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学生意外事故的发生会给许多家庭带来永久的伤痛。作为中学生，我们该如何有效地进行自我保护，免受伤害呢？我市正在举办以“How to Keep Safe”为题的中学生安全知识英语征文比赛，请你根据下表提示，写一篇80～100词的短文参赛。开头已给出，不计入总词数。
How to Keep Safe
Do you know that many dangerous things will happen if we are not careful enough? As a student, knowing how to keep safe is very important.
学生意外事故的发生会给许多家庭带来永久的伤痛。作为中学生，我们该如何有效地进行自我保护，免受伤害呢？我市正在举办以“How to Keep Safe”为题的中学生安全知识英语征文比赛，请你根据下表提示，写一篇80～100词的短文参赛。开头已给出，不计入总词数。
How to Keep Safe
Do you know that many dangerous things will happen if we are not careful enough? As a student, knowing how to keep safe is very important.
First, we should obey the traffic rules. When traffic lights are red, we shouldn't cross the road. And we shouldn't ride electric bikes.
Second, we shouldn't swim in the river because it's dangerous. We can go swimming with our parents in a swimming pool.
Third, we shouldn't tell strangers our ID number or code when we are surfing the internet. What's more, we shouldn't go out with our friends without our parents' permission. If we are in danger, we can ask our parents, teachers, or even the police for help.
After all, life is very important. We should learn something about self-protection so that we can protect ourselves well.
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How to Keep Safe
Do you know that many dangerous things will happen if we are not careful enough? As a student, knowing how to keep safe is very important.
First, we should obey the traffic rules. When traffic lights are red, we shouldn't cross the road. And we shouldn't ride electric bikes. Second, we shouldn't swim in the river because it's dangerous. We can go swimming with our parents in a swimming pool. Third, we shouldn't tell strangers our ID number or code when we are surfing the internet. What's more, we shouldn't go out with our friends without our parents' permission. If we are in danger, we can ask our parents, teachers, or even the police for help.
After all, life is very important. We should learn something about self-protection so that we can protect ourselves well.
How to Keep Safe
Do you know that many dangerous things will happen if we are not careful enough? As a student, knowing how to keep safe is very important.
First, we should obey the traffic rules. When traffic lights are red, we shouldn't cross the road. And we shouldn't ride electric bikes. Second, we shouldn't swim in the river because it's dangerous. We can go swimming with our parents in a swimming pool. Third, we shouldn't tell strangers our ID number or code when we are surfing the internet. What's more, we shouldn't go out with our friends without our parents' permission. If we are in danger, we can ask our parents, teachers, or even the police for help.
After all, life is very important. We should learn something about self-protection so that we can protect ourselves well.
解析
【分析】本题要求以“How to Keep Safe”为题写一篇80～100词的英语短文，需结合表格中交通、游泳、网络安全三个方面的提示，补充合理的中学生自我保护内容，开头已给出。解题思路：首先承接开头，分场景阐述安全注意事项，确保覆盖表格所有要点；其次补充符合实际的安全建议；最后总结强调自我保护的重要性，控制字数，语言简洁准确。
【解析】写作步骤：1. 承接给定开头，先写交通规则：遵守交通规则，红灯时不横穿马路，不骑电动车；2. 再写游泳安全：不在河里游泳，可和家长去游泳池；3. 接着写网络安全：上网时不告诉陌生人身份证号或密码；4. 补充其他安全建议：外出需家长同意，遇危险向家长、老师或警察求助；5. 结尾总结，强调生命重要性，学会自我保护，确保总词数符合要求，语言符合英语表达习惯。
【答案】How to Keep Safe
Do you know that many dangerous things will happen if we are not careful enough? As a student, knowing how to keep safe is very important.
First, we should obey the traffic rules. When traffic lights are red, we shouldn't cross the road. And we shouldn't ride electric bikes. Second, we shouldn't swim in the river because it's dangerous. We can go swimming with our parents in a swimming pool. Third, we shouldn't tell strangers our ID number or code when we are surfing the internet. What's more, we shouldn't go out with our friends without our parents' permission. If we are in danger, we can ask our parents, teachers, or even the police for help.
After all, life is very important. We should learn something about self-protection so that we can protect ourselves well.
【知识点】英语书面表达、安全话题词汇、应用文写作
【点评】本文紧扣主题，全面覆盖表格提示的安全要点，补充了合理的自我保护内容，结构清晰，逻辑连贯，语言准确简洁，符合中学生英语写作要求，适合参赛。
【难度系数】0.6
【解析】写作步骤：1. 承接给定开头，先写交通规则：遵守交通规则，红灯时不横穿马路，不骑电动车；2. 再写游泳安全：不在河里游泳，可和家长去游泳池；3. 接着写网络安全：上网时不告诉陌生人身份证号或密码；4. 补充其他安全建议：外出需家长同意，遇危险向家长、老师或警察求助；5. 结尾总结，强调生命重要性，学会自我保护，确保总词数符合要求，语言符合英语表达习惯。
【答案】How to Keep Safe
Do you know that many dangerous things will happen if we are not careful enough? As a student, knowing how to keep safe is very important.
First, we should obey the traffic rules. When traffic lights are red, we shouldn't cross the road. And we shouldn't ride electric bikes. Second, we shouldn't swim in the river because it's dangerous. We can go swimming with our parents in a swimming pool. Third, we shouldn't tell strangers our ID number or code when we are surfing the internet. What's more, we shouldn't go out with our friends without our parents' permission. If we are in danger, we can ask our parents, teachers, or even the police for help.
After all, life is very important. We should learn something about self-protection so that we can protect ourselves well.
【知识点】英语书面表达、安全话题词汇、应用文写作
【点评】本文紧扣主题，全面覆盖表格提示的安全要点，补充了合理的自我保护内容，结构清晰，逻辑连贯，语言准确简洁，符合中学生英语写作要求，适合参赛。
【难度系数】0.6
