Ⅶ.书面表达(满分20分)
你校英语专栏正开展以“A Day to Remember”为题的征文活动,请你根据提示问题,用英文写一篇文章,向该专栏投稿,叙述让你印象深刻的一天,并谈谈你的感受。
1. What happened on that day?
2. Why was it a day to remember?
要求:1.语句通顺,字迹工整,语法正确;2.60—80词,可适当发挥。

A Day to Remember

One possible version:
A Day to Remember
Last Saturday was my 13th birthday. It was a day to remember. In the morning, my parents prepared a big birthday cake. In the afternoon, my friends came to my house. We had a party together. We sang songs, ate the delicious cake,and played fun games. I also got many nice gifts.
Why was it special? Because it was my first time to have a party with so many friends. I felt happy and loved. I learnt that sharing joy with others makes life more beautiful.
This day taught me to cherish friends and family. It will stay in my heart forever.

【分析】
写作时需紧扣“A Day to Remember”主题，结合提示的四个维度（When、Activities、Why、Feelings）展开：首先确定具体事件（如生日聚会），明确时间、活动内容，说明难忘的原因，最后表达感受；注意使用一般过去时，语句通顺，控制词数在60-80之间，适当发挥细节让内容更真实。
【解析】
1. 确定主题事件：选择自己的13岁生日作为难忘的一天；
2. 按维度展开：When（上周六）、Activities（父母准备蛋糕，朋友来家聚会，唱歌、吃蛋糕、玩游戏、收礼物）；
3. 说明难忘原因：第一次和众多朋友分享生日，感受到爱；
4. 表达感受：学会珍惜亲友，这一天会留在心中；
5. 检查语法、时态，调整语句连贯，符合词数要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
A Day to Remember
Last Saturday was my 13th birthday. It was a day to remember. In the morning, my parents prepared a big birthday cake. In the afternoon, my friends came to my house. We had a party together. We sang songs, ate the delicious cake,and played fun games. I also got many nice gifts.
Why was it special? Because it was my first time to have a party with so many friends. I felt happy and loved. I learnt that sharing joy with others makes life more beautiful.
This day taught me to cherish friends and family. It will stay in my heart forever.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、记叙文写作
【点评】
文章紧扣主题，涵盖了所有提示要点，内容具体真实，情感自然，语言通顺，时态正确，符合词数要求，是一篇优秀的书面表达范文。
【难度系数】
0.5