五、音乐将世间万物都带入了美好的时空,音乐可以让人们忘却烦恼与不快。音乐,拥有无穷的魅力!请你以“The Magic of Music”为题,并根据以下写作要点和写作要求,用英语写一篇短文。
写作要点:
1. 你为什么喜欢音乐;
2. 音乐对你产生了什么样的影响;
3. 你对音乐的看法。
写作要求:
1. 短文应包含以上所有提示信息,可适当发挥;
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称;
3. 词数100左右(文中已给出内容不计入总词数)。
The Magic of Music
Music is very important in my daily life.
写作要点:
1. 你为什么喜欢音乐;
2. 音乐对你产生了什么样的影响;
3. 你对音乐的看法。
写作要求:
1. 短文应包含以上所有提示信息,可适当发挥;
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称;
3. 词数100左右(文中已给出内容不计入总词数)。
The Magic of Music
Music is very important in my daily life.
答案
I like it because it can take me into a beautiful world. When I listen to it, all my worries and sadness go away. It makes me feel happy.
Listening to music is my favourite way to relax after a busy day.
Music has a great influence on me.
When I am tired or upset, music helps me calm down and cheer up. It is like a good friend that always stays with me. It also gives me courage when I face difficulties.
In my opinion, music is the most beautiful language in the world. It is full of magic and warmth. With music around me, my life is full of joy and happiness. I can't imagine life without music.
Listening to music is my favourite way to relax after a busy day.
Music has a great influence on me.
When I am tired or upset, music helps me calm down and cheer up. It is like a good friend that always stays with me. It also gives me courage when I face difficulties.
In my opinion, music is the most beautiful language in the world. It is full of magic and warmth. With music around me, my life is full of joy and happiness. I can't imagine life without music.
解析
【分析】这是一道英语写作题,主题为“The Magic of Music”,需紧扣三个写作要点展开:1. 说明喜欢音乐的原因;2. 阐述音乐对自己的影响;3. 表达对音乐的看法。写作时要承接已给开头,语言通顺,覆盖所有要点,符合词数要求,避免真实姓名、学校等信息。
【解析】先承接已给句,说明喜欢音乐的原因是能带入美好世界、消除烦恼;接着阐述音乐的影响,如放松身心、陪伴自己、给予面对困难的勇气;最后表达对音乐的看法,认为音乐是充满魔力与温暖的最美语言,让生活充满快乐。
【答案】I like it because it can take me into a beautiful world. When I listen to it, all my worries and sadness go away. It makes me feel happy. Listening to music is my favourite way to relax after a busy day. Music has a great influence on me. When I am tired or upset, music helps me calm down and cheer up. It is like a good friend that always stays with me. It also gives me courage when I face difficulties. In my opinion, music is the most beautiful language in the world. It is full of magic and warmth. With music around me, my life is full of joy and happiness. I can't imagine life without music.
【知识点】英语写作,观点表达
【点评】本题考查学生围绕指定主题和要点进行英语写作的能力,要求语言通顺、要点齐全,符合初中英语写作的常规考查方向,侧重学生的语言组织与表达能力。
【难度系数】0.6
【解析】先承接已给句,说明喜欢音乐的原因是能带入美好世界、消除烦恼;接着阐述音乐的影响,如放松身心、陪伴自己、给予面对困难的勇气;最后表达对音乐的看法,认为音乐是充满魔力与温暖的最美语言,让生活充满快乐。
【答案】I like it because it can take me into a beautiful world. When I listen to it, all my worries and sadness go away. It makes me feel happy. Listening to music is my favourite way to relax after a busy day. Music has a great influence on me. When I am tired or upset, music helps me calm down and cheer up. It is like a good friend that always stays with me. It also gives me courage when I face difficulties. In my opinion, music is the most beautiful language in the world. It is full of magic and warmth. With music around me, my life is full of joy and happiness. I can't imagine life without music.
【知识点】英语写作,观点表达
【点评】本题考查学生围绕指定主题和要点进行英语写作的能力,要求语言通顺、要点齐全,符合初中英语写作的常规考查方向,侧重学生的语言组织与表达能力。
【难度系数】0.6
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