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四、假如你是李华,你校英语社团计划开展一期以“科技改变生活”为主题的专题活动,现面向全校同学征集稿件。请根据以下写作提示和写作要求,用英语写一篇短文,推荐一项你认为对人们生活影响极大的科技发明。
写作提示:
1. What invention do you want to recommend?
2. How do you use it in daily life?
3. What benefits has it brought to people's lives?
写作要求:
1. 短文应包含以上所有提示信息,可适当发挥;
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称;
3. 词数100左右(文中已给出内容不计入总词数)。
I'm Li Hua. I'd like to recommend
写作提示:
1. What invention do you want to recommend?
2. How do you use it in daily life?
3. What benefits has it brought to people's lives?
写作要求:
1. 短文应包含以上所有提示信息,可适当发挥;
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称;
3. 词数100左右(文中已给出内容不计入总词数)。
I'm Li Hua. I'd like to recommend
答案
the smartphone as the invention that has influenced our lives most.
In my daily life, I use it for almost everything. I study with learning apps, chat with friends through social media, and listen to music to relax. It has become my great helper. The smartphone brings great benefits to us. It allows us to connect with others anytime and anywhere. We can also get information quickly and easily. For example, we can look up new words, read the news, or shop online. It truly makes our lives more convenient and colourful.
In short, the smartphone has changed the way we live, learn and have fun. It is really a wonderful invention!
In my daily life, I use it for almost everything. I study with learning apps, chat with friends through social media, and listen to music to relax. It has become my great helper. The smartphone brings great benefits to us. It allows us to connect with others anytime and anywhere. We can also get information quickly and easily. For example, we can look up new words, read the news, or shop online. It truly makes our lives more convenient and colourful.
In short, the smartphone has changed the way we live, learn and have fun. It is really a wonderful invention!
解析
【分析】
本题为英语应用文写作题，要求围绕“科技改变生活”主题推荐一项影响极大的科技发明，需覆盖三个核心提示：推荐的发明、日常使用场景、带来的益处。解题思路：1. 选择贴近生活且易展开的发明（如智能手机）；2. 结合日常场景说明具体使用方式；3. 阐述该发明对生活的实际益处；4. 控制词数在100左右，避免出现真实姓名和学校，确保语言连贯。
【解析】
首先补全开头，明确推荐智能手机；接着列举日常使用的具体场景：用学习APP辅助学习、通过社交媒体与朋友聊天、听音乐放松；然后说明带来的好处：可随时随地与他人联系、快速便捷获取信息（如查单词、读新闻、网购）；最后总结智能手机改变了生活、学习和娱乐方式，符合所有写作要求。
【答案】
the smartphone as the invention that has influenced our lives most.
In my daily life, I use it for almost everything. I study with learning apps, chat with friends through social media, and listen to music to relax. It has become my great helper. The smartphone brings great benefits to us. It allows us to connect with others anytime and anywhere. We can also get information quickly and easily. For example, we can look up new words, read the news, or shop online. It truly makes our lives more convenient and colourful.
In short, the smartphone has changed the way we live, learn and have fun. It is really a wonderful invention!
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、科技主题英语表达、要点式写作
【点评】
范文紧扣主题，全面覆盖写作提示的所有要点，语言流畅自然，符合词数要求，逻辑清晰，是符合题目要求的优秀范文，适合学生学习参考。
【难度系数】
0.4
本题为英语应用文写作题，要求围绕“科技改变生活”主题推荐一项影响极大的科技发明，需覆盖三个核心提示：推荐的发明、日常使用场景、带来的益处。解题思路：1. 选择贴近生活且易展开的发明（如智能手机）；2. 结合日常场景说明具体使用方式；3. 阐述该发明对生活的实际益处；4. 控制词数在100左右，避免出现真实姓名和学校，确保语言连贯。
【解析】
首先补全开头，明确推荐智能手机；接着列举日常使用的具体场景：用学习APP辅助学习、通过社交媒体与朋友聊天、听音乐放松；然后说明带来的好处：可随时随地与他人联系、快速便捷获取信息（如查单词、读新闻、网购）；最后总结智能手机改变了生活、学习和娱乐方式，符合所有写作要求。
【答案】
the smartphone as the invention that has influenced our lives most.
In my daily life, I use it for almost everything. I study with learning apps, chat with friends through social media, and listen to music to relax. It has become my great helper. The smartphone brings great benefits to us. It allows us to connect with others anytime and anywhere. We can also get information quickly and easily. For example, we can look up new words, read the news, or shop online. It truly makes our lives more convenient and colourful.
In short, the smartphone has changed the way we live, learn and have fun. It is really a wonderful invention!
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、科技主题英语表达、要点式写作
【点评】
范文紧扣主题，全面覆盖写作提示的所有要点，语言流畅自然，符合词数要求，逻辑清晰，是符合题目要求的优秀范文，适合学生学习参考。
【难度系数】
0.4
