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假如你是萨莉，你们学校英语社团本周正在开展以“Healthy Eating,Healthy Life”为主题的讨论。请你据此写一篇英语发言稿，介绍一下日常生活中饮食方面存在的问题和带来的不良后果，以及你的看法和建议。
要求:1.语言流畅、书写规范，词数不少于80；
2.可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。
假如你是萨莉，你们学校英语社团本周正在开展以“Healthy Eating,Healthy Life”为主题的讨论。请你据此写一篇英语发言稿，介绍一下日常生活中饮食方面存在的问题和带来的不良后果，以及你的看法和建议。
要求:1.语言流畅、书写规范，词数不少于80；
2.可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。
答案
One possible version:
Dear friends,
I am Li Hua. I'm very happy to talk about eat-
ing habits today. Now, more people focus on
healthy eating. However, some of us have un-
healthy eating habits. I think it's a big problem.
As we all know, some of us don't have a bal-
anced diet. Some don't have meals on time. Still
others never eat breakfast to lose their weight. So
they eat snacks or junk food when they are hungry.
Unhealthy eating habits are bad for our health.
Some of us have weight problems because of too
much junk food while others don't have enough en-
ergy without breakfast. So it is necessary for us to
develop a healthy eating habit and keep a balanced
diet. Let's say No to junk food and have meals on
time. Only in this way, can we grow healthily and
have a happy life!
Dear friends,
I am Li Hua. I'm very happy to talk about eat-
ing habits today. Now, more people focus on
healthy eating. However, some of us have un-
healthy eating habits. I think it's a big problem.
As we all know, some of us don't have a bal-
anced diet. Some don't have meals on time. Still
others never eat breakfast to lose their weight. So
they eat snacks or junk food when they are hungry.
Unhealthy eating habits are bad for our health.
Some of us have weight problems because of too
much junk food while others don't have enough en-
ergy without breakfast. So it is necessary for us to
develop a healthy eating habit and keep a balanced
diet. Let's say No to junk food and have meals on
time. Only in this way, can we grow healthily and
have a happy life!
解析
【分析】
拿到这道题首先要明确写作要求：文体是英语主题发言稿，场景是校园英语社团的主题讨论，核心主题是"Healthy Eating, Healthy Life"，需要覆盖三个必写要点：1. 日常饮食中存在的不良问题 2. 这些问题带来的负面影响 3. 对应的个人看法与改进建议。首先第一步先搭建文章框架：开头问候听众，自我介绍直接点明发言主题；中间主体部分先列举身边常见的不健康饮食行为，再对应讲这些行为的危害，之后顺理成章给出合理可行的建议；最后收尾发出呼吁，呼应主题。写作过程中注意使用合适的衔接词让行文连贯，保证词数不低于80，贴合发言稿亲切自然的表达风格即可。
【解析】
写作可按照以下步骤完成：
1. 开篇引入：使用发言稿常用的问候语，简单自我介绍，直接引出本次发言围绕健康饮食习惯展开，贴合校园社团活动的场景。
2. 列举现存问题：结合学生日常的生活实际，写出身边普遍存在的饮食陋习，比如饮食结构不均衡、就餐时间不规律、为了减肥刻意不吃早餐、饥饿时用零食和垃圾食品替代正餐等内容。
3. 阐述不良后果：对应前面的问题说明危害，比如长期大量摄入垃圾食品容易引发体重超标问题，不吃早餐会导致上午精力不足，影响日常学习效率，长期下来身体素质会持续下降。
4. 给出建议与收尾：明确提出要养成规律就餐的习惯，保持膳食营养均衡，主动远离垃圾食品，最后用呼吁性的语句点题，说明只有做到健康饮食才能拥有健康的生活，还可以适当使用特色句式提升文章亮点。
【答案】
One possible version:
Dear friends,
I am Li Hua. I'm very happy to talk about eating habits today. Now, more people focus on healthy eating. However, some of us have unhealthy eating habits. I think it's a big problem.
As we all know, some of us don't have a balanced diet. Some don't have meals on time. Still others never eat breakfast to lose their weight. So they eat snacks or junk food when they are hungry.
Unhealthy eating habits are bad for our health. Some of us have weight problems because of too much junk food while others don't have enough energy without breakfast. So it is necessary for us to develop a healthy eating habit and keep a balanced diet. Let's say No to junk food and have meals on time. Only in this way, can we grow healthily and have a happy life!
【知识点】
1. 英语发言稿写作
2. 健康话题表达
3. 句式逻辑衔接
【点评】
本篇范文完整覆盖了题干要求的所有写作要点，逻辑层层递进，从点明主题到列举问题、阐述危害、给出建议再到最后呼吁，行文流畅连贯，还用到了as we all know、it is necessary for sb to do以及only开头引导的部分倒装等高分表达，完全符合校园社团发言的场景，词数远超最低要求，是一篇非常规范的同主题参考范文。学生写作时也可以结合自身生活体验补充更多细节，比如提到常喝奶茶、爱吃油炸食品等内容，让文章更有真实感。
【难度系数】
0.6
拿到这道题首先要明确写作要求：文体是英语主题发言稿，场景是校园英语社团的主题讨论，核心主题是"Healthy Eating, Healthy Life"，需要覆盖三个必写要点：1. 日常饮食中存在的不良问题 2. 这些问题带来的负面影响 3. 对应的个人看法与改进建议。首先第一步先搭建文章框架：开头问候听众，自我介绍直接点明发言主题；中间主体部分先列举身边常见的不健康饮食行为，再对应讲这些行为的危害，之后顺理成章给出合理可行的建议；最后收尾发出呼吁，呼应主题。写作过程中注意使用合适的衔接词让行文连贯，保证词数不低于80，贴合发言稿亲切自然的表达风格即可。
【解析】
写作可按照以下步骤完成：
1. 开篇引入：使用发言稿常用的问候语，简单自我介绍，直接引出本次发言围绕健康饮食习惯展开，贴合校园社团活动的场景。
2. 列举现存问题：结合学生日常的生活实际，写出身边普遍存在的饮食陋习，比如饮食结构不均衡、就餐时间不规律、为了减肥刻意不吃早餐、饥饿时用零食和垃圾食品替代正餐等内容。
3. 阐述不良后果：对应前面的问题说明危害，比如长期大量摄入垃圾食品容易引发体重超标问题，不吃早餐会导致上午精力不足，影响日常学习效率，长期下来身体素质会持续下降。
4. 给出建议与收尾：明确提出要养成规律就餐的习惯，保持膳食营养均衡，主动远离垃圾食品，最后用呼吁性的语句点题，说明只有做到健康饮食才能拥有健康的生活，还可以适当使用特色句式提升文章亮点。
【答案】
One possible version:
Dear friends,
I am Li Hua. I'm very happy to talk about eating habits today. Now, more people focus on healthy eating. However, some of us have unhealthy eating habits. I think it's a big problem.
As we all know, some of us don't have a balanced diet. Some don't have meals on time. Still others never eat breakfast to lose their weight. So they eat snacks or junk food when they are hungry.
Unhealthy eating habits are bad for our health. Some of us have weight problems because of too much junk food while others don't have enough energy without breakfast. So it is necessary for us to develop a healthy eating habit and keep a balanced diet. Let's say No to junk food and have meals on time. Only in this way, can we grow healthily and have a happy life!
【知识点】
1. 英语发言稿写作
2. 健康话题表达
3. 句式逻辑衔接
【点评】
本篇范文完整覆盖了题干要求的所有写作要点，逻辑层层递进，从点明主题到列举问题、阐述危害、给出建议再到最后呼吁，行文流畅连贯，还用到了as we all know、it is necessary for sb to do以及only开头引导的部分倒装等高分表达，完全符合校园社团发言的场景，词数远超最低要求，是一篇非常规范的同主题参考范文。学生写作时也可以结合自身生活体验补充更多细节，比如提到常喝奶茶、爱吃油炸食品等内容，让文章更有真实感。
【难度系数】
0.6
四、补充练习
根据短文内容，提取信息，填入表格。
Healthy eating habits are very important for us. We should eat different kinds of food to keep healthy.
First, we should eat enough fruit and vegetables every day. They are rich in vitamins and fiber. They can help us keep healthy. For example, an apple a day keeps the doctor away.
Second, we should eat some grains. They are the main source of energy for us. We can get energy from rice, bread, noodles and so on.
Third, we should eat some protein food, like meat, fish, eggs and milk. They can help our body grow and keep us strong.
Finally, we should drink enough water every day. Water is very important for our body. It helps us digest food and carry nutrients around our body.
1.
根据短文内容，提取信息，填入表格。
Healthy eating habits are very important for us. We should eat different kinds of food to keep healthy.
First, we should eat enough fruit and vegetables every day. They are rich in vitamins and fiber. They can help us keep healthy. For example, an apple a day keeps the doctor away.
Second, we should eat some grains. They are the main source of energy for us. We can get energy from rice, bread, noodles and so on.
Third, we should eat some protein food, like meat, fish, eggs and milk. They can help our body grow and keep us strong.
Finally, we should drink enough water every day. Water is very important for our body. It helps us digest food and carry nutrients around our body.
1.
rich
2. healthy
3. Eat
4. strong
5. Drink
答案
1. rich 2. healthy 3. Eat 4. strong
5. Drink
5. Drink
解析
【分析】
这是一道阅读信息提取类题目，解题思路非常明确：我们只需要对照表格每一行的提示，回到给出的短文中定位对应的原句，直接匹配提取对应的单词即可。首先逐行对应：先看第一行蔬果相关的理由，找到描述蔬果成分的原句填第1空，再找蔬果对人体的作用填第2空；接着观察Advice列的格式，都是动词原形开头的建议短语，对应谷物相关的原文填第3空；再定位蛋白质食物作用的原句填第4空；最后对应饮水相关的建议原文填第5空即可。
【解析】
我们逐空对照原文定位查找：
1. 定位原文第二段第二句"They are rich in vitamins and fiber"，固定搭配be rich in表示“富含”，因此此处填rich。
2. 定位原文第二段第三句"They can help us keep healthy"，keep healthy意为保持健康，因此此处填healthy。
3. 观察Advice列其余条目都是动词原形开头的祈使式建议，对应第三段第一句"we should eat some grains"，首字母大写，因此此处填Eat。
4. 定位原文第四段最后一句"They can help our body grow and keep us strong"，keep us strong意为让我们保持强壮，因此此处填strong。
5. 遵循Advice列的格式要求，对应最后一段第一句"we should drink enough water"，首字母大写，因此此处填Drink。
【答案】
1. rich 2. healthy 3. Eat 4. strong 5. Drink
【知识点】
阅读信息提取，固定短语搭配
【点评】
本题所有答案都可以直接从原文中定位获取，不需要额外推理，主要考察学生快速在阅读文本中定位关键信息的能力，同时也能帮助学生巩固和健康饮食相关的常用英语表达，难度较低。
【难度系数】
0.9
这是一道阅读信息提取类题目，解题思路非常明确：我们只需要对照表格每一行的提示，回到给出的短文中定位对应的原句，直接匹配提取对应的单词即可。首先逐行对应：先看第一行蔬果相关的理由，找到描述蔬果成分的原句填第1空，再找蔬果对人体的作用填第2空；接着观察Advice列的格式，都是动词原形开头的建议短语，对应谷物相关的原文填第3空；再定位蛋白质食物作用的原句填第4空；最后对应饮水相关的建议原文填第5空即可。
【解析】
我们逐空对照原文定位查找：
1. 定位原文第二段第二句"They are rich in vitamins and fiber"，固定搭配be rich in表示“富含”，因此此处填rich。
2. 定位原文第二段第三句"They can help us keep healthy"，keep healthy意为保持健康，因此此处填healthy。
3. 观察Advice列其余条目都是动词原形开头的祈使式建议，对应第三段第一句"we should eat some grains"，首字母大写，因此此处填Eat。
4. 定位原文第四段最后一句"They can help our body grow and keep us strong"，keep us strong意为让我们保持强壮，因此此处填strong。
5. 遵循Advice列的格式要求，对应最后一段第一句"we should drink enough water"，首字母大写，因此此处填Drink。
【答案】
1. rich 2. healthy 3. Eat 4. strong 5. Drink
【知识点】
阅读信息提取，固定短语搭配
【点评】
本题所有答案都可以直接从原文中定位获取，不需要额外推理，主要考察学生快速在阅读文本中定位关键信息的能力，同时也能帮助学生巩固和健康饮食相关的常用英语表达，难度较低。
【难度系数】
0.9
