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假如你是林涛,你的叔叔有一个农场,请根据所给要点,写一篇英语短文,向你的新同学们介绍一下这个农场。
要点:
1. 农场很大,有许多花和树;
2. 农场里有一所红房子,里面有二十只羊、四十只鸡和一些奶牛;
3. 农场的后面是一个大湖,你能看见一些鸭子和鹅在湖面上。
要求:
1. 短文须包含所给要点提示;
2. 语言流畅、书写规范;
3. 文中不得使用真实姓名、校名;
4. 词数60左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Hello, everyone! My name is Lin Tao.
思路点拨
逐步突破——三步训练法
（一）短语翻译——根据写作要点翻译短语。
1. 一个大农场
2. 许多花和树
3. 一所红房子
4. 二十只羊
5. 黑白相间的
6. 在农场的后面
7. 一些鸭子和鹅
（二）句子翻译——结合（一）中短语和括号内的提示完成句子。
1. 我叔叔有一个大农场。(have)
2. 农场里有许多花和树。(there be)
3. 那些是奶牛。它们是黑白相间的。(those)
4. 在农场后面有一个大湖。(behind)
5. 你能看见一些鸭子和鹅在湖面上。(see)
（三）篇章展示——运用（二）中句子组成语段。
Hello, everyone! My name is Lin Tao.
假如你是林涛,你的叔叔有一个农场,请根据所给要点,写一篇英语短文,向你的新同学们介绍一下这个农场。
要点:
1. 农场很大,有许多花和树;
2. 农场里有一所红房子,里面有二十只羊、四十只鸡和一些奶牛;
3. 农场的后面是一个大湖,你能看见一些鸭子和鹅在湖面上。
要求:
1. 短文须包含所给要点提示;
2. 语言流畅、书写规范;
3. 文中不得使用真实姓名、校名;
4. 词数60左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Hello, everyone! My name is Lin Tao.
My uncle has a big farm. There are many flowers and trees on the farm. There is also a red house. There are twenty sheep and forty chickens. Look! Those are cows. They are black and white. Behind the farm, there is a big lake. You can see some ducks and geese on the lake. I like my uncle's farm.
思路点拨
逐步突破——三步训练法
（一）短语翻译——根据写作要点翻译短语。
1. 一个大农场
a big farm
2. 许多花和树
many flowers and trees
3. 一所红房子
a red house
4. 二十只羊
twenty sheep
5. 黑白相间的
black and white
6. 在农场的后面
behind the farm
7. 一些鸭子和鹅
some ducks and geese
（二）句子翻译——结合（一）中短语和括号内的提示完成句子。
1. 我叔叔有一个大农场。(have)
My uncle has a big farm.
2. 农场里有许多花和树。(there be)
There are many flowers and trees on the farm.
3. 那些是奶牛。它们是黑白相间的。(those)
Those are cows. They are black and white.
4. 在农场后面有一个大湖。(behind)
Behind the farm, there is a big lake.
5. 你能看见一些鸭子和鹅在湖面上。(see)
You can see some ducks and geese on the lake.
（三）篇章展示——运用（二）中句子组成语段。
Hello, everyone! My name is Lin Tao.
My uncle has a big farm.
There are many flowers and trees on the farm. There is also a red house. There are twenty sheep and forty chickens. Look! Those are cows. They are black and white. Behind the farm, there is a big lake. You can see some ducks and geese on the lake.
I like my uncle's farm.
There are many flowers and trees on the farm. There is also a red house. There are twenty sheep and forty chickens. Look! Those are cows. They are black and white. Behind the farm, there is a big lake. You can see some ducks and geese on the lake.
I like my uncle's farm.
答案
（一）
1. a big farm
2. many flowers and trees
3. a red house
4. twenty sheep
5. black and white
6. behind the farm
7. some ducks and geese
（二）
1. My uncle has a big farm.
2. There are many flowers and trees on the farm.
3. Those are cows. They are black and white.
4. Behind the farm, there is a big lake.
5. You can see some ducks and geese on the lake.
（三）
My uncle has a big farm.
There are many flowers and trees on the farm. There is also a red house. There are twenty sheep and forty chickens. Look! Those are cows. They are black and white. Behind the farm, there is a big lake. You can see some ducks and geese on the lake.
I like my uncle's farm.
1. a big farm
2. many flowers and trees
3. a red house
4. twenty sheep
5. black and white
6. behind the farm
7. some ducks and geese
（二）
1. My uncle has a big farm.
2. There are many flowers and trees on the farm.
3. Those are cows. They are black and white.
4. Behind the farm, there is a big lake.
5. You can see some ducks and geese on the lake.
（三）
My uncle has a big farm.
There are many flowers and trees on the farm. There is also a red house. There are twenty sheep and forty chickens. Look! Those are cows. They are black and white. Behind the farm, there is a big lake. You can see some ducks and geese on the lake.
I like my uncle's farm.
解析
【分析】
首先审题明确写作要求：体裁为记叙文，人称用第三人称，时态采用一般现在时，开头已给出，需覆盖三个要点：农场大且有花树、农场内红房子及其中的动物、农场后有湖和鸭鹅，还要运用给定句型（there be、those are等），词数约60。解题分三步：1. 翻译核心短语，对应各要点的关键表达；2. 结合提示完成句子翻译，注意时态、主谓一致和名词复数；3. 将句子按写作框架（开头引出农场→中间详细介绍→结尾表达感受）组合成连贯短文，确保要点齐全、语言流畅。
【解析】
1. 短语翻译：根据中文含义和英语固定表达，准确翻译各短语，如“在农场里”用on the farm，“在湖面上”用on the lake；2. 句子翻译：遵循一般现在时规则，注意主谓一致（My uncle用has）、there be句型就近原则、名词复数（sheep单复数同形，chicken表“鸡”时复数为chickens）；3. 篇章组合：将翻译好的句子按逻辑排序，补充连接词使内容连贯，最后加上结尾表达感受，符合词数要求。
【答案】
Hello, everyone! My name is Lin Tao. My uncle has a big farm. There are many flowers and trees on the farm. There is also a red house. There are twenty sheep and forty chickens. Look! Those are cows. They are black and white. Behind the farm, there is a big lake. You can see some ducks and geese on the lake. I like my uncle's farm.
【知识点】
英语记叙文写作、一般现在时、there be句型
【点评】
本题为初中英语基础写作题，围绕介绍农场展开，考察学生对核心短语、基础句型的掌握，以及搭建写作框架、整合写作要点的能力，要求语言流畅、符合时态和人称规范，是提升学生英语写作能力的典型题目。
【难度系数】
0.7
首先审题明确写作要求：体裁为记叙文，人称用第三人称，时态采用一般现在时，开头已给出，需覆盖三个要点：农场大且有花树、农场内红房子及其中的动物、农场后有湖和鸭鹅，还要运用给定句型（there be、those are等），词数约60。解题分三步：1. 翻译核心短语，对应各要点的关键表达；2. 结合提示完成句子翻译，注意时态、主谓一致和名词复数；3. 将句子按写作框架（开头引出农场→中间详细介绍→结尾表达感受）组合成连贯短文，确保要点齐全、语言流畅。
【解析】
1. 短语翻译：根据中文含义和英语固定表达，准确翻译各短语，如“在农场里”用on the farm，“在湖面上”用on the lake；2. 句子翻译：遵循一般现在时规则，注意主谓一致（My uncle用has）、there be句型就近原则、名词复数（sheep单复数同形，chicken表“鸡”时复数为chickens）；3. 篇章组合：将翻译好的句子按逻辑排序，补充连接词使内容连贯，最后加上结尾表达感受，符合词数要求。
【答案】
Hello, everyone! My name is Lin Tao. My uncle has a big farm. There are many flowers and trees on the farm. There is also a red house. There are twenty sheep and forty chickens. Look! Those are cows. They are black and white. Behind the farm, there is a big lake. You can see some ducks and geese on the lake. I like my uncle's farm.
【知识点】
英语记叙文写作、一般现在时、there be句型
【点评】
本题为初中英语基础写作题，围绕介绍农场展开，考察学生对核心短语、基础句型的掌握，以及搭建写作框架、整合写作要点的能力，要求语言流畅、符合时态和人称规范，是提升学生英语写作能力的典型题目。
【难度系数】
0.7
