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1. 在所有这些美妙的艺术形式中，我最喜爱的是中国书法。(favourite)
2. 每当我书写时，内心都会变得平静而澄澈。(when)
3. 当我写出一幅好作品时，会感到无比自豪。(feel proud)
1. 在所有这些美妙的艺术形式中，我最喜爱的是中国书法。(favourite)
Among all these wonderful art forms, my favourite is Chinese calligraphy.
2. 每当我书写时，内心都会变得平静而澄澈。(when)
When I write, my mind becomes calm and clear.
3. 当我写出一幅好作品时，会感到无比自豪。(feel proud)
I feel proud when I create a good work.
答案
1. Among all these wonderful art forms, my favourite is Chinese calligraphy.
2. When I write, my mind becomes calm and clear.
3. I feel proud when I create a good work.
2. When I write, my mind becomes calm and clear.
3. I feel proud when I create a good work.
解析
【分析】
本题要求根据中文句子和括号内的提示词完成英语遣词造句，解题思路是：先明确句子核心结构，结合提示词的用法，按照英语表达习惯调整语序与用词，确保句子语法正确、语义通顺。具体步骤：1. 第一句用介词"among"表范围，结合提示词"favourite"对应“我最喜爱的”；2. 第二句用"when"引导时间状语从句，准确翻译“内心”“平静而澄澈”等表述；3. 第三句用提示词"feel proud"，结合"when"引导的从句翻译“写出一幅好作品”。
【解析】
1. 中文“在所有这些美妙的艺术形式中，我最喜爱的是中国书法”，“在...中”译为介词"Among"，“所有这些美妙的艺术形式”译为"all these wonderful art forms"，“我最喜爱的”用"my favourite"，“中国书法”是"Chinese calligraphy"，组合得：Among all these wonderful art forms, my favourite is Chinese calligraphy.
2. 中文“每当我书写时，内心都会变得平静而澄澈”，“每当...时”用"When"引导时间状语从句，“我书写”是"I write"，“内心”译为"my mind"，“变得”用系动词"becomes"，“平静而澄澈”是"calm and clear"，组合得：When I write, my mind becomes calm and clear.
3. 中文“当我写出一幅好作品时，会感到无比自豪”，“感到无比自豪”用提示词"feel proud"，“当...时”用"when"引导从句，“写出一幅好作品”译为"create a good work"，组合得：I feel proud when I create a good work.
【答案】
1. Among all these wonderful art forms, my favourite is Chinese calligraphy.
2. When I write, my mind becomes calm and clear.
3. I feel proud when I create a good work.
【知识点】
英语遣词造句、时间状语从句、常用短语搭配
【点评】
本题为基础英语遣词造句题，考察学生对时间状语从句、常用表达及提示词的运用能力，难度较低，掌握基本英语句式和词汇对应即可完成。
【难度系数】
0.3
本题要求根据中文句子和括号内的提示词完成英语遣词造句，解题思路是：先明确句子核心结构，结合提示词的用法，按照英语表达习惯调整语序与用词，确保句子语法正确、语义通顺。具体步骤：1. 第一句用介词"among"表范围，结合提示词"favourite"对应“我最喜爱的”；2. 第二句用"when"引导时间状语从句，准确翻译“内心”“平静而澄澈”等表述；3. 第三句用提示词"feel proud"，结合"when"引导的从句翻译“写出一幅好作品”。
【解析】
1. 中文“在所有这些美妙的艺术形式中，我最喜爱的是中国书法”，“在...中”译为介词"Among"，“所有这些美妙的艺术形式”译为"all these wonderful art forms"，“我最喜爱的”用"my favourite"，“中国书法”是"Chinese calligraphy"，组合得：Among all these wonderful art forms, my favourite is Chinese calligraphy.
2. 中文“每当我书写时，内心都会变得平静而澄澈”，“每当...时”用"When"引导时间状语从句，“我书写”是"I write"，“内心”译为"my mind"，“变得”用系动词"becomes"，“平静而澄澈”是"calm and clear"，组合得：When I write, my mind becomes calm and clear.
3. 中文“当我写出一幅好作品时，会感到无比自豪”，“感到无比自豪”用提示词"feel proud"，“当...时”用"when"引导从句，“写出一幅好作品”译为"create a good work"，组合得：I feel proud when I create a good work.
【答案】
1. Among all these wonderful art forms, my favourite is Chinese calligraphy.
2. When I write, my mind becomes calm and clear.
3. I feel proud when I create a good work.
【知识点】
英语遣词造句、时间状语从句、常用短语搭配
【点评】
本题为基础英语遣词造句题，考察学生对时间状语从句、常用表达及提示词的运用能力，难度较低，掌握基本英语句式和词汇对应即可完成。
【难度系数】
0.3
高分范文
| 升格前作文 | 升格后作文 |
| --- | --- |
| My favourite art form
Art is all around us. There're many forms of art in our life. Among all these wonderful art forms, my favourite is Chinese calligraphy.
I have been learning calligraphy for three years. ①I still remember the first time to hold the brush. I felt its weight and the smoothness of the ink. ②Calligraphy is not writing beautiful Chinese characters. | My favourite art form
Art is all around us. There're many forms of art in our life. Among all these wonderful art forms, my favourite is Chinese calligraphy.
I have been learning calligraphy for three years. ①I still remember the first time I held the brush.
→用定语从句升格
I felt its weight and the smoothness of the ink. ②Calligraphy is not just about writing beautiful Chinese characters.
→用 not just about... 升格 |
续表
| 升格前作文 | 升格后作文 |
| --- | --- |
| It teaches me patience and focus. Every stroke needs care and control. When I write, my mind becomes calm and clear.
Learning calligraphy also helps me understand Chinese culture better. I feel proud when I create a good work. ③It is a silent art. It speaks deeply to the heart. I will keep practising and enjoying this amazing art form. | It teaches me patience and focus. Every stroke needs care and control. When I write, my mind becomes calm and clear.
Learning calligraphy also helps me understand Chinese culture better. I feel proud when I create a good work.
③It is a silent art, but it speaks deeply to the heart.
→用 but 升格
I will keep practising and enjoying this amazing art form. |
实战演练
画家以作品传递美与力量，启迪人在逆境中坚守、于平凡中寻光，塑造乐观心态与坚定信念，指引人生有意义前行，请以“My favourite painter”为题写一篇短文。
【要点】1. Who is your favourite painter?
2. What is his/her painting style?
3. Why do you like him/her best?
【要求】1. 短文须包括提示内容，要求语句通顺、条理清晰、书写规范。
2. 词数不少于90，短文的开头已经给出，不计入总词数。
My favourite painter
My favourite painter is Xu Beihong,
| 升格前作文 | 升格后作文 |
| --- | --- |
| My favourite art form
Art is all around us. There're many forms of art in our life. Among all these wonderful art forms, my favourite is Chinese calligraphy.
I have been learning calligraphy for three years. ①I still remember the first time to hold the brush. I felt its weight and the smoothness of the ink. ②Calligraphy is not writing beautiful Chinese characters. | My favourite art form
Art is all around us. There're many forms of art in our life. Among all these wonderful art forms, my favourite is Chinese calligraphy.
I have been learning calligraphy for three years. ①I still remember the first time I held the brush.→用定语从句升格
I felt its weight and the smoothness of the ink. ②Calligraphy is not just about writing beautiful Chinese characters.
→用 not just about... 升格 |
续表
| 升格前作文 | 升格后作文 |
| --- | --- |
| It teaches me patience and focus. Every stroke needs care and control. When I write, my mind becomes calm and clear.
Learning calligraphy also helps me understand Chinese culture better. I feel proud when I create a good work. ③It is a silent art. It speaks deeply to the heart. I will keep practising and enjoying this amazing art form. | It teaches me patience and focus. Every stroke needs care and control. When I write, my mind becomes calm and clear.
Learning calligraphy also helps me understand Chinese culture better. I feel proud when I create a good work.
③It is a silent art, but it speaks deeply to the heart.→用 but 升格
I will keep practising and enjoying this amazing art form. |
实战演练
画家以作品传递美与力量，启迪人在逆境中坚守、于平凡中寻光，塑造乐观心态与坚定信念，指引人生有意义前行，请以“My favourite painter”为题写一篇短文。
【要点】1. Who is your favourite painter?
2. What is his/her painting style?
3. Why do you like him/her best?
【要求】1. 短文须包括提示内容，要求语句通顺、条理清晰、书写规范。
2. 词数不少于90，短文的开头已经给出，不计入总词数。
My favourite painter
My favourite painter is Xu Beihong,
one of China's greatest modern artists. He was famous for his horse paintings, which are full of power and energy.
Xu Beihong's works combine traditional Chinese painting skills with Western art styles, making his horses look vivid and lively as if they could run out of the paper. What I admire most is his love for the country—he used his paintings to encourage people during difficult times.
His spirit of combining tradition and innovation teaches me to be brave in trying new things. I also learn that art can convey strong feelings and positive values.
Xu Beihong's works combine traditional Chinese painting skills with Western art styles, making his horses look vivid and lively as if they could run out of the paper. What I admire most is his love for the country—he used his paintings to encourage people during difficult times.
His spirit of combining tradition and innovation teaches me to be brave in trying new things. I also learn that art can convey strong feelings and positive values.
答案
One possible version
My favourite painter
My favourite painter is Xu Beihong, one of China's greatest modern artists. He was famous for his horse paintings, which are full of power and energy.
Xu Beihong's works combine traditional Chinese painting skills with Western art styles, making his horses look vivid and lively as if they could run out of the paper. What I admire most is his love for the country—he used his paintings to encourage people during difficult times.
His spirit of combining tradition and innovation teaches me to be brave in trying new things. I also learn that art can convey strong feelings and positive values.
My favourite painter
My favourite painter is Xu Beihong, one of China's greatest modern artists. He was famous for his horse paintings, which are full of power and energy.
Xu Beihong's works combine traditional Chinese painting skills with Western art styles, making his horses look vivid and lively as if they could run out of the paper. What I admire most is his love for the country—he used his paintings to encourage people during difficult times.
His spirit of combining tradition and innovation teaches me to be brave in trying new things. I also learn that art can convey strong feelings and positive values.
解析
【分析】
本题为英语人物介绍类写作题，要求以“My favourite painter”为题完成短文，需覆盖三个核心要点：最喜欢的画家身份、其绘画风格、喜爱的原因。解题思路：1. 选取大众熟知且有丰富素材的画家（如徐悲鸿），确保内容可写；2. 按“身份→风格→喜爱原因”的逻辑展开，先承接给定开头补充画家身份，再用定语从句等句式介绍绘画风格，最后阐述喜爱的理由（结合艺术价值与精神启发）；3. 运用升格技巧（如定语从句、连词）丰富表达，保证语句通顺、词数达标。
【解析】
写作步骤：1. 承接开头“My favourite painter is Xu Beihong”，补充其身份：one of China's greatest modern artists；2. 介绍绘画风格：用定语从句说明“He was famous for his horse paintings, which are full of power and energy. His works combine traditional Chinese painting skills with Western art styles, making his horses vivid and lively”；3. 阐述喜爱原因：提及他用画作在困难时期鼓励国人，以及其“结合传统与创新”的精神对自己的启发，说明艺术可传递正能量；4. 检查内容覆盖所有要点，语句通顺，词数符合要求。
【答案】
One possible version
My favourite painter
My favourite painter is Xu Beihong, one of China's greatest modern artists. He was famous for his horse paintings, which are full of power and energy.
Xu Beihong's works combine traditional Chinese painting skills with Western art styles, making his horses look vivid and lively as if they could run out of the paper. What I admire most is his love for the country—he used his paintings to encourage people during difficult times.
His spirit of combining tradition and innovation teaches me to be brave in trying new things. I also learn that art can convey strong feelings and positive values.
【知识点】
英语人物介绍写作，英语短文写作，定语从句运用
【点评】
本题考查初中/高中阶段英语人物介绍类写作能力，要求结合给定要点完成内容，注重语言表达的丰富性与内容完整性，需学生掌握基本写作结构及常用句式，是常见的英语写作题型。
【难度系数】
0.6
本题为英语人物介绍类写作题，要求以“My favourite painter”为题完成短文，需覆盖三个核心要点：最喜欢的画家身份、其绘画风格、喜爱的原因。解题思路：1. 选取大众熟知且有丰富素材的画家（如徐悲鸿），确保内容可写；2. 按“身份→风格→喜爱原因”的逻辑展开，先承接给定开头补充画家身份，再用定语从句等句式介绍绘画风格，最后阐述喜爱的理由（结合艺术价值与精神启发）；3. 运用升格技巧（如定语从句、连词）丰富表达，保证语句通顺、词数达标。
【解析】
写作步骤：1. 承接开头“My favourite painter is Xu Beihong”，补充其身份：one of China's greatest modern artists；2. 介绍绘画风格：用定语从句说明“He was famous for his horse paintings, which are full of power and energy. His works combine traditional Chinese painting skills with Western art styles, making his horses vivid and lively”；3. 阐述喜爱原因：提及他用画作在困难时期鼓励国人，以及其“结合传统与创新”的精神对自己的启发，说明艺术可传递正能量；4. 检查内容覆盖所有要点，语句通顺，词数符合要求。
【答案】
One possible version
My favourite painter
My favourite painter is Xu Beihong, one of China's greatest modern artists. He was famous for his horse paintings, which are full of power and energy.
Xu Beihong's works combine traditional Chinese painting skills with Western art styles, making his horses look vivid and lively as if they could run out of the paper. What I admire most is his love for the country—he used his paintings to encourage people during difficult times.
His spirit of combining tradition and innovation teaches me to be brave in trying new things. I also learn that art can convey strong feelings and positive values.
【知识点】
英语人物介绍写作，英语短文写作，定语从句运用
【点评】
本题考查初中/高中阶段英语人物介绍类写作能力，要求结合给定要点完成内容，注重语言表达的丰富性与内容完整性，需学生掌握基本写作结构及常用句式，是常见的英语写作题型。
【难度系数】
0.6
