Ⅳ. 书面表达。
假定你校英文校刊Youth Voice开设了“New Start”专栏,面向七年级同学征稿。请以“My First Week in Junior High”为题,写一篇短文,分享你初中第一周最难忘的一个瞬间(如第一节课、认识新朋友、参加活动等)。
内容要点:
1. 发生了什么;
2. 你当时的感受;
3. 你的收获或接下来的打算。
要求:
1. 补充完整首句;
2. 要点齐全,适当拓展;
3. 80词左右(文章首句不计入总词数)。
My First Week in Junior High
My first week in junior high was
假定你校英文校刊Youth Voice开设了“New Start”专栏,面向七年级同学征稿。请以“My First Week in Junior High”为题,写一篇短文,分享你初中第一周最难忘的一个瞬间(如第一节课、认识新朋友、参加活动等)。
内容要点:
1. 发生了什么;
2. 你当时的感受;
3. 你的收获或接下来的打算。
要求:
1. 补充完整首句;
2. 要点齐全,适当拓展;
3. 80词左右(文章首句不计入总词数)。
My First Week in Junior High
My first week in junior high was
unforgettable
. On the first day, I was nervous but excited. In the English class, our teacher asked us to introduce ourselves. I was too shy to speak at first, but my desk-mate encouraged me. Finally, I finished my introduction and got applause. I felt proud and happy. This experience taught me to be brave. In the future, I will try to take part in class activities actively and make more friends. I believe my junior high life will be wonderful!
答案
One possible version:
My First Week in Junior High.
My first week in junior high was unforgettable. On the first day, I was nervous but excited. In the English class, our teacher asked us to introduce ourselves. I was too shy to speak at first, but my desk-mate encouraged me. Finally, I finished my introduction and got applause. I felt proud and happy. This experience taught me to be brave. In the future, I will try to take part in class activities actively and make more friends. I believe my junior high life will be wonderful!
My First Week in Junior High.
My first week in junior high was unforgettable. On the first day, I was nervous but excited. In the English class, our teacher asked us to introduce ourselves. I was too shy to speak at first, but my desk-mate encouraged me. Finally, I finished my introduction and got applause. I felt proud and happy. This experience taught me to be brave. In the future, I will try to take part in class activities actively and make more friends. I believe my junior high life will be wonderful!
解析
【分析】
首先明确题目要求:需以“My First Week in Junior High”为题,补充首句,分享初中第一周最难忘的瞬间,要包含“发生的事、当时的感受、收获/打算”三个要点,词数80左右。解题思路:1. 补充首句要点明核心(如unforgettable);2. 选取贴合七年级学生的具体难忘场景(如第一节课的自我介绍);3. 按要点展开内容,语言简洁通顺,符合七年级英语水平。
【解析】
1. 补充首句:结合主题补充为“unforgettable”,引出下文;
2. 选取具体场景:英语课上的自我介绍,符合学生真实经历;
3. 按要点写作:①事件:第一天英语课老师让自我介绍,起初害羞,同桌鼓励后完成;②感受:骄傲开心;③收获/打算:学会勇敢,未来积极参与班级活动、交更多朋友;
4. 调整词数,确保符合80词左右的要求,语言自然流畅。
【答案】
One possible version:
My First Week in Junior High.
My first week in junior high was unforgettable. On the first day, I was nervous but excited. In the English class, our teacher asked us to introduce ourselves. I was too shy to speak at first, but my desk-mate encouraged me. Finally, I finished my introduction and got applause. I felt proud and happy. This experience taught me to be brave. In the future, I will try to take part in class activities actively and make more friends. I believe my junior high life will be wonderful!
【知识点】
英语书面表达、初中英语写作
【点评】
该范文符合题目要求,补充了首句,选取真实的初中第一周经历,要点齐全,语言通顺自然,情感表达真实,符合七年级学生的写作水平,是一篇优秀的范文。
【难度系数】
0.6
首先明确题目要求:需以“My First Week in Junior High”为题,补充首句,分享初中第一周最难忘的瞬间,要包含“发生的事、当时的感受、收获/打算”三个要点,词数80左右。解题思路:1. 补充首句要点明核心(如unforgettable);2. 选取贴合七年级学生的具体难忘场景(如第一节课的自我介绍);3. 按要点展开内容,语言简洁通顺,符合七年级英语水平。
【解析】
1. 补充首句:结合主题补充为“unforgettable”,引出下文;
2. 选取具体场景:英语课上的自我介绍,符合学生真实经历;
3. 按要点写作:①事件:第一天英语课老师让自我介绍,起初害羞,同桌鼓励后完成;②感受:骄傲开心;③收获/打算:学会勇敢,未来积极参与班级活动、交更多朋友;
4. 调整词数,确保符合80词左右的要求,语言自然流畅。
【答案】
One possible version:
My First Week in Junior High.
My first week in junior high was unforgettable. On the first day, I was nervous but excited. In the English class, our teacher asked us to introduce ourselves. I was too shy to speak at first, but my desk-mate encouraged me. Finally, I finished my introduction and got applause. I felt proud and happy. This experience taught me to be brave. In the future, I will try to take part in class activities actively and make more friends. I believe my junior high life will be wonderful!
【知识点】
英语书面表达、初中英语写作
【点评】
该范文符合题目要求,补充了首句,选取真实的初中第一周经历,要点齐全,语言通顺自然,情感表达真实,符合七年级学生的写作水平,是一篇优秀的范文。
【难度系数】
0.6
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