写作应用
假如暑期你和父母一起去了乌江画廊（Wujiang River Gallery）游玩。下面是你的手账记录，请根据记录的信息，写一篇日记描述你的经历和感受。

注意:文中不得透露个人真实信息;词数80左右。







请使用下面的表格完成自评并修改、誊写你的作文。

One possible version:
Sunday,10th August
This summer vacation,I went to Wujiang River Gallery on vacation with my parents. It was sunny and hot,so we decided to drive there.
We left early in the morning and got there at nine. First,we went boating on the lake. We waited for over half an hour for the boat because there were too many people. We enjoyed everything around the lake. Then,we ate something special there for lunch. The food was so delicious that we wanted to take some back home. In the afternoon,we took quite a few photos and I bought some gifts for my friends.
What a great place! It was wonderful for people to get close to nature. I feel like going there again.

【分析】本题要求写一篇暑期与父母同游乌江画廊的日记，需遵循日记标准格式（标注日期、天气），以时间为线索梳理游玩经历：出行方式、到达时间、上午活动（划船）、午餐、下午活动（拍照、买礼物），最后抒发游玩感受；写作时需使用一般过去时，词数控制在80左右，且不得透露个人真实信息，内容要连贯自然。
【解析】首先按日记格式开头，写出具体日期和天气；接着交代出行时间、方式；按顺序叙述上午排队划船、欣赏景色，午餐品尝特色美食，下午拍照、买礼物的经历；最后表达对此次游玩的喜爱，呼应主题，确保符合词数要求。
【答案】One possible version:
Sunday,10th August
This summer vacation,I went to Wujiang River Gallery on vacation with my parents. It was sunny and hot,so we decided to drive there.
We left early in the morning and got there at nine. First,we went boating on the lake. We waited for over half an hour for the boat because there were too many people. We enjoyed everything around the lake. Then,we ate something special there for lunch. The food was so delicious that we wanted to take some back home. In the afternoon,we took quite a few photos and I bought some gifts for my friends.
What a great place! It was wonderful for people to get close to nature. I feel like going there again.
【知识点】英语日记写作、一般过去时
【点评】本题结合暑期游玩的真实场景，考查学生游记类日记的写作能力，要求学生能合理安排写作顺序，运用正确时态表达内容，贴近学生生活实际，符合初中英语写作的考查方向。
【难度系数】0.6

你的美国笔友 Peter 下周想来你的城市旅游。请你根据下面的提示，为他设计一天的行程安排。

One possible version:
An unforgettable one-day trip
Bayi Square watch the flag-raising ceremony
Bayi Uprising Memorial Hall learn about the history
Tengwang Pavilion enjoy the beautiful scenery of the Ganjiang River
Wanshou Palace Historical and Cultural District try delicious local food;enjoy the amazing night view;take photos

【分析】首先需确定一天行程的主题，再根据提示的地点与对应活动，将地点和其要完成的事项一一匹配，用简洁的英语表达，符合行程安排的逻辑。先明确主题为“An unforgettable one-day trip”，再依次对应各个地点及活动：八一广场对应看升旗仪式，八一起义纪念馆对应了解历史，滕王阁对应欣赏赣江美景，万寿宫历史文化街区对应品尝美食、欣赏夜景、拍照，确保内容贴合要求。
【解析】1. 确定行程主题为“An unforgettable one-day trip”；2. 匹配地点与活动：Bayi Square对应watch the flag-raising ceremony，Bayi Uprising Memorial Hall对应learn about the history，Tengwang Pavilion对应enjoy the beautiful scenery of the Ganjiang River，Wanshou Palace Historical and Cultural District对应try delicious local food; enjoy the amazing night view; take photos；3. 按要求整理成清晰的行程安排，语言简洁准确。
【答案】An unforgettable one-day trip
Bayi Square watch the flag-raising ceremony
Bayi Uprising Memorial Hall learn about the history
Tengwang Pavilion enjoy the beautiful scenery of the Ganjiang River
Wanshou Palace Historical and Cultural District try delicious local food;enjoy the amazing night view;take photos
【知识点】英语应用文写作、词汇运用、日常表达
【点评】本题结合插图考查英语行程设计写作，要求学生能根据提示匹配地点与活动，语言需简洁通顺，符合日常行程安排的表达习惯，是常见的英语写作题型。
【难度系数】0.5