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（2025·江苏泰州姜堰第四中学期中改编）根据表格内容，以“The changes in my hometown”为题，写一篇100词左右的短文。
【要求】1. 表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯。
2. 必须包括提示中的所有信息，并按要求适当发挥。
3. 100词左右。
4. 不得使用真实姓名。
The changes in my hometown
【要求】1. 表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯。
2. 必须包括提示中的所有信息，并按要求适当发挥。
3. 100词左右。
4. 不得使用真实姓名。
The changes in my hometown
答案
One possible version:
The changes in my hometown
My hometown is an old and beautiful city. In the past, my hometown was very small. People used to live a poor life. The houses used to be small. The traffic was not convenient. People used to walk or ride to the town.
Now great changes have taken place in my hometown. People live a better life. Their houses are large and bright. Many people have their own cars. People can take a bus or a taxi to the town. Every year, thousands of visitors from all over the world come to visit my hometown.
I'm sure my hometown will become better and better in the future!
The changes in my hometown
My hometown is an old and beautiful city. In the past, my hometown was very small. People used to live a poor life. The houses used to be small. The traffic was not convenient. People used to walk or ride to the town.
Now great changes have taken place in my hometown. People live a better life. Their houses are large and bright. Many people have their own cars. People can take a bus or a taxi to the town. Every year, thousands of visitors from all over the world come to visit my hometown.
I'm sure my hometown will become better and better in the future!
解析
【分析】
拿到这道写作题首先要明确核心主题是“家乡的变化”，第一步先梳理所有给定的提示要点，按照时间线搭建写作逻辑：开篇先介绍家乡的基本概况，点明它是古老美丽的城市；接下来描述过去的状态，覆盖城市规模小、人们常步行或骑自行车出行的要点，还可以补充少量符合逻辑的细节让内容更饱满；之后过渡到近年的变化，点明生活、交通的大幅改善，以及每年有大量世界各地游客到访的信息；最后收尾抒发个人对家乡变化的欣喜感受。写作时要注意区分时态：描述过去的内容用一般过去时，描述当下的变化用现在完成时或一般现在时，控制总词数在100词左右即可。
【解析】
这篇短文可以按照“总-分-总”的结构完成写作：
1. 开篇点题：直接说明我的家乡是一座古老而美丽的城市，开门见山引入主题。
2. 描述过去状况：用"In the past"作为时间标志，说明过去家乡的规模很小，人们过去生活条件普通，房屋狭小，交通不够便利，日常出行大多选择步行或者骑自行车，完整覆盖表格里的过去相关要点。
3. 描述近年变化：用"Now great changes have taken place"做过渡，说明家乡在生活、交通方面都发生了巨大改变：人们的居住条件大幅提升，房屋宽敞明亮，很多家庭拥有私家车，出行选择更多，每年都有成千上万来自世界各地的游客前来游览。
4. 收尾抒发感受：表达自己为家乡的变化感到欣喜，坚信家乡未来会发展得越来越好，完成所有提示信息的输出。
【答案】
The changes in my hometown
My hometown is an old and beautiful city. In the past, my hometown was very small. People used to live a poor life. The houses used to be small. The traffic was not convenient. People used to walk or ride to the town.
Now great changes have taken place in my hometown. People live a better life. Their houses are large and bright. Many people have their own cars. People can take a bus or a taxi to the town. Every year, thousands of visitors from all over the world come to visit my hometown.
I'm sure my hometown will become better and better in the future!
【知识点】
提纲类英语写作，时态辨析运用，话题作文表达
【点评】
本题是初中阶段非常典型的今昔对比类话题写作，核心考察学生对不同时间对应的英语时态的掌握能力，以及梳理写作逻辑、完整覆盖所有提示要点的能力。写作时只要注意不要混淆过去和现在的时态，适当补充符合生活逻辑的细节避免内容空洞，就可以写出符合要求的短文。
【难度系数】
0.7
拿到这道写作题首先要明确核心主题是“家乡的变化”，第一步先梳理所有给定的提示要点，按照时间线搭建写作逻辑：开篇先介绍家乡的基本概况，点明它是古老美丽的城市；接下来描述过去的状态，覆盖城市规模小、人们常步行或骑自行车出行的要点，还可以补充少量符合逻辑的细节让内容更饱满；之后过渡到近年的变化，点明生活、交通的大幅改善，以及每年有大量世界各地游客到访的信息；最后收尾抒发个人对家乡变化的欣喜感受。写作时要注意区分时态：描述过去的内容用一般过去时，描述当下的变化用现在完成时或一般现在时，控制总词数在100词左右即可。
【解析】
这篇短文可以按照“总-分-总”的结构完成写作：
1. 开篇点题：直接说明我的家乡是一座古老而美丽的城市，开门见山引入主题。
2. 描述过去状况：用"In the past"作为时间标志，说明过去家乡的规模很小，人们过去生活条件普通，房屋狭小，交通不够便利，日常出行大多选择步行或者骑自行车，完整覆盖表格里的过去相关要点。
3. 描述近年变化：用"Now great changes have taken place"做过渡，说明家乡在生活、交通方面都发生了巨大改变：人们的居住条件大幅提升，房屋宽敞明亮，很多家庭拥有私家车，出行选择更多，每年都有成千上万来自世界各地的游客前来游览。
4. 收尾抒发感受：表达自己为家乡的变化感到欣喜，坚信家乡未来会发展得越来越好，完成所有提示信息的输出。
【答案】
The changes in my hometown
My hometown is an old and beautiful city. In the past, my hometown was very small. People used to live a poor life. The houses used to be small. The traffic was not convenient. People used to walk or ride to the town.
Now great changes have taken place in my hometown. People live a better life. Their houses are large and bright. Many people have their own cars. People can take a bus or a taxi to the town. Every year, thousands of visitors from all over the world come to visit my hometown.
I'm sure my hometown will become better and better in the future!
【知识点】
提纲类英语写作，时态辨析运用，话题作文表达
【点评】
本题是初中阶段非常典型的今昔对比类话题写作，核心考察学生对不同时间对应的英语时态的掌握能力，以及梳理写作逻辑、完整覆盖所有提示要点的能力。写作时只要注意不要混淆过去和现在的时态，适当补充符合生活逻辑的细节避免内容空洞，就可以写出符合要求的短文。
【难度系数】
0.7
