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七、书面表达(满分25分)
(2025·苏州月考)中国幅员辽阔,山河壮美。《中国国家地理》杂志评选出"一生必去的50个地方",松花江与玉龙雪山均位列其中。请选择其中一处景观,写一篇英语短文介绍。
▲North-east China; 2,300 kilometres long
写作要求:1. 必须包含所有要点内容,可适当发挥,以使行文连贯;2. 语篇完整,语句通顺,语法正确,书写规范;3. 词数90左右。
(2025·苏州月考)中国幅员辽阔,山河壮美。《中国国家地理》杂志评选出"一生必去的50个地方",松花江与玉龙雪山均位列其中。请选择其中一处景观,写一篇英语短文介绍。
▲North-east China; 2,300 kilometres long
写作要求:1. 必须包含所有要点内容,可适当发挥,以使行文连贯;2. 语篇完整,语句通顺,语法正确,书写规范;3. 词数90左右。
答案
七、One possible version:
The Songhua River, which is 2,300 kilometres long, lies in the north-east of China. It's a place full of charm.
There are large farms along the river where people grow corn. The golden cornfields in autumn are a spectacular view, making the area look like a beautiful painting. It's really interesting to see such a sight.
Protecting the Songhua River is of great importance. We should stop people from littering into the river. Factories should be required to treat their waste properly before discharging it.
In a word, the Songhua River, with its unique beauty and significance, deserves our efforts to protect it so that it can remain a wonderful place for a long time.
The Songhua River, which is 2,300 kilometres long, lies in the north-east of China. It's a place full of charm.
There are large farms along the river where people grow corn. The golden cornfields in autumn are a spectacular view, making the area look like a beautiful painting. It's really interesting to see such a sight.
Protecting the Songhua River is of great importance. We should stop people from littering into the river. Factories should be required to treat their waste properly before discharging it.
In a word, the Songhua River, with its unique beauty and significance, deserves our efforts to protect it so that it can remain a wonderful place for a long time.
解析
【分析】
本题为英语书面表达题，要求从松花江和玉龙雪山中选一处景观介绍，需包含所有给定要点，词数约90。解题思路：1. 确定写作对象（参考答案选松花江）；2. 按“基本信息介绍→特色描述→保护措施”的结构组织内容；3. 适当添加合理细节让行文连贯，确保语法正确、语句通顺。
【解析】
写作步骤：1. 开头点明介绍对象为松花江，说明其地理位置（中国东北）和长度（2300公里）；2. 主体描述松花江沿岸的大农场，补充人们种植玉米的场景，增加秋天玉米田的美景细节丰富内容；3. 结尾提出保护松花江的措施，如禁止乱扔垃圾、工厂处理污水，总结其意义，使文章完整。
【答案】
One possible version:
The Songhua River, which is 2,300 kilometres long, lies in the north-east of China. It's a place full of charm.
There are large farms along the river where people grow corn. The golden cornfields in autumn are a spectacular view, making the area look like a beautiful painting. It's really interesting to see such a sight.
Protecting the Songhua River is of great importance. We should stop people from littering into the river. Factories should be required to treat their waste properly before discharging it.
In a word, the Songhua River, with its unique beauty and significance, deserves our efforts to protect it so that it can remain a wonderful place for a long time.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、要点整合、语句连贯
【点评】
本文紧扣题目要求，完整涵盖所有给定要点，结构清晰、逻辑连贯，适当添加合理细节，语言通顺、语法正确，符合初中英语书面表达的评分标准。
【难度系数】
0.7
本题为英语书面表达题，要求从松花江和玉龙雪山中选一处景观介绍，需包含所有给定要点，词数约90。解题思路：1. 确定写作对象（参考答案选松花江）；2. 按“基本信息介绍→特色描述→保护措施”的结构组织内容；3. 适当添加合理细节让行文连贯，确保语法正确、语句通顺。
【解析】
写作步骤：1. 开头点明介绍对象为松花江，说明其地理位置（中国东北）和长度（2300公里）；2. 主体描述松花江沿岸的大农场，补充人们种植玉米的场景，增加秋天玉米田的美景细节丰富内容；3. 结尾提出保护松花江的措施，如禁止乱扔垃圾、工厂处理污水，总结其意义，使文章完整。
【答案】
One possible version:
The Songhua River, which is 2,300 kilometres long, lies in the north-east of China. It's a place full of charm.
There are large farms along the river where people grow corn. The golden cornfields in autumn are a spectacular view, making the area look like a beautiful painting. It's really interesting to see such a sight.
Protecting the Songhua River is of great importance. We should stop people from littering into the river. Factories should be required to treat their waste properly before discharging it.
In a word, the Songhua River, with its unique beauty and significance, deserves our efforts to protect it so that it can remain a wonderful place for a long time.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、要点整合、语句连贯
【点评】
本文紧扣题目要求，完整涵盖所有给定要点，结构清晰、逻辑连贯，适当添加合理细节，语言通顺、语法正确，符合初中英语书面表达的评分标准。
【难度系数】
0.7
