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六、书面表达。（满分20分）
根据以下提示,以"I'm Happy to Help Others"为题,写一篇英语短文。
提示:
1. 过去我将钱花在买衣服和零食上；
2. 老师告诉我们,有很多孩子缺少衣服和食物,也不能上学；
3. 从那以后,我将零花钱捐给一个帮助儿童的组织；
4. 我为能帮助别人而自豪。
要求:
1. 语句通顺,语意连贯；
2. 必须包含所有提示内容,可适当发挥；
3. 80词左右；开头已给出,不计入总词数。
I'm Happy to Help Others
Everyone needs help in life. I used to
根据以下提示,以"I'm Happy to Help Others"为题,写一篇英语短文。
提示:
1. 过去我将钱花在买衣服和零食上；
2. 老师告诉我们,有很多孩子缺少衣服和食物,也不能上学；
3. 从那以后,我将零花钱捐给一个帮助儿童的组织；
4. 我为能帮助别人而自豪。
要求:
1. 语句通顺,语意连贯；
2. 必须包含所有提示内容,可适当发挥；
3. 80词左右；开头已给出,不计入总词数。
I'm Happy to Help Others
Everyone needs help in life. I used to
spend my pocket money on clothes
and snacks, but it often felt like a waste.
One day, our teacher told us that in
some poor areas of the world, many
children lack enough food, warm
clothes, and even the chance to go to
school. Hearing this, I felt deep
sympathy for them and knew I had to do
something.
Since then, I've been donating my
pocket money to a charity that supports
these kids. I hope my small contributions
can make a difference—maybe buy them
a book, a meal, or keep them warm.
This experience has taught me that
helping others brings true happiness. It's
far more meaningful than spending
money on myself.
and snacks, but it often felt like a waste.
One day, our teacher told us that in
some poor areas of the world, many
children lack enough food, warm
clothes, and even the chance to go to
school. Hearing this, I felt deep
sympathy for them and knew I had to do
something.
Since then, I've been donating my
pocket money to a charity that supports
these kids. I hope my small contributions
can make a difference—maybe buy them
a book, a meal, or keep them warm.
This experience has taught me that
helping others brings true happiness. It's
far more meaningful than spending
money on myself.
答案
One possible version:
Everyone needs help in life. I used
to spend my pocket money on clothes
and snacks, but it often felt like a waste.
One day, our teacher told us that in
some poor areas of the world, many
children lack enough food, warm
clothes, and even the chance to go to
school. Hearing this, I felt deep
sympathy for them and knew I had to do
something.
Since then, I've been donating my
pocket money to a charity that supports
these kids. I hope my small contributions
can make a difference—maybe buy them
a book, a meal, or keep them warm.
This experience has taught me that
helping others brings true happiness. It's
far more meaningful than spending
money on myself.
Everyone needs help in life. I used
to spend my pocket money on clothes
and snacks, but it often felt like a waste.
One day, our teacher told us that in
some poor areas of the world, many
children lack enough food, warm
clothes, and even the chance to go to
school. Hearing this, I felt deep
sympathy for them and knew I had to do
something.
Since then, I've been donating my
pocket money to a charity that supports
these kids. I hope my small contributions
can make a difference—maybe buy them
a book, a meal, or keep them warm.
This experience has taught me that
helping others brings true happiness. It's
far more meaningful than spending
money on myself.
解析
【分析】本题要求以“I'm Happy to Help Others”为题写英语短文，需覆盖所有提示内容：过去将零花钱花在衣服和零食上、老师告知有孩子缺衣少食无法上学、之后捐零花钱给儿童组织、为帮助他人自豪，开头已给出，要求80词左右，语句通顺连贯。解题思路：先衔接开头引出过去的消费习惯，再通过老师的话点明帮助他人的契机，接着说明自己的行动，最后表达帮助他人的感受，适当补充细节使内容连贯，控制字数符合要求。
【解析】1. 衔接开头对应提示1：I used to spend my pocket money on clothes and snacks, but I felt it was not meaningful. 2. 对应提示2：One day, our teacher told us that many children in poor areas lack enough clothes, food and even the chance to go to school. 3. 对应提示3：Since then, I have donated my pocket money to a charity that helps these children. 4. 对应提示4：I feel proud to help others and realize helping others brings true happiness. 整体语句通顺，适当发挥，符合80词左右的要求。
【答案】One possible version:
Everyone needs help in life. I used to spend my pocket money on clothes and snacks, but it often felt like a waste. One day, our teacher told us that in some poor areas of the world, many children lack enough food, warm clothes, and even the chance to go to school. Hearing this, I felt deep sympathy for them and knew I had to do something.
Since then, I've been donating my pocket money to a charity that supports these kids. I hope my small contributions can make a difference—maybe buy them a book, a meal, or keep them warm. This experience has taught me that helping others brings true happiness. It's far more meaningful than spending money on myself.
【知识点】英语书面表达、一般过去时、话题写作
【点评】本题为初中英语基础话题写作题，围绕“助人为乐”主题，要求学生整合提示信息完成短文，考查语言组织与话题运用能力，需覆盖所有要点、语句连贯，难度适中，适合巩固写作基础。
【难度系数】0.5
【解析】1. 衔接开头对应提示1：I used to spend my pocket money on clothes and snacks, but I felt it was not meaningful. 2. 对应提示2：One day, our teacher told us that many children in poor areas lack enough clothes, food and even the chance to go to school. 3. 对应提示3：Since then, I have donated my pocket money to a charity that helps these children. 4. 对应提示4：I feel proud to help others and realize helping others brings true happiness. 整体语句通顺，适当发挥，符合80词左右的要求。
【答案】One possible version:
Everyone needs help in life. I used to spend my pocket money on clothes and snacks, but it often felt like a waste. One day, our teacher told us that in some poor areas of the world, many children lack enough food, warm clothes, and even the chance to go to school. Hearing this, I felt deep sympathy for them and knew I had to do something.
Since then, I've been donating my pocket money to a charity that supports these kids. I hope my small contributions can make a difference—maybe buy them a book, a meal, or keep them warm. This experience has taught me that helping others brings true happiness. It's far more meaningful than spending money on myself.
【知识点】英语书面表达、一般过去时、话题写作
【点评】本题为初中英语基础话题写作题，围绕“助人为乐”主题，要求学生整合提示信息完成短文，考查语言组织与话题运用能力，需覆盖所有要点、语句连贯，难度适中，适合巩固写作基础。
【难度系数】0.5
