写作示例
英语课上,老师让学生们介绍自己同桌的生活方式。请根据以下提示,写一篇英语短文介绍你的同桌李军的生活方式。词数70左右。
提示:
1. 他今年13岁;
2. 他经常吃猪肉和炸薯条,很少吃蔬菜和水果;
3. 他在两餐之间还吃甜点,很少运动;
4. 他决定改变不健康的生活方式。
审题指导:
体裁:记叙文 时态:一般现在时 人称:第三人称
写作框架:

64 英语 七年级 上册 译林版
优秀范文:

Li Jun is 13 years old. He is my deskmate, but he doesn't have a healthy lifestyle.
He often eats pork and French fries, and seldom eats vegetables or fruit. He also eats sweet food between meals and hardly plays sports.
Now he decides to change his bad habits. He plans to eat more healthy food and do exercise every day to keep fit.

【分析】
本次写作要求介绍同桌李军的生活方式，需遵循以下思路：1. 确定体裁为记叙文，时态用一般现在时，人称用第三人称；2. 按提示要点组织内容：先介绍李军的年龄与身份，再描述其不健康的生活习惯（饮食、运动两方面），最后点明他决定改变的想法；3. 控制词数在70左右，语言简洁准确，符合七年级英语写作要求。
【解析】
写作步骤如下：
1. 开篇点明李军的身份与年龄，引出其生活方式：Li Jun is 13 years old. He is my deskmate, but he doesn't have a healthy lifestyle.
2. 具体描述不健康的生活习惯，涵盖所有提示点：He often eats pork and French fries, and seldom eats vegetables or fruit. He also eats sweet food between meals and hardly plays sports.
3. 结尾点明他的改变决定与计划：Now he decides to change his bad habits. He plans to eat more healthy food and do exercise every day to keep fit.
【答案】
Li Jun is 13 years old. He is my deskmate, but he doesn't have a healthy lifestyle.
He often eats pork and French fries, and seldom eats vegetables or fruit. He also eats sweet food between meals and hardly plays sports.
Now he decides to change his bad habits. He plans to eat more healthy food and do exercise every day to keep fit.
【知识点】
英语记叙文写作、一般现在时运用、生活方式话题表达
【点评】
范文紧扣提示要点，结构清晰，语言简洁，准确运用相关词汇与时态，符合七年级学生的写作要求，完整完成了介绍同桌生活方式并点明改变的任务。
【难度系数】
0.5