八、书面表达
假设你是李华,你们学校正在对本校学生的英语学习情况进行调查,并征求同学们对英语教学的建议。请按照下表提示,用英语写一篇短文,谈谈你的英语学习情况以及你对老师教学的建议。
|项目|内容|
|对英语的认识|使用广泛涵盖世界上不同的文化|
|目前的英语水平|能进行简单的交流去年在演讲比赛中获奖……|
|存在的问题|不能正确运用语法规则写作中有时不能清楚地表达自己……|
|对英语教学的建议|……(自拟至少一点)|

注意:
(1)所写内容必须包括表格中所提供的信息,可作适当发挥;
(2)词数 90 左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
I am Li Hua.
I hope our school will consider my advice.
假设你是李华,你们学校正在对本校学生的英语学习情况进行调查,并征求同学们对英语教学的建议。请按照下表提示,用英语写一篇短文,谈谈你的英语学习情况以及你对老师教学的建议。
|项目|内容|
|对英语的认识|使用广泛涵盖世界上不同的文化|
|目前的英语水平|能进行简单的交流去年在演讲比赛中获奖……|
|存在的问题|不能正确运用语法规则写作中有时不能清楚地表达自己……|
|对英语教学的建议|……(自拟至少一点)|
注意:
(1)所写内容必须包括表格中所提供的信息,可作适当发挥;
(2)词数 90 左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
I am Li Hua.
I think English is widely used around the world and it covers different cultures. Now I can communicate with others in simple English. I even won a prize in the speech competition last year. I also enjoy reading simple English stories. However, I have some problems. I can't use grammar rules correctly and sometimes I can't express myself clearly in writing. Listening is a bit difficult for me too. I hope our teachers can organize more group discussions in class. It will help us practice speaking better.
I hope our school will consider my advice.
答案
I am Li Hua. I think English is widely used around the world and it covers different cultures. Now I can communicate with others in simple English. I even won a prize in the speech competition last year. I also enjoy reading simple English stories. However, I have some problems. I can't use grammar rules correctly and sometimes I can't express myself clearly in writing. Listening is a bit difficult for me too. I hope our teachers can organize more group discussions in class. It will help us practice speaking better. I hope our school will consider my advice.
解析
1. 开篇点明对英语的认识:使用广泛且涵盖不同文化;2. 描述目前英语水平:能简单交流,去年演讲比赛获奖,可补充“阅读简单英文故事”;3. 阐述存在问题:语法运用不当,写作表达不清,可补充“听力有时困难”;4. 提出教学建议:增加小组讨论活动;5. 注意使用一般现在时和过去时,连接词恰当,控制词数。
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