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三 书面表达。
本单元围绕如何保持健康展开。我们要知道一些普通感冒症状及情绪相关的正确表述，学会提出建议并制订健康计划。
【写作指引】
本单元围绕如何保持健康展开。我们要知道一些普通感冒症状及情绪相关的正确表述，学会提出建议并制订健康计划。
【写作指引】
答案
How can we live a healthy life?
Last week I had a bad cold. I had a fever and coughed all day, I felt terrible and very sad. The doctor gave me a lot of good advice to keep healthy. I should do more exercise every day, like playing badminton with my friends. I need to eat more vegetables and fruit, and drink more warm water. I can also go to bed early and not stay up late to watch cartoons.
Health is very important to us. Good health helps us study and enjoy our daily life happily.
Last week I had a bad cold. I had a fever and coughed all day, I felt terrible and very sad. The doctor gave me a lot of good advice to keep healthy. I should do more exercise every day, like playing badminton with my friends. I need to eat more vegetables and fruit, and drink more warm water. I can also go to bed early and not stay up late to watch cartoons.
Health is very important to us. Good health helps us study and enjoy our daily life happily.
解析
【分析】
本题是英语书面表达题，围绕“如何保持健康”的单元主题写作，需遵循固定结构：开头引出健康话题，正文描述感冒症状或情绪并提出健康建议、规划健康生活，结尾总结健康的重要性。解题时，先确定开头用引出健康话题的问句，正文部分先举例感冒症状及对应情绪，再提出具体可操作的健康建议，结尾补充健康的重要意义，确保语句通顺、要点齐全。
【解析】
1. 开头：使用示例的“How can we live a healthy life?”引出健康话题，符合写作要求；
2. 正文：先描述自身感冒的症状（发烧、咳嗽）和情绪（难过），再结合医生建议提出具体健康计划：每天锻炼（如和朋友打羽毛球）、多吃蔬果多喝水、早睡不熬夜，内容贴合主题；
3. 结尾：先总结健康重要性，再补充健康对学习和生活的帮助，使内容更完整。
【答案】
How can we live a healthy life?
Last week I had a bad cold. I had a fever and coughed all day, I felt terrible and very sad. The doctor gave me a lot of good advice to keep healthy. I should do more exercise every day, like playing badminton with my friends. I need to eat more vegetables and fruit, and drink more warm water. I can also go to bed early and not stay up late to watch cartoons.
Health is very important to us. Good health helps us study and enjoy our daily life happily.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、健康话题表达、建议句型运用
【点评】
本题紧扣单元主题，明确给出写作结构指引，考查学生的英语综合运用能力，要求学生能准确描述症状、提出合理建议并总结健康的重要性，写作要点清晰，降低了写作难度，适合单元学习后的练习。
【难度系数】
0.4
本题是英语书面表达题，围绕“如何保持健康”的单元主题写作，需遵循固定结构：开头引出健康话题，正文描述感冒症状或情绪并提出健康建议、规划健康生活，结尾总结健康的重要性。解题时，先确定开头用引出健康话题的问句，正文部分先举例感冒症状及对应情绪，再提出具体可操作的健康建议，结尾补充健康的重要意义，确保语句通顺、要点齐全。
【解析】
1. 开头：使用示例的“How can we live a healthy life?”引出健康话题，符合写作要求；
2. 正文：先描述自身感冒的症状（发烧、咳嗽）和情绪（难过），再结合医生建议提出具体健康计划：每天锻炼（如和朋友打羽毛球）、多吃蔬果多喝水、早睡不熬夜，内容贴合主题；
3. 结尾：先总结健康重要性，再补充健康对学习和生活的帮助，使内容更完整。
【答案】
How can we live a healthy life?
Last week I had a bad cold. I had a fever and coughed all day, I felt terrible and very sad. The doctor gave me a lot of good advice to keep healthy. I should do more exercise every day, like playing badminton with my friends. I need to eat more vegetables and fruit, and drink more warm water. I can also go to bed early and not stay up late to watch cartoons.
Health is very important to us. Good health helps us study and enjoy our daily life happily.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、健康话题表达、建议句型运用
【点评】
本题紧扣单元主题，明确给出写作结构指引，考查学生的英语综合运用能力，要求学生能准确描述症状、提出合理建议并总结健康的重要性，写作要点清晰，降低了写作难度，适合单元学习后的练习。
【难度系数】
0.4
【写作实践】
请你根据思维导图，写一篇关于健康生活的短文。要求：语句通顺，不少于5句话，可以适当发挥。
请你根据思维导图，写一篇关于健康生活的短文。要求：语句通顺，不少于5句话，可以适当发挥。
How can we live a healthy life?
There are some good habits to stay healthy.
Have a healthy diet. Eat more fruit and vegetables. Don't stay up late. Students should sleep about ten hours every day.
Exercise often. We can play ball games or run every day. When we feel sad, we can think about our happy things.
Join clubs. We can make new friends there. Health is very important to us.
答案
How can we live a healthy life?
There are some good habits to stay healthy.
Have a healthy diet. Eat more fruit and vegetables. Don't stay up late. Students should sleep about ten hours every day. Exercise often. We can play ball games or run every day. When we feel sad, we can think about our happy things. Join clubs. We can make new friends there. Health is very important to us.
There are some good habits to stay healthy.
Have a healthy diet. Eat more fruit and vegetables. Don't stay up late. Students should sleep about ten hours every day. Exercise often. We can play ball games or run every day. When we feel sad, we can think about our happy things. Join clubs. We can make new friends there. Health is very important to us.
解析
【分析】
本次写作主题为“健康生活”，需围绕思维导图中的五个核心要点（健康饮食、不熬夜、日常锻炼、保持积极心态、加入俱乐部）展开。写作时先引出话题，再分点阐述每个健康习惯，适当补充细节（如睡眠时长、运动方式、俱乐部的作用等），确保语句通顺，不少于5句话，符合英语写作的连贯要求。
【解析】
1. 开篇点题：用“How can we live a healthy life?”引出健康生活的话题；
2. 分述健康习惯：依次围绕思维导图要点展开，补充细节（如学生每天睡约10小时、运动可选择打球或跑步等），覆盖所有核心内容；
3. 结尾升华：点明健康的重要性，使文章结构完整，语句连贯。
【答案】
How can we live a healthy life?
There are some good habits to stay healthy.
Have a healthy diet. Eat more fruit and vegetables. Don't stay up late. Students should sleep about ten hours every day. Exercise often. We can play ball games or run every day. When we feel sad, we can think about our happy things. Join clubs. We can make new friends there. Health is very important to us.
【知识点】
健康生活表达；英语写作连贯；日常习惯描述
【点评】
范文紧扣思维导图所有要点，开篇点题清晰，分述逻辑明确，适当补充细节丰富内容，语句通顺自然，符合写作要求，能有效展示健康生活的具体做法。
【难度系数】
0.5
本次写作主题为“健康生活”，需围绕思维导图中的五个核心要点（健康饮食、不熬夜、日常锻炼、保持积极心态、加入俱乐部）展开。写作时先引出话题，再分点阐述每个健康习惯，适当补充细节（如睡眠时长、运动方式、俱乐部的作用等），确保语句通顺，不少于5句话，符合英语写作的连贯要求。
【解析】
1. 开篇点题：用“How can we live a healthy life?”引出健康生活的话题；
2. 分述健康习惯：依次围绕思维导图要点展开，补充细节（如学生每天睡约10小时、运动可选择打球或跑步等），覆盖所有核心内容；
3. 结尾升华：点明健康的重要性，使文章结构完整，语句连贯。
【答案】
How can we live a healthy life?
There are some good habits to stay healthy.
Have a healthy diet. Eat more fruit and vegetables. Don't stay up late. Students should sleep about ten hours every day. Exercise often. We can play ball games or run every day. When we feel sad, we can think about our happy things. Join clubs. We can make new friends there. Health is very important to us.
【知识点】
健康生活表达；英语写作连贯；日常习惯描述
【点评】
范文紧扣思维导图所有要点，开篇点题清晰，分述逻辑明确，适当补充细节丰富内容，语句通顺自然，符合写作要求，能有效展示健康生活的具体做法。
【难度系数】
0.5
