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Ⅴ. 书面表达。
你的英国笔友David来信询问你们学校在暑假期间对学生的要求。请你根据以下要点给他回一封不少于80词的电子邮件。
1. 家庭安全：小心用火用电……
2. 游泳安全：不独自去游泳……
3. 交通安全：过马路要当心……
提示词：electricity电
注意：不要逐句翻译，可适当发挥。
你的英国笔友David来信询问你们学校在暑假期间对学生的要求。请你根据以下要点给他回一封不少于80词的电子邮件。
1. 家庭安全：小心用火用电……
2. 游泳安全：不独自去游泳……
3. 交通安全：过马路要当心……
提示词：electricity电
注意：不要逐句翻译，可适当发挥。
答案
One possible version:
Dear David,
Glad to receive your email. Our school has made many safety rules for us to follow during the summer holiday. Let me tell you something about them.
We are asked to be careful with electricity when we are using it. It is dangerous to play with fire, for it may cause terrible accidents. We should make sure doors and windows are shut when we leave. Besides, we are not allowed to swim alone, especially in deep rivers or lakes. If we really want to, we can go to the swimming pool with our parents or teachers. What's more, following traffic rules is also very important. Everyone should watch out when crossing the road. And our school warns us not to play on the road.
I think these rules are necessary as safety comes first.
Have a good summer holiday!
Yours,
Wang Wei
Dear David,
Glad to receive your email. Our school has made many safety rules for us to follow during the summer holiday. Let me tell you something about them.
We are asked to be careful with electricity when we are using it. It is dangerous to play with fire, for it may cause terrible accidents. We should make sure doors and windows are shut when we leave. Besides, we are not allowed to swim alone, especially in deep rivers or lakes. If we really want to, we can go to the swimming pool with our parents or teachers. What's more, following traffic rules is also very important. Everyone should watch out when crossing the road. And our school warns us not to play on the road.
I think these rules are necessary as safety comes first.
Have a good summer holiday!
Yours,
Wang Wei
解析
【分析】
首先明确文体为英文书信，收信人为英国笔友David，主题是介绍学校暑假期间的安全要求。解题思路：1. 开头问候并引出话题（告知收到来信，说明学校制定了暑假安全规则）；2. 主体部分分三个要点展开：家庭安全（小心用电、防火，离开时关门窗）、游泳安全（不独自游泳，可和家长/老师去泳池）、交通安全（过马路当心，不在路上玩耍），适当补充细节使内容连贯；3. 结尾总结安全第一的观点，祝福对方暑假愉快。需注意词数不少于80，避免逐句翻译，保持语言自然流畅。
【解析】
写作时遵循书信格式：开头用"Dear David"问候，说明收到来信后引出学校的暑假安全规则；主体部分依次阐述：①家庭安全：提醒小心用电，玩火危险，离开时关好门窗；②游泳安全：禁止独自去深水域游泳，可和家长/老师去泳池；③交通安全：过马路要当心，不要在马路上玩耍；结尾表达安全第一的观点，最后署名并祝福。
【答案】
One possible version:
Dear David,
Glad to receive your email. Our school has made many safety rules for us to follow during the summer holiday. Let me tell you something about them.
We are asked to be careful with electricity when we are using it. It is dangerous to play with fire, for it may cause terrible accidents. We should make sure doors and windows are shut when we leave. Besides, we are not allowed to swim alone, especially in deep rivers or lakes. If we really want to, we can go to the swimming pool with our parents or teachers. What's more, following traffic rules is also very important. Everyone should watch out when crossing the road. And our school warns us not to play on the road.
I think these rules are necessary as safety comes first.
Have a good summer holiday!
Yours,
Wang Wei
【知识点】
英语书信写作、安全话题表达、要点整合写作
【点评】
范文严格遵循书信格式，完整覆盖题目要求的三个安全要点，适当补充细节使内容充实，语言流畅自然，避免了逐句翻译，词数达标，是符合要求的优秀书面表达。
【难度系数】
0.5
首先明确文体为英文书信，收信人为英国笔友David，主题是介绍学校暑假期间的安全要求。解题思路：1. 开头问候并引出话题（告知收到来信，说明学校制定了暑假安全规则）；2. 主体部分分三个要点展开：家庭安全（小心用电、防火，离开时关门窗）、游泳安全（不独自游泳，可和家长/老师去泳池）、交通安全（过马路当心，不在路上玩耍），适当补充细节使内容连贯；3. 结尾总结安全第一的观点，祝福对方暑假愉快。需注意词数不少于80，避免逐句翻译，保持语言自然流畅。
【解析】
写作时遵循书信格式：开头用"Dear David"问候，说明收到来信后引出学校的暑假安全规则；主体部分依次阐述：①家庭安全：提醒小心用电，玩火危险，离开时关好门窗；②游泳安全：禁止独自去深水域游泳，可和家长/老师去泳池；③交通安全：过马路要当心，不要在马路上玩耍；结尾表达安全第一的观点，最后署名并祝福。
【答案】
One possible version:
Dear David,
Glad to receive your email. Our school has made many safety rules for us to follow during the summer holiday. Let me tell you something about them.
We are asked to be careful with electricity when we are using it. It is dangerous to play with fire, for it may cause terrible accidents. We should make sure doors and windows are shut when we leave. Besides, we are not allowed to swim alone, especially in deep rivers or lakes. If we really want to, we can go to the swimming pool with our parents or teachers. What's more, following traffic rules is also very important. Everyone should watch out when crossing the road. And our school warns us not to play on the road.
I think these rules are necessary as safety comes first.
Have a good summer holiday!
Yours,
Wang Wei
【知识点】
英语书信写作、安全话题表达、要点整合写作
【点评】
范文严格遵循书信格式，完整覆盖题目要求的三个安全要点，适当补充细节使内容充实，语言流畅自然，避免了逐句翻译，词数达标，是符合要求的优秀书面表达。
【难度系数】
0.5
