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12. 运用以下思维导图，至少从 3 个方面描述一种你熟悉的动物，不少于 40 个单词。
animals
├─ appearance (外貌)
├─ diet (饮食)
├─ ability (能力)
├─ habitat (栖息地)
├─ location (分布地)
└─ others (其他)
animals
├─ appearance (外貌)
├─ diet (饮食)
├─ ability (能力)
├─ habitat (栖息地)
├─ location (分布地)
└─ others (其他)
答案
I choose to describe pandas. Pandas are one of the most beloved animals in the world.
Appearance: Pandas have a distinctive black and white coat. Their bodies are mainly white, with black patches around their eyes, ears, and on their limbs.
Diet: They mainly eat bamboo. Occasionally, they also eat some other plants and small animals.
Location: Pandas are mainly found in China, especially in Sichuan, Shaanxi and Gansu provinces.
Habitat: They live in dense bamboo forests in mountainous areas.
Ability: Although they look clumsy, pandas are good at climbing trees and can also swim well.
Pandas are rare and we should work together to protect them.
Appearance: Pandas have a distinctive black and white coat. Their bodies are mainly white, with black patches around their eyes, ears, and on their limbs.
Diet: They mainly eat bamboo. Occasionally, they also eat some other plants and small animals.
Location: Pandas are mainly found in China, especially in Sichuan, Shaanxi and Gansu provinces.
Habitat: They live in dense bamboo forests in mountainous areas.
Ability: Although they look clumsy, pandas are good at climbing trees and can also swim well.
Pandas are rare and we should work together to protect them.
解析
【分析】
这道题要求借助给定的动物主题思维导图，选取至少3个维度描述熟悉的动物，首先第一步可以优先选择特征鲜明、大众熟知的动物（比如大熊猫）作为描述对象，接下来对照思维导图给出的6个可选维度，挑选自己有把握写对的3个及以上方向，先开篇点明要描述的动物，再逐个维度填充符合动物真实特征的内容，最后补充收尾的总结句，保证总词数不少于40，语句通顺无语法错误即可完成作答。
【解析】
1. 开篇引入：直接点明本次要描述的动物是大熊猫，清晰引出写作主题。
2. 分维度展开描述：
① 外貌维度：介绍大熊猫标志性的黑白相间皮毛，说明躯体以白色为主，眼周、耳朵、四肢分布黑色斑块的外形特点；
② 饮食维度：说明大熊猫的主食是竹子，偶尔也会取食其他植物和小型动物；
③ 分布地维度：点明大熊猫主要分布在中国，集中在四川、陕西、甘肃等省份；
④ 栖息地维度：说明大熊猫栖息在山区的茂密竹林中；
⑤ 能力维度：补充大熊猫看似笨拙，实际擅长爬树、游泳的特点；
3. 收尾总结：点明大熊猫是珍稀动物，呼吁大家共同保护，整体内容连贯，覆盖远超3个要求的描述维度，词数符合题目要求。
【答案】
I choose to describe pandas. Pandas are one of the most beloved animals in the world.
Appearance: Pandas have a distinctive black and white coat. Their bodies are mainly white, with black patches around their eyes, ears, and on their limbs.
Diet: They mainly eat bamboo. Occasionally, they also eat some other plants and small animals.
Location: Pandas are mainly found in China, especially in Sichuan, Shaanxi and Gansu provinces.
Habitat: They live in dense bamboo forests in mountainous areas.
Ability: Although they look clumsy, pandas are good at climbing trees and can also swim well.
Pandas are rare and we should work together to protect them.
【知识点】
动物主题英语写作
结构化信息整合
英语说明文表达
【点评】
本题借助思维导图给学生搭建了清晰的写作框架，降低了动物主题写作的构思难度，避免学生写作时内容零散没有逻辑，学生只需要从给定的6个提示维度里挑选至少3个方向填充符合动物特征的正确内容即可完成作答，同时也能锻炼学生有条理输出英文内容的能力。
【难度系数】
0.7
这道题要求借助给定的动物主题思维导图，选取至少3个维度描述熟悉的动物，首先第一步可以优先选择特征鲜明、大众熟知的动物（比如大熊猫）作为描述对象，接下来对照思维导图给出的6个可选维度，挑选自己有把握写对的3个及以上方向，先开篇点明要描述的动物，再逐个维度填充符合动物真实特征的内容，最后补充收尾的总结句，保证总词数不少于40，语句通顺无语法错误即可完成作答。
【解析】
1. 开篇引入：直接点明本次要描述的动物是大熊猫，清晰引出写作主题。
2. 分维度展开描述：
① 外貌维度：介绍大熊猫标志性的黑白相间皮毛，说明躯体以白色为主，眼周、耳朵、四肢分布黑色斑块的外形特点；
② 饮食维度：说明大熊猫的主食是竹子，偶尔也会取食其他植物和小型动物；
③ 分布地维度：点明大熊猫主要分布在中国，集中在四川、陕西、甘肃等省份；
④ 栖息地维度：说明大熊猫栖息在山区的茂密竹林中；
⑤ 能力维度：补充大熊猫看似笨拙，实际擅长爬树、游泳的特点；
3. 收尾总结：点明大熊猫是珍稀动物，呼吁大家共同保护，整体内容连贯，覆盖远超3个要求的描述维度，词数符合题目要求。
【答案】
I choose to describe pandas. Pandas are one of the most beloved animals in the world.
Appearance: Pandas have a distinctive black and white coat. Their bodies are mainly white, with black patches around their eyes, ears, and on their limbs.
Diet: They mainly eat bamboo. Occasionally, they also eat some other plants and small animals.
Location: Pandas are mainly found in China, especially in Sichuan, Shaanxi and Gansu provinces.
Habitat: They live in dense bamboo forests in mountainous areas.
Ability: Although they look clumsy, pandas are good at climbing trees and can also swim well.
Pandas are rare and we should work together to protect them.
【知识点】
动物主题英语写作
结构化信息整合
英语说明文表达
【点评】
本题借助思维导图给学生搭建了清晰的写作框架，降低了动物主题写作的构思难度，避免学生写作时内容零散没有逻辑，学生只需要从给定的6个提示维度里挑选至少3个方向填充符合动物特征的正确内容即可完成作答，同时也能锻炼学生有条理输出英文内容的能力。
【难度系数】
0.7
