写作应用
学校英文报正在举办以“美好的校园生活”为主题的征文活动。假如你是张明，你的校园生活丰富多彩，有许多令人难忘的时刻和特别的场所。请根据以下提示问题，以“The Most Unforgettable Place in School”为题，写一篇英语短文分享你的校园一角。
What is the most unforgettable place in your school?
What activities do you often do there?
Why is this place special to you?
Something more about it.
注意：文中不得透露个人真实信息；词数100词左右；开头已给出，不计入总词数。
The Most Unforgettable Place in School
My name is Zhang Ming, and I study at Sunshine Middle School.



请使用下面的表格完成自评并修改、誊写你的作文。

One possible version:
The Most Unforgettable Place in School
My name is Zhang Ming, and I study at Sunshine Middle School. The playground is the most unforgettable place in my school.
I often play basketball with classmates, run with friends, and even sit on the grass to chat or enjoy the sunset there. What makes it special is the laughter and warm memories. Last month, our class had a basketball match. We fell behind at first, but everyone cheered us on. We worked together and won the match in the end. Hugging each other on the playground, I realized teamwork and friendship are more important than victory.
The playground holds our youth and growth. Every time I step on it, those sweet moments come back to life.

【分析】
这是一篇以“The Most Unforgettable Place in School”为题的英语记叙文写作，解题思路如下：1. 先承接给定开头，明确最难忘的校园场所；2. 围绕“常做的活动”，用一般现在时描述日常行为；3. 针对“特别的原因”，结合具体过去事件，用一般过去时体现情感与意义；4. 注意要求：第一人称、词数100左右、满足自评表格的各项指标，最后检查拼写语法。
【解析】
1. 承接开头点明核心场所：The playground is the most unforgettable place in my school.
2. 描述日常活动（一般现在时）：I often play basketball with classmates, run with friends, and even sit on the grass to chat or enjoy the sunset there.
3. 说明特别原因（结合过去事件，一般过去时）：What makes it special is the laughter and warm memories. Last month, our class had a basketball match. We fell behind at first, but everyone cheered us on. We worked together and won the match in the end. Hugging each other on the playground, I realized teamwork and friendship are more important than victory.
4. 结尾升华呼应主题：The playground holds our youth and growth. Every time I step on it, those sweet moments come back to life.
【答案】
One possible version:
The Most Unforgettable Place in School
My name is Zhang Ming, and I study at Sunshine Middle School. The playground is the most unforgettable place in my school.
I often play basketball with classmates, run with friends, and even sit on the grass to chat or enjoy the sunset there. What makes it special is the laughter and warm memories. Last month, our class had a basketball match. We fell behind at first, but everyone cheered us on. We worked together and won the match in the end. Hugging each other on the playground, I realized teamwork and friendship are more important than victory.
The playground holds our youth and growth. Every time I step on it, those sweet moments come back to life.
【知识点】
英语记叙文写作；时态运用；第一人称写作
【点评】
本文紧扣主题，完整回应所有提示问题，人称、时态使用正确，内容丰富且有具体事例支撑，句型多样，行文连贯，符合初中英语写作的优秀标准。
【难度系数】
0.6

九(3)班举办了一场“美好回忆分享会”。同学们主动分享了自己本学期最难忘的记忆。
任务一:请根据对应图片内容,为空格处补充适当的词完成句子。

①Tom:The best memory for me was winning the basketball game. I still remember the final winning shot looked like.
②Alice:I'm so grateful to my deskmate. I finally understood sharing knowledge makes us both better.
③Brian:Organizing the Art Festival taught me a lot. I learned to turn a good idea into reality.
④Lily:Our failed experiment was also meaningful. It made me wonder we will try it again next term.

①what ②that ③how ④whether/if

【分析】
本题考查英语宾语从句引导词的用法，需结合句子结构、句意判断引导词：①句中宾语从句缺表语指代事物；②句中宾语从句结构完整；③句中宾语从句表方式；④句中宾语从句表疑问是否，据此选择对应引导词。
【解析】
①句：I still remember后接宾语从句，从句中“the final winning shot looked like”缺少表语，指代“什么样的”，故用what；
②句：I finally understood后接宾语从句，从句“sharing knowledge makes us both better”结构完整，不缺成分，故用无实义的that；
③句：I learned后接宾语从句，从句表达“如何把好主意变成现实”，表方式，故用how；
④句：It made me wonder后接宾语从句，从句表“是否下学期会再试”，表疑问是否，故用whether/if。
【答案】
①what ②that ③how ④whether/if
【知识点】
宾语从句引导词
【点评】
本题为初中英语基础考点，需掌握不同类型宾语从句的引导词选择规则，难度适中。
【难度系数】
0.5

任务二:你是如何保存自己的美好回忆的？请口头分享给大家。

I like taking photos because I believe that they can tell stories. /...
(答案不唯一,仅供参考)

【分析】本题为开放性口语表达题，要求围绕“如何保存美好回忆”用英语进行口头分享，需先确定一种具体的保存方式（如拍照、写日记等），再用通顺的英语句子说明选择该方式的理由，符合日常话题表达的要求即可。
【解析】首先明确保存美好回忆的具体方式，例如选择拍照，随后组织通顺的英语句子表达观点，如“I like taking photos because I believe that they can tell stories.”，语句清晰，符合口语表达的语境，答案不唯一，合理即可。
【答案】I like taking photos because I believe that they can tell stories.
【知识点】英语口语表达、话题写作
【点评】本题贴近学生日常生活，为开放性试题，考查学生围绕指定话题用英语表达观点的能力，鼓励学生结合自身实际作答，体现了语言的实用性。
【难度系数】0.3