写作指导
在英语课上,老师要求同学们描述照片中人物的活动情况。下面的图片是朱莉(Julie)一家的生活照,请根据图片内容,用现在进行时描述一下朱莉一家的生活片段(其中第三幅图中的女孩是朱莉),60词左右。文章开头已给出,不计入总词数。

Here are some photos of Julie's family.
写作佳句
1. 现在是晚上九点。
It's
2. 朱莉的妈妈正忙着擦地板。
Julie's mother
3. 她正在打电话。
She
4. 朱莉的弟弟呢?
5. 他们度过了一个忙碌但快乐的夜晚。
They have a
思路导引
1. 人称:第
2. 时态:
3. 体裁:
4. 列提纲

在英语课上,老师要求同学们描述照片中人物的活动情况。下面的图片是朱莉(Julie)一家的生活照,请根据图片内容,用现在进行时描述一下朱莉一家的生活片段(其中第三幅图中的女孩是朱莉),60词左右。文章开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Here are some photos of Julie's family.
写作佳句
1. 现在是晚上九点。
It's
nine
o'clock
in the evening.2. 朱莉的妈妈正忙着擦地板。
Julie's mother
is
busy
cleaning
the floor.3. 她正在打电话。
She
is
talking
on
the phone.4. 朱莉的弟弟呢?
What
about
Julie's younger brother?5. 他们度过了一个忙碌但快乐的夜晚。
They have a
busy
but
happy
evening.思路导引
1. 人称:第
三
人称2. 时态:
现在进行时
3. 体裁:
记叙文
4. 列提纲
答案
【写作佳句】
1. nine o'clock 2. is busy cleaning 3. is talking on 4. What about/How about 5. busy but happy
【思路导引】
1. 三 2. 现在进行时 3. 记叙文
写作范例
Here are some photos of Julie's family. It's nine o'clock in the evening. Julie's father is reading the newspaper and Julie's mother is busy cleaning the floor. Julie is doing her homework in her room. What is Julie's sister doing? She is talking on the phone. What about Julie's younger brother? Oh, he is playing with a toy car. They have a busy but happy evening.
1. nine o'clock 2. is busy cleaning 3. is talking on 4. What about/How about 5. busy but happy
【思路导引】
1. 三 2. 现在进行时 3. 记叙文
写作范例
Here are some photos of Julie's family. It's nine o'clock in the evening. Julie's father is reading the newspaper and Julie's mother is busy cleaning the floor. Julie is doing her homework in her room. What is Julie's sister doing? She is talking on the phone. What about Julie's younger brother? Oh, he is playing with a toy car. They have a busy but happy evening.
解析
【解析】
1. 写作佳句需结合中文提示,运用现在进行时等语法知识补全句子;
2. 思路导引明确写作的人称、时态和体裁,为短文写作指明方向;
3. 短文写作需依据图片内容,用现在进行时描述朱莉一家的活动,结合给定开头完成60词左右的语段。
【答案】
【写作佳句】
1. nine o'clock
2. is busy cleaning
3. is talking on
4. What about/How about
5. busy but happy
【思路导引】
1. 三
2. 现在进行时
3. 记叙文
【参考短文】
Here are some photos of Julie's family. It's nine o'clock in the evening. Julie's father is reading the newspaper and Julie's mother is busy cleaning the floor. Julie is doing her homework in her room. What is Julie's sister doing? She is talking on the phone. What about Julie's younger brother? Oh, he is playing with a toy car. They have a busy but happy evening.
【知识点】
现在进行时运用,英语情景写作,句子补全技巧
【点评】
本题将语法填空与情景写作结合,既巩固现在进行时的用法,又提升学生的英语综合表达能力,场景贴近生活,能有效锻炼学生的观察和语言组织能力。
【难度系数】
0.6
1. 写作佳句需结合中文提示,运用现在进行时等语法知识补全句子;
2. 思路导引明确写作的人称、时态和体裁,为短文写作指明方向;
3. 短文写作需依据图片内容,用现在进行时描述朱莉一家的活动,结合给定开头完成60词左右的语段。
【答案】
【写作佳句】
1. nine o'clock
2. is busy cleaning
3. is talking on
4. What about/How about
5. busy but happy
【思路导引】
1. 三
2. 现在进行时
3. 记叙文
【参考短文】
Here are some photos of Julie's family. It's nine o'clock in the evening. Julie's father is reading the newspaper and Julie's mother is busy cleaning the floor. Julie is doing her homework in her room. What is Julie's sister doing? She is talking on the phone. What about Julie's younger brother? Oh, he is playing with a toy car. They have a busy but happy evening.
【知识点】
现在进行时运用,英语情景写作,句子补全技巧
【点评】
本题将语法填空与情景写作结合,既巩固现在进行时的用法,又提升学生的英语综合表达能力,场景贴近生活,能有效锻炼学生的观察和语言组织能力。
【难度系数】
0.6
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