书面表达
假设你是李华,你的美国笔友 Jack 要来你的家乡合肥游玩,请根据以下要点提示给 Jack 写一封邮件。
要点:
1. 合肥位于安徽省中部;
2. 夏热冬冷,适合游玩的季节是春天;
3. 著名景点有巢湖、紫蓬山等。
提示词:巢湖 Chaohu Lake;紫蓬山 Zipeng Mountain
Dear Jack,
How is everything going?
Best wishes!
Li Hua
假设你是李华,你的美国笔友 Jack 要来你的家乡合肥游玩,请根据以下要点提示给 Jack 写一封邮件。
要点:
1. 合肥位于安徽省中部;
2. 夏热冬冷,适合游玩的季节是春天;
3. 著名景点有巢湖、紫蓬山等。
提示词:巢湖 Chaohu Lake;紫蓬山 Zipeng Mountain
Dear Jack,
How is everything going?
I'm very happy to get your letter. Now I'd like to tell you something about my hometown.
My hometown Hefei lies in the centre of Anhui Province. Here the weather is very hot in summer and cold in winter. It is very comfortable for you to travel in spring because the weather is good.
There are a lot of famous places of interest, such as Chaohu Lake and Zipeng Mountain. There are many buses to reach there. You can also take a taxi at any time.
I believe you'll have a good time when you come here.
Best wishes!
Li Hua
答案
One possible version:
Dear Jack,
How is everything going? I'm very happy to get your letter. Now I'd like to tell you something about my hometown.
My hometown Hefei lies in the centre of Anhui Province. Here the weather is very hot in summer and cold in winter. It is very comfortable for you to travel in spring because the weather is good. There are a lot of famous places of interest, such as Chaohu Lake and Zipeng Mountain. There are many buses to reach there. You can also take a taxi at any time. I believe you'll have a good time when you come here.
Best wishes!
Li Hua
Dear Jack,
How is everything going? I'm very happy to get your letter. Now I'd like to tell you something about my hometown.
My hometown Hefei lies in the centre of Anhui Province. Here the weather is very hot in summer and cold in winter. It is very comfortable for you to travel in spring because the weather is good. There are a lot of famous places of interest, such as Chaohu Lake and Zipeng Mountain. There are many buses to reach there. You can also take a taxi at any time. I believe you'll have a good time when you come here.
Best wishes!
Li Hua
解析
【分析】
本题是英语应用文写作(邮件),需围绕“向美国笔友Jack介绍家乡合肥”展开。解题思路:1. 遵循邮件格式,开头已给出,需补充中间主体内容和结尾;2. 覆盖所有要点:合肥的地理位置(安徽省中部)、气候与最佳游玩季节(夏热冬冷,春天适合)、著名景点(巢湖、紫蓬山);3. 补充合理细节(如交通方式)让内容连贯,语气亲切符合笔友间的交流风格,使用提示词规范。
【解析】
1. 开头承接问候,引出介绍家乡的主题;2. 依次说明合肥的地理位置(lies in the centre of Anhui Province);3. 描述气候(hot in summer, cold in winter),点明最佳游玩季节(spring);4. 列举著名景点(Chaohu Lake, Zipeng Mountain),补充交通建议(buses, taxi);5. 表达期待对方游玩愉快,结尾署名。
【答案】
One possible version:
Dear Jack,
How is everything going? I'm very happy to get your letter. Now I'd like to tell you something about my hometown.
My hometown Hefei lies in the centre of Anhui Province. Here the weather is very hot in summer and cold in winter. It is very comfortable for you to travel in spring because the weather is good. There are a lot of famous places of interest, such as Chaohu Lake and Zipeng Mountain. There are many buses to reach there. You can also take a taxi at any time. I believe you'll have a good time when you come here.
Best wishes!
Li Hua
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、地点描述表达、景点介绍句式
【点评】
范文完整覆盖所有要点,结构清晰,语言流畅自然,补充了合理的交通细节使内容更丰富,符合笔友间的交流语气,是符合要求的参考范文。
【难度系数】
0.5
本题是英语应用文写作(邮件),需围绕“向美国笔友Jack介绍家乡合肥”展开。解题思路:1. 遵循邮件格式,开头已给出,需补充中间主体内容和结尾;2. 覆盖所有要点:合肥的地理位置(安徽省中部)、气候与最佳游玩季节(夏热冬冷,春天适合)、著名景点(巢湖、紫蓬山);3. 补充合理细节(如交通方式)让内容连贯,语气亲切符合笔友间的交流风格,使用提示词规范。
【解析】
1. 开头承接问候,引出介绍家乡的主题;2. 依次说明合肥的地理位置(lies in the centre of Anhui Province);3. 描述气候(hot in summer, cold in winter),点明最佳游玩季节(spring);4. 列举著名景点(Chaohu Lake, Zipeng Mountain),补充交通建议(buses, taxi);5. 表达期待对方游玩愉快,结尾署名。
【答案】
One possible version:
Dear Jack,
How is everything going? I'm very happy to get your letter. Now I'd like to tell you something about my hometown.
My hometown Hefei lies in the centre of Anhui Province. Here the weather is very hot in summer and cold in winter. It is very comfortable for you to travel in spring because the weather is good. There are a lot of famous places of interest, such as Chaohu Lake and Zipeng Mountain. There are many buses to reach there. You can also take a taxi at any time. I believe you'll have a good time when you come here.
Best wishes!
Li Hua
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、地点描述表达、景点介绍句式
【点评】
范文完整覆盖所有要点,结构清晰,语言流畅自然,补充了合理的交通细节使内容更丰富,符合笔友间的交流语气,是符合要求的参考范文。
【难度系数】
0.5
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