四、假如最近你结交了一个新朋友,请根据以下信息和要求,用英语写一篇短文把她介绍给你的同班同学。

要求:
1. 必须包含以上所有提示信息,可适当发挥;
2. 词数60左右。
要求:
1. 必须包含以上所有提示信息,可适当发挥;
2. 词数60左右。
Hello, everyone. I have a new friend,
and she is from Singapore. Her name is Doris
Brown. Doris is her first name and Brown is
her last name. She is 13 years old. She is
really a nice girl. She is very friendly, kind
and helpful. She likes drawing and riding the
bike in her free time. She loves hot pot and
chicken very much. If you want to be her
friend, you can call her. Her phone number
is 336-6589.
答案
Hello, everyone. I have a new friend,
and she is from Singapore. Her name is Doris
Brown. Doris is her first name and Brown is
her last name. She is 13 years old. She is
really a nice girl. She is very friendly, kind
and helpful. She likes drawing and riding the
bike in her free time. She loves hot pot and
chicken very much. If you want to be her
friend, you can call her. Her phone number
is 336-6589.
and she is from Singapore. Her name is Doris
Brown. Doris is her first name and Brown is
her last name. She is 13 years old. She is
really a nice girl. She is very friendly, kind
and helpful. She likes drawing and riding the
bike in her free time. She loves hot pot and
chicken very much. If you want to be her
friend, you can call her. Her phone number
is 336-6589.
解析
【分析】本题要求用英语介绍新朋友,需整合表格中所有提示信息,采用“打招呼→引出朋友→依次介绍各项信息→联系方式”的逻辑结构,适当添加简单修饰词使语句通顺,控制词数在60左右,确保覆盖所有要求内容。
【解析】写作时,先以“Hello, everyone.”开头引出新朋友;依次介绍姓名(Doris Brown,区分first name与last name)、年龄(13)、国籍(Singapore);再描述性格(friendly, kind, helpful);说明爱好(draw, ride the bike)与喜爱的食物(hot pot, chicken);最后给出联系方式(电话336-6589),适当添加“really a nice girl”等表述让内容自然,符合词数要求。
【答案】Hello, everyone. I have a new friend,and she is from Singapore. Her name is Doris Brown. Doris is her first name and Brown is her last name. She is 13 years old. She is really a nice girl. She is very friendly, kind and helpful. She likes drawing and riding the bike in her free time. She loves hot pot and chicken very much. If you want to be her friend, you can call her. Her phone number is 336-6589.
【知识点】英语应用文写作、信息整合表达
【点评】短文完整覆盖所有提示信息,结构清晰,语句通顺,用词符合初中英语水平,适当添加合理修饰,满足词数要求,符合题目各项要求。
【难度系数】0.7
【解析】写作时,先以“Hello, everyone.”开头引出新朋友;依次介绍姓名(Doris Brown,区分first name与last name)、年龄(13)、国籍(Singapore);再描述性格(friendly, kind, helpful);说明爱好(draw, ride the bike)与喜爱的食物(hot pot, chicken);最后给出联系方式(电话336-6589),适当添加“really a nice girl”等表述让内容自然,符合词数要求。
【答案】Hello, everyone. I have a new friend,and she is from Singapore. Her name is Doris Brown. Doris is her first name and Brown is her last name. She is 13 years old. She is really a nice girl. She is very friendly, kind and helpful. She likes drawing and riding the bike in her free time. She loves hot pot and chicken very much. If you want to be her friend, you can call her. Her phone number is 336-6589.
【知识点】英语应用文写作、信息整合表达
【点评】短文完整覆盖所有提示信息,结构清晰,语句通顺,用词符合初中英语水平,适当添加合理修饰,满足词数要求,符合题目各项要求。
【难度系数】0.7
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