
②运用 first, next, finally 描述 DIY 步骤，使文章条理清晰，富有层次。
③运用高级词组 make a mistake, in a mess, give up, be filled with。
④运用现在分词短语作结果状语。
⑤运用 not only ... but also ... 结构，表示：不仅……而且……。

符合写作要求的完整参考范文如下：
Last weekend, I decided to try paper-cutting after seeing beautiful designs online. Although I had no experience, I was excited to create something with my own hands.
First, I carefully read the instructions and prepared red paper and a pair of scissors. Next, I folded the paper as directed, but made a mistake in the folding direction, leaving my workspace in a mess. Feeling disappointed, I almost gave up. But I restarted with patience and double-checked each step. Finally, I cut along the lines slowly, and when I unfolded the paper, a lively flower pattern appeared!
My heart was filled with joy when I saw the finished work. This paper-cutting experience not only helped me develop hands-on skills but also taught me that every failure is a stepping stone to success.

【分析】本题是英语写作题，要求围绕DIY活动完成短文，需涵盖背景信息、制作过程、抒情总结三个核心部分，写作时需运用给定的高分句式（让步状语从句、步骤连接词、现在分词作结果状语、not only...but also...结构），保证内容条理清晰、情感真实，符合写作要求。
【解析】首先交代DIY活动的背景：时间（上周末）、起因（看到网上剪纸设计），用Although引导让步状语从句体现“无经验但有热情”的状态；接着用First、Next、Finally等连接词详细描述制作过程，加入折错方向、弄乱 workspace 的小挫折及克服挫折的细节，让过程真实可感；最后抒发感想，用not only...but also...结构点明活动收获，升华主题。
【答案】Last weekend, I decided to try paper-cutting after seeing beautiful designs online. Although I had no experience, I was excited to create something with my own hands.
First, I carefully read the instructions and prepared red paper and a pair of scissors. Next, I folded the paper as directed, but made a mistake in the folding direction, leaving my workspace in a mess. Feeling disappointed, I almost gave up. But I restarted with patience and double-checked each step. Finally, I cut along the lines slowly, and when I unfolded the paper, a lively flower pattern appeared!
My heart was filled with joy when I saw the finished work. This paper-cutting experience not only helped me develop hands-on skills but also taught me that every failure is a stepping stone to success.
【知识点】英语应用文写作、英语句式运用、英语写作逻辑
【点评】该范文紧扣DIY写作要求，结构完整清晰，运用了多种高分句式，过程描写具体生动，情感表达真挚，是一篇符合要求的优秀短文。
【难度系数】0.6

话题写作积累
1. 引起某人注意
2. 倒下；倒塌
3. 把 A 用胶水粘到 B 上
4. 减少浪费
5. 我的邻居天生就是一个手巧的人，他对 DIY 很热衷。

6. 你应该组装一个书架，这样找书就很简单了。

7. 剪刀很危险，所以你最好不要在做 DIY 工作时玩剪刀。

8. 最好的工具莫过于我们的双手。

1. catch one's eye
2. fall over
3. glue A onto B
4. reduce waste
5. My neighbour, as a born handyman, is crazy about DIY.
6. You should put together a book shelf so that it's easy to find books.
7. Scissors are dangerous, so you'd better not play with them when you do DIY jobs.
8. There is no better tool than our hands.

【分析】本题为英语短语及句子翻译题，解题思路是结合中文含义，匹配对应的英语固定短语、常用句型及表达，注意短语的固定搭配（如介词、动词搭配），句子需符合英语语法结构（如状语从句、固定句式），确保翻译准确、符合英语表达习惯。
【解析】1. “引起某人注意”是英语固定短语，对应catch one's eye；2. “倒下；倒塌”对应固定短语fall over；3. “把A用胶水粘到B上”是固定搭配glue A onto B；4. “减少浪费”为动词短语，对应reduce waste；5. 句子翻译：“我的邻居”译为My neighbour，“天生就是一个手巧的人”译为as a born handyman，“对DIY很热衷”译为be crazy about DIY，组合为My neighbour, as a born handyman, is crazy about DIY；6. “组装”译为put together，“书架”译为book shelf，“这样找书就很简单了”用so that引导目的状语从句，组合为You should put together a book shelf so that it's easy to find books；7. “剪刀很危险”译为Scissors are dangerous，“最好不要做某事”译为had better not do sth，“玩剪刀”用them指代scissors，“做DIY工作”译为do DIY jobs，组合为Scissors are dangerous, so you'd better not play with them when you do DIY jobs；8. “最好的工具莫过于我们的双手”用固定句式There is no better...than...，组合为There is no better tool than our hands。
【答案】1. catch one's eye；2. fall over；3. glue A onto B；4. reduce waste；5. My neighbour, as a born handyman, is crazy about DIY.；6. You should put together a book shelf so that it's easy to find books.；7. Scissors are dangerous, so you'd better not play with them when you do DIY jobs.；8. There is no better tool than our hands.
【知识点】英语固定短语、英语句子翻译、常用英语句型
【点评】本题围绕DIY话题，考察基础英语短语和句子的翻译，侧重常用表达的积累，是英语学习中基础巩固类题目，难度适中。
【难度系数】0.4